http://browse.deviantart.com/contests/2008/comicsteam/writers/?order=9 deviantART RSS for boost:popular in:contests/2008/comicsteam/writers en-us Copyright 2013, deviantART.com Sat, 25 May 2013 19:27:16 PDT deviantART.com http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/tech/rss http://st.deviantart.net/minish/widgets/apple-touch-icon-precomposed.png http://haleyon.deviantart.com/art/City-of-White-Green-Brown-98662931 http://haleyon.deviantart.com/art/City-of-White-Green-Brown-98662931 Mon, 22 Sep 2008 05:46:11 PDT City of White-Green-Brown nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers Haleyon http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/h/a/haleyon.jpg?2 Copyright 2008-2013 ~Haleyon http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/ .

[link]

I hope I did this one well

And good luck to us all.

[Note:]

Mommy! Mommy! I-I-I-I got 2nd place! I'm anxious to see it drawn! Many thanks! This means so much for me!

Anticipating you pencillers works, I'm sleeping happy yet unsettled. Please send me a note/ state in your comment if you draw this piece. I wanna list 'em also. ]]> .

[link]

I hope I did this one well

And good luck to us all.

[Note:]

Mommy! Mommy! I-I-I-I got 2nd place! I'm anxious to see it drawn! Many thanks! This means so much for me!

Anticipating you pencillers works, I'm sleeping happy yet unsettled. Please send me a note/ state in your comment if you draw this piece. I wanna list 'em also.

]]> http://princessgwyneth.deviantart.com/art/Pwns-99189550 http://princessgwyneth.deviantart.com/art/Pwns-99189550 Sat, 27 Sep 2008 23:07:03 PDT Pwns nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers PrincessGwyneth http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/r/princessgwyneth.gif?1 Copyright 2008-2013 ~PrincessGwyneth [link]

This is the second comic script I've written. Genre is comedy. Let me know if you like it!


ETA: This script ended up coming in third in the contest! OMG! I'm honestly really surprised. And very thankful and excited. Thank you!!! ]]> [link]

This is the second comic script I've written. Genre is comedy. Let me know if you like it!


ETA: This script ended up coming in third in the contest! OMG! I'm honestly really surprised. And very thankful and excited. Thank you!!!

]]> http://elljhay.deviantart.com/art/activityno-1-99752860 http://elljhay.deviantart.com/art/activityno-1-99752860 Sat, 04 Oct 2008 01:49:29 PDT activityno.1 nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers elljhay http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/default.gif Copyright 2008-2013 ~elljhay

]]> http://psowill.deviantart.com/art/Cat-scratch-Writers-preview-99034193 http://psowill.deviantart.com/art/Cat-scratch-Writers-preview-99034193 Fri, 26 Sep 2008 10:40:13 PDT Cat scratch Writers preview. nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers PSOWILL http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/s/psowill.gif?13 Copyright 2008-2013 ~PSOWILL @psowill my second entry into the Da writers contest. I wanted to redo and old story i did for my character Cat Scratch. [link]

Link to the contest. [link]

This is sort of a wip cause I might change the pages cause it looks like it's too big for 2 pages.

any help is appreciated.

DOWN LOAD TO READ. ]]> my second entry into the Da writers contest. I wanted to redo and old story i did for my character Cat Scratch. [link]

Link to the contest. [link]

This is sort of a wip cause I might change the pages cause it looks like it's too big for 2 pages.

any help is appreciated.

DOWN LOAD TO READ.

]]> http://psowill.deviantart.com/art/Bloodwork-DA-contest-98893708 http://psowill.deviantart.com/art/Bloodwork-DA-contest-98893708 Wed, 24 Sep 2008 17:19:01 PDT Bloodwork DA contest. adult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers PSOWILL http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/s/psowill.gif?13 Copyright 2008-2013 ~PSOWILL @psowill [link] I'm sure most of you know who Bloodwork is by now.

Bloodwork: [link]

the enemies are three Guys wear black outfits from head to toe and Motorcycle helmets. yeah Yeah I know. ]]> [link] I'm sure most of you know who Bloodwork is by now.

Bloodwork: [link]

the enemies are three Guys wear black outfits from head to toe and Motorcycle helmets. yeah Yeah I know.

]]> http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Stylistic-Analysis-98092097 http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Stylistic-Analysis-98092097 Mon, 15 Sep 2008 23:04:09 PDT Stylistic Analysis nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers fear-is-spreading http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/e/fear-is-spreading.png?8 Copyright 2008-2013 ~fear-is-spreading http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/ Comic Team Contest submission

Genre - Comedy

First of quite a few... I have three written so far.
I'm used to writing 12-24 pages in less than a month, so this is really not a huge feat for me.

I have the script as a downloadable PDF file, and also as a long preview image, in JPG form.

Choose whichever you're more comfortable with.

-note on formatting-
I've adopted using the CeltX comic book format... I just find it's easier for letting artists understand the exact ideas. Hope this doesn't hurt my chances.

Characters and story © Aaron Shively 2008 ]]> Comic Team Contest submission

Genre - Comedy

First of quite a few... I have three written so far.
I'm used to writing 12-24 pages in less than a month, so this is really not a huge feat for me.

I have the script as a downloadable PDF file, and also as a long preview image, in JPG form.

Choose whichever you're more comfortable with.

-note on formatting-
I've adopted using the CeltX comic book format... I just find it's easier for letting artists understand the exact ideas. Hope this doesn't hurt my chances.

Characters and story © Aaron Shively 2008

]]> http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Say-it-with-sound-100586693 http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Say-it-with-sound-100586693 Sun, 12 Oct 2008 21:02:29 PDT Say it with sound nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers fear-is-spreading http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/e/fear-is-spreading.png?8 Copyright 2008-2013 ~fear-is-spreading Comics team: Writers
Contest entry.

This is free writing. I haven't even reread it yet.

Hope I made it in time.

-Aaron ]]>
Introduction:
I don't like writing introductions, I want my writing to speak for itself and have the artist interpret it any way they wish. But this deserves something more.
Think of this as an experiment. To try to make the viewer FEEL the musical notes.
It needs some stray lines coming from the instruments. Distortion of the picture. The louder it's supposed to be, the more distorted and crazy the images should be.

To the colorist: Try to remember color theory when working with moods. Every panel's colors does not have to match up, MOOD IS THE MOST IMPORTANT THING. Just a thought, but a more painted style would benefi ]]> Comics team: Writers
Contest entry.

This is free writing. I haven't even reread it yet.

Hope I made it in time.

-Aaron ]]> http://kanemotri.deviantart.com/art/Kollision-Course-Script-100551685 http://kanemotri.deviantart.com/art/Kollision-Course-Script-100551685 Sun, 12 Oct 2008 13:48:24 PDT Kollision Course Script nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers KaneMotri http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/k/a/kanemotri.jpg?1 Copyright 2008-2013 ~KaneMotri this one (how very exciting...)

I'd love to hear your thoughts on it. ]]>
- by Dominik Jaworski

Dear artists. Before you start reading the info of what to put on the page, I thought I'd explain my intentions, so that interpreting the script will be slightly easier.

The overall concept of the story is to comment on (or state the observation of) the circular nature of life, how there seems to be a certain pattern that repeats itself over and over, even if the actors and the scenery changes. The current financial crisis, is one of the examples of such repeating of past events, but I bet you can find events even more fitting.
Due to this, there should be certain prevalence of round elements through ]]> this one (how very exciting...)

I'd love to hear your thoughts on it. ]]> http://chroniczen.deviantart.com/art/Unmentionables-99556377 http://chroniczen.deviantart.com/art/Unmentionables-99556377 Wed, 01 Oct 2008 18:11:48 PDT Unmentionables nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers ChronicZen http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/h/chroniczen.png?1 Copyright 2008-2013 ~ChronicZen
http://news.deviantart.com/article/57471/ ]]>
by

David Kirlin

PAGE ONE (four panels)

Panel 1 (small): Close in of blood running off the edge of a sidewalk.

Panel 2 (black & white): Two people fighting. One is a skinny college age man, ALLEN, wearing a sweat jacket. The other is an attractive black woman, LUNA, of equal age, wearing casual clothing. They are in a family room, obviously Allen's from all the geeky junk.

Panel 3: ALLEN is laying on the sidewalk, the blood coming out of the back of his head. He looks as if he fell off his bicycle. He is alive and stirring.

Panel 4 (black & white): LUNA is heading out the door, yelling behind her. ALLEN stands beside ]]>
http://news.deviantart.com/article/57471/ ]]> http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Myth-No-Words-99042978 http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Myth-No-Words-99042978 Fri, 26 Sep 2008 12:28:12 PDT Myth-No Words nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers fear-is-spreading http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/e/fear-is-spreading.png?8 Copyright 2008-2013 ~fear-is-spreading Comics Team - Writers Contest Submission

Genre - Action/Fantasy.

Words would have only ruined it.

I tried to put as much description into the panels as I possibly could, without putting layout descriptions. I don't like laying the comic out when another artist is going to be doing the penciling. I like to give them the freedom to do with my script what they will.

Of Men and Monsters is a large, large, large graphic novel project. This isn't from the story, exactly, but it's based on the characters and events.

All characters and events shown, written, or in any other way presented are © Aaron Shively and Errant Studios. ]]> Comics Team - Writers Contest Submission

Genre - Action/Fantasy.

Words would have only ruined it.

I tried to put as much description into the panels as I possibly could, without putting layout descriptions. I don't like laying the comic out when another artist is going to be doing the penciling. I like to give them the freedom to do with my script what they will.

Of Men and Monsters is a large, large, large graphic novel project. This isn't from the story, exactly, but it's based on the characters and events.

All characters and events shown, written, or in any other way presented are © Aaron Shively and Errant Studios.

]]> http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Bugs-98907192 http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Bugs-98907192 Wed, 24 Sep 2008 20:19:40 PDT Bugs nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers fear-is-spreading http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/e/fear-is-spreading.png?8 Copyright 2008-2013 ~fear-is-spreading Comics Team - Writers submission

Genre - Horror

Thought I'd go another way with these.
I'm trying to show as much range as I possibly can with all my entries.

I think this is my sixth entry... or... something like that. I still have a few more ideas.

Funny fact, it takes me longer to stitch these damn things together than it does for me to write and format them. lol.

All specific characters and situations © Aaron Shively/Errant Studios ]]> Comics Team - Writers submission

Genre - Horror

Thought I'd go another way with these.
I'm trying to show as much range as I possibly can with all my entries.

I think this is my sixth entry... or... something like that. I still have a few more ideas.

Funny fact, it takes me longer to stitch these damn things together than it does for me to write and format them. lol.

All specific characters and situations © Aaron Shively/Errant Studios

]]> http://zebman.deviantart.com/art/After-battle-98867819 http://zebman.deviantart.com/art/After-battle-98867819 Wed, 24 Sep 2008 12:14:20 PDT After battle nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers Zebman http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/z/e/zebman.jpg Copyright 2008-2013 ~Zebman
At last! I came out with an idea (one that, by the way, I consider a very cool one) for the writer's phase of the comic team contest by (here's the link [link])
The only thing that is not specified is the time during which it takes place, but I think it suits any age, only that it does says that there are rifles in it so I guess that anything during (or after) WWI is ok.

......
Well, I made it with celtx and now it's a .pdf file, so I guess you'll have to download it (because I don't know how to do place it like everyone else X.x, however, info on the subject is most appreciated ). ]]>
At last! I came out with an idea (one that, by the way, I consider a very cool one) for the writer's phase of the comic team contest by (here's the link [link])
The only thing that is not specified is the time during which it takes place, but I think it suits any age, only that it does says that there are rifles in it so I guess that anything during (or after) WWI is ok.

......
Well, I made it with celtx and now it's a .pdf file, so I guess you'll have to download it (because I don't know how to do place it like everyone else X.x, however, info on the subject is most appreciated ).

]]> http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Erzaehlung-des-Blitzkrieg-98821842 http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/Erzaehlung-des-Blitzkrieg-98821842 Tue, 23 Sep 2008 20:53:17 PDT Erzaehlung des Blitzkrieg nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers fear-is-spreading http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/e/fear-is-spreading.png?8 Copyright 2008-2013 ~fear-is-spreading Comics team - Writers submission.

Genre - Drama/Fantasy

This is another 'based on' but unlike other inspired by works, mine is inspired by my own stories. lol.

Aeternus:Resurgence is an in progress graphic novel handling the mental aspects of an infinite life.
It has one of the most intricate backstories and settings that I know of.

This is part of one of the main character's backstory. Jacob is a leading man, he's known for his strength in battle, he is your great super hero from old. And he's also bisexual (though he prefers men) here, in a homosexual relationship with a man named Lawrence.

In today's comic world, it's hard to find a main stream male bisexual/gay superhero that isn't being used for comedy, or to front a completely bisexual/gay oriented storyline.

His sexual preference is NOT the baseline for the story. It's just a simple aspect of his character.

I think that's enough ranting

All characters and situations © Aaron Shively/Errant Studios ]]> Comics team - Writers submission.

Genre - Drama/Fantasy

This is another 'based on' but unlike other inspired by works, mine is inspired by my own stories. lol.

Aeternus:Resurgence is an in progress graphic novel handling the mental aspects of an infinite life.
It has one of the most intricate backstories and settings that I know of.

This is part of one of the main character's backstory. Jacob is a leading man, he's known for his strength in battle, he is your great super hero from old. And he's also bisexual (though he prefers men) here, in a homosexual relationship with a man named Lawrence.

In today's comic world, it's hard to find a main stream male bisexual/gay superhero that isn't being used for comedy, or to front a completely bisexual/gay oriented storyline.

His sexual preference is NOT the baseline for the story. It's just a simple aspect of his character.

I think that's enough ranting

All characters and situations © Aaron Shively/Errant Studios

]]> http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/JWP-98507287 http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/JWP-98507287 Sat, 20 Sep 2008 15:35:03 PDT JWP nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers fear-is-spreading http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/e/fear-is-spreading.png?8 Copyright 2008-2013 ~fear-is-spreading Submission to Comic team contest - Writers

Genre - Comedy

Downloadable PDF file, as well as the Jpeg image.

This is based on my in-progress graphic novel called
"FEAR: Next Stop Blasphemy"
I just took out the main character, FEAR, and popped in an overly righteous Jehovah's witness.
Have fun.

If this offends anyone

call 1-800-DNT-CARE

yay for alphanumeric typing!

-Aaron ]]> Submission to Comic team contest - Writers

Genre - Comedy

Downloadable PDF file, as well as the Jpeg image.

This is based on my in-progress graphic novel called
"FEAR: Next Stop Blasphemy"
I just took out the main character, FEAR, and popped in an overly righteous Jehovah's witness.
Have fun.

If this offends anyone

call 1-800-DNT-CARE

yay for alphanumeric typing!

-Aaron

]]> http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-6-80854901 http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-6-80854901 Sun, 23 Mar 2008 23:20:29 PDT stronger than steel 6 adult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers doomboy911 http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doomboy911.gif Copyright 2008-2013 ~doomboy911 ===========================================================
as I joined the crowd of people entering the subway half awake just imagining what I might be able to accomplish with my abilities bending steel girders lifting hundreds of pounds above my head saving people as I boarded the subway thinking what the others might be able to do justin has fire dustin with his weird rain abilities chris who knows one minute he does this the next he can do that as I got deep in my thoughts about being a hero I almost missed my chance to be a real hero when the man next to me put a gun to my head
                  jon ]]> http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/No-Room-For-Gel-Lo-98828095 http://fear-is-spreading.deviantart.com/art/No-Room-For-Gel-Lo-98828095 Tue, 23 Sep 2008 23:01:05 PDT No Room For Gel-Lo adult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers fear-is-spreading http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/e/fear-is-spreading.png?8 Copyright 2008-2013 ~fear-is-spreading Comics Team - Writer submission.

Genre - Horror/action/comedy

This is for a much larger series that the studio is doing, called Necromanced.

Basic archetype of comic books, starts out with revenge, but it advances in a new direction.

anyway... again, as with the jehovah's submission, if anyone starts a'bitchin about things...

I'll a'bitch back.
:-D

All characters and situations... except for John Stamos © Aaron Shively/Errant Studios ]]> Comics Team - Writer submission.

Genre - Horror/action/comedy

This is for a much larger series that the studio is doing, called Necromanced.

Basic archetype of comic books, starts out with revenge, but it advances in a new direction.

anyway... again, as with the jehovah's submission, if anyone starts a'bitchin about things...

I'll a'bitch back.
:-D

All characters and situations... except for John Stamos © Aaron Shively/Errant Studios

]]> http://abstractpagan.deviantart.com/art/Comic-Team-Contest-Rebirth-98447084 http://abstractpagan.deviantart.com/art/Comic-Team-Contest-Rebirth-98447084 Sat, 20 Sep 2008 01:58:03 PDT Comic Team Contest- Rebirth nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers AbstractPagan http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/b/abstractpagan.jpg?2 Copyright 2008-2013 ~AbstractPagan
(c) Abstract Inkwerks 2008. ]]>
(c) Abstract Inkwerks 2008.

]]> http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-8-89701604 http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-8-89701604 Tue, 24 Jun 2008 21:21:56 PDT stronger than steel part 8 adult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers doomboy911 http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doomboy911.gif Copyright 2008-2013 ~doomboy911 http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
chris bouvier
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"what to call myself windy turbo tornado no those are terrible " I said to myself as I walked down the alleyway wondering what my hero name could be " air head no that won't due hurricane no what should it be" I went into a open lot hoping not to run into trouble. I have terrible luck.
janet
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I was rushing home texting to my moms complaints. I was so late I tripped and fell on my phone "ah @#$%" my purse flew off hitting a blonde headed guy in the back of the head he turned around it wa ]]> http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-7-84502978 http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-7-84502978 Fri, 02 May 2008 04:25:21 PDT stronger than steel 7 adult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers doomboy911 http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doomboy911.gif Copyright 2008-2013 ~doomboy911 hows this red ]]> Ryan lawcheko

I ran up the dimly lit stairs chasing after the mugger.I heard him panting loudly I had him now. as I made it to the top he stood there with a smirk on his face he kicked me again in my side knocking me down a few stairs I saw him turn around and walk into the crowd one person moved in front of him then another and another. I stood up the pain flying threw me. I started searching threw the crowd
I knew even though he was unarmed he had to be put down he could hurt someone  but where was he?.
the crowd seemed to thicken every moment I  wasted he could be anywhere now .
I let out a sigh I soon started to ]]> hows this red

]]> http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-5-77671700 http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-5-77671700 Sun, 17 Feb 2008 14:21:50 PST stronger than steel part 5 nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers doomboy911 http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doomboy911.gif Copyright 2008-2013 ~doomboy911 well we need only one thing if we want to do this right. (justin)
whats that superpowers. (chris)
yes that but the most important thing is that we have teamwork
without we'll be dead in no time. (justin)
why do we need to work together I means as far as I can tell we have all we need
street smarts, [points to justin]
strategic mind, [nods to dustin]
and muscles. [slams fist to chest]
thats all a team should really need right (ryan)
hey what about me! (chris)
what all you can do is jump high thats not even much of a power I bet anyone of us could do it with some training (ryan)
]]> http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-4-71691428 http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-4-71691428 Sat, 08 Dec 2007 20:31:20 PST stronger than steel part 4 nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers doomboy911 http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doomboy911.gif Copyright 2007-2013 ~doomboy911 http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/ http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-3-70448203 http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-3-70448203 Thu, 22 Nov 2007 22:42:33 PST stronger than steel part 3 nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers doomboy911 http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doomboy911.gif Copyright 2007-2013 ~doomboy911 updated ]]> dustin godeska
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"aw great 1 to 4 were  down by three  and there two best hitters are up the only way we can't lose is if the game end" he muttered "yeah we need some rain" said Tim  "yeah we need some rain now" thought dustin suddenly a loud thunder is heard followed by the patter of rain as it quickly picked up "game called on acount of rain" yelled the ump

ryan lawcheko
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[later] " weird day isn't it"  said ryan
"yeah" said chris and dustin at the same time "I wish this rain would just stop" ]]> updated ]]> http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-2-68709951 http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-2-68709951 Wed, 31 Oct 2007 19:46:11 PDT stronger than steel 2 adult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers doomboy911 http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doomboy911.gif Copyright 2007-2013 ~doomboy911 http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/ update I have just done some editing ]]>
chris bouvier
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your out  the ump yelled thats three  "wait to go buovier" yelled the coach "nice jump" "uhh thanks coach" he said with a bit of confusion how the heck did I do that he thought

ryan lawcheko
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"next batting ryan lawcheko" the announcer said  a medium height teenager stepped up to bat "here goes nothing" he muttered to himself remembering his lack of muscle in  the ball went flying down a curve ball he intentionally missed it knowing he couldn't hit it the catcher throws the pitcher ]]> update I have just done some editing ]]> http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-1-68314382 http://doomboy911.deviantart.com/art/stronger-than-steel-part-1-68314382 Fri, 26 Oct 2007 20:50:58 PDT stronger than steel part 1 nonadult contests/2008/comicsteam/writers doomboy911 http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doomboy911.gif Copyright 2007-2013 ~doomboy911 http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/
edit alright its not in script form but I just want to enter it and whoever I work with I can shift it to script for ]]>          Part I

How to do it, how to do it  He wondered as he stood on the asteroid pacing back and forth ,the pressures of space not bothering him "Time beats space..." He muttered as he saw the meteor head down to a mostly blue planet except for the immensely large green super continent "No that won't do," he said "Rewind!" He yelled for no one to hear but himself  the meteor winding back as he watched it replay it headed past him  , "...pause."  Hmm hmm hmm  He wondered. "How to stop the crash while keeping my powers. No matter what it must be possible... hmm... play!" The  meteor started back up again and heads clo ]]>
edit alright its not in script form but I just want to enter it and whoever I work with I can shift it to script for ]]>