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Love

Fri, 14 Sep 2007 11:03:55 PDT

This is mostly my weird thoughts about one of the most complicated emotions on the planet.
Its in fault for so much hurt, and so much joy.
BTW I throughly believe in love, its a beautiful thing, and I love my wife so very much. Shes everything to me.

In Three Acts

Wed, 08 Jul 2009 10:52:00 PDT

Maybe I'm trying too hard.

You: I don't get it.
Me: [link]

Brave

Sun, 20 Jan 2008 10:05:54 PST

"Being brave sometimes makes me feel colder, I wish there was someone to prevent me from becoming a cynic."

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Sorry, this poem was supposed to be optimistic.

Stock:

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It's the sister of a nude one.

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Great thanks to `Drunken-Splice and ^fllnthblnk for the support.

Emo....

Sat, 30 Jul 2005 18:44:51 PDT

Gah...don't know where this came from. Too much emo music for t3h Muffin, methinks.

Suicide

Tue, 30 Sep 2003 10:51:55 PDT

this is just a statement about suicide

tragedies - collab.

Thu, 05 Feb 2009 20:15:00 PST

^{collab with the heart-achingly gorgeous Amertie. (she is here.)
she is so, so talented, and amazes and inspires me so much. it was an honor to collaborate with her.

and it is completely official - we had a "title fail" moment. haha~
perhaps we're just indecisive, but titles can be a major pain to conjure, hee.

and now i'm off to sleep. which is a lie. because i won't fall asleep for at least four more hours, stupid insomnia. but i'll try.

~~love you all (:}

the speed addict

Fri, 14 Mar 2003 19:30:06 PST

This poem is now almost fine.

Binding Threads

Wed, 25 Jul 2007 19:38:08 PDT

I'm guessing dA isn't going to let me do my formatting properly, so I screenshotted the poem in Word and then made an image of it in Photoshop. Hopefully it's readable in one form or the other. Apologies if it's not.

I was a bit inspired by ~sarjan's poem Unconscious Debate, mostly because I liked the shape of the poem and thought it had been a long while since I'd written a concrete poem. This one started simply but quickly spiraled into something much larger than I thought it would be.

The three spires are intended to represent atheism, theism, and agnosticism, respectively. Hopefully everything else in the poem is self-evident.

Please, please let me know what you think.

edit: Uh, and thanks to whoever properly categorized it. I couldn't find any other place where I could display the image as my poem, so I just went with Visual Poetry... (Honestly, I'm kind of surprised there's no 'Concrete Poetry' form choice, but alas...)

Sex

Wed, 28 Jul 2004 01:18:22 PDT

sex

heart song.

Sun, 28 Dec 2008 14:45:31 PST

this seems to be an in-between poem,
something that's half my style now
and half of what it seems to be changing to be.

i'm happy how it turned out, but i'm horribly self conscious about this piece and style.

i would love suggestions.

p.s. thank you amber for helping me edit.

Dementia

Wed, 11 Mar 2009 17:45:20 PDT

A cubism poem!

the science of silence.

Thu, 07 May 2009 21:52:06 PDT

_{i wish i could have fallen asleep in your arms; there is really no place i would rather be.

blue is coming soon.

xx

i am still in shock--a daily deviation?! you have got to be kidding me! thank you SO much! to everyone who faves/comments/watches and of course to ^LadyLincoln for featuring me. please read my journal that discusses my "deal" with all you guys: [link]}

you can't feel through fabric

Thu, 18 Dec 2008 10:25:24 PST

first poem in a few years

♥

This Pain

Sun, 28 Dec 2003 08:36:34 PST

Description? Pain...

UPDATE: I wrote this poem so many years ago when I was 16. I'm now 23 years of age and it did pay off to wait it out. I'm thankful for all the comments you all have left me for this. It's always good to be able to relate something. It gives you hope.

Sunday in the Kitchen

Fri, 15 May 2009 11:29:02 PDT

holyshitballs.
A DAILY DEVIATION!
thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou.

this poem is old, and sloppy.

Let's Hate

Tue, 21 Oct 2008 15:40:43 PDT

^{Let's Hate Until Something Better Happens.

For ~chikchiky200 since I owe her my life for buying me i Luv Halloween. This is her favorite pairing ever. I don't really like the pairing, but I actually kinda like this. If you can guess what it is, you epically win. Well, you can probably find out by going to her page and searching closely but whatever.

I still owe her another one. It probably won't be as good as this one.

Edit: Fine you guys got me. It's DracoxHarry. Iknowright.
Hope ya like, Alex.}

Depressing Poems

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 13:27:53 PDT

More depressing poems I came up with last night while I was thinking.

when i look in the mirror.

Thu, 26 Mar 2009 18:22:08 PDT

_{when i look in the mirror, this is what i see.}

my writing keeps getting personal.

i honestly wish it wouldn't.

and uh.
i'm sorry. if none of this makes sense to you.
and i'm sorry if you hate this.

but whatever, yeah?

ocean burning.

Sat, 14 Mar 2009 06:22:58 PDT

Feeling Adventurous?

Wed, 21 May 2008 17:50:08 PDT

yummy.

so i'm crazy...
he's magical.

Just To Let You Know...

Tue, 12 Oct 2004 11:59:11 PDT

This picture came about and it's just quite face smackingly bold, C'mon check this girl out, she is the bomb--> * kristyvictoria

So anyway the poem, Yep, It's back to the typographical phase, I love 'em. This one it just came about at the same time of seeing the picture and listening to some good old Musical influence, as well as the obvious ideas behinde the piece.

blowing bubbles.

Fri, 30 Jan 2009 22:18:45 PST

_{i don't know.

writing this felt... different.

suggestions?}

...

Mon, 28 Jul 2008 15:57:34 PDT

^{Are you really that ((desperate)) blind?

-Finch}

A Beautiful Thought

Thu, 22 May 2008 20:58:25 PDT

^{It's a beautiful thought.

I'd like to give a thank you to everyone who favorited and commented. I'd also like to give a big fat ha-ha in the face of the ones who think I don't deserve it.

Oh, look. You're famous now, you jealous bitch.

~Finch}

falling.

Sun, 01 Feb 2009 14:06:36 PST

i wasn't going to submit this.

but is forcing me to.

hey guys.

all of you should go give her a hug.

i'll be forever grateful to you if you do.

my dictionary definition

Fri, 25 Dec 2009 15:03:30 PST

is synonymous with unoriginal, ugly, unworthy, and sad.

The Things People Love

Sun, 13 Apr 2008 13:35:02 PDT

^{Tell me I'm wrong and I'll call you a liar.

~Finch

Edit: Thank you so much for all the favorites and comments. I got home from school to see I was on the front page! It was really amazing and I would have nothing without all you guys! Thank you so much and I really, really love you all, I mean it!}

A Pretty Girls Suicide

Mon, 28 Apr 2003 17:06:37 PDT

A Pretty Girls Suicide

Meaning~ Just that the beautiful people aren't what everyone should want to be. Sometimes it is better just to be you and me.

The storm

Mon, 20 Jul 2009 12:30:31 PDT

EDIT:

Wow, wow, wow!!! I cannot believe this! Thank you soooo much, Lili, for suggesting this poem. No, not for suggesting it - for being such a tremendous support, for being so appreciative, for simply being constantly there. You cannot begin to imagine how happy this makes me, it's such a rare, rare happiness for a writer to get such a personal piece of writing featured. . And my deepest gratitude to Jay as well for assessing this piece highly enough to feature. You are simply awesome! And also humblest thanks for all the help and assistance you've given me.
Oh my, I still cannot believe this even though I knew it was suggested. I didn't think it would be good enough to show to the community but I am so grateful for having the chance to share my feelings and visions with more people.

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A submission for the "Cloud" contest of *DailyLitDeviations

Huge apologies to Rebecca for being such a slacker with the collaboration, but I really had to get this poem off my chest. It's been draining my inspiration for months now.

The initial idea comes from an afternoon when my family and I were collecting potatoes and then it suddenly went dark and stormy and started to pour. This summer there were torrential rains in Bulgaria, which devastated a large part of the crops.
This poem attempts to express some of the frustration farmers feel when nature itself destroys the fruits of the hard work. And hard it is, i can tell you.
It also began as a challenge, I wanted to see if I can paint a realistic rain scene without using the words "rain", "cloud", "field", and at the same time achieving a symphonic effect. Please tell me if I've succeeded or not.
This poem is very close to me but I don't feel it is finished so any critique and feedback is welcomed.

The Breath of God

Sat, 30 Jun 2007 10:35:18 PDT

Fight Club

Mon, 29 May 2006 12:02:29 PDT

A collection of quotes from Tyler Durden to create a poem based on Tyler's facinating veiw upon life.

I..

Tue, 08 Dec 2009 23:59:51 PST

RAWR

Edit:

Thanks so much everyone, please believe I'm so thankful for all of your feedback. It means a lot after my hectic week to see people actually enjoy a poem of mine <3 ~

The People We Hate

Thu, 28 Aug 2008 18:44:16 PDT

^{Thinking about it.}

road rash and autopsy

Mon, 21 Sep 2009 15:44:46 PDT

maybe scraps.
really raw, i know.
excuse the irony.

of storms and sky

Mon, 12 Jan 2009 10:43:22 PST

i let the storm soak through until it ran down in rivers down my skin. never leave, i ached, the world is ours in moments like this. then the wind made promises it wouldn't keep in my ears.
and the storm was no more, only me.

Suicide

Sat, 09 Aug 2003 14:55:22 PDT

*sigh* Whatever they did to DA, it wasn't good. 10th attempt at uploading this? 11th?
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Thanks to Bobby Gaylor

My Winter

Fri, 11 Jul 2008 12:53:13 PDT

Oh, wow! I should really check my DA more often...A Daily Deviation! I never, ever, saw that coming! Thanks, everyone, for all of the kind comments, I'm sorry it's taken me so long to check my account. Also, thank you to for suggesting the poem for a DD!

Thank you so much to for featuring this poem!

tHE cYBerPuNK aNThEM

Sun, 10 Apr 2005 16:19:58 PDT

Cyberpunk: a genre of dystopian science-fiction based on the works of William Gibson and others, and on films such as Blade Runner and The Matrix.

This is part of my series of cyber poetry that seeks to question the nature of cyberspace and our relationship with our computers.

The amazing image is by photographer Steve Pyke [link]

Smile

Wed, 31 Oct 2007 23:03:51 PDT

Smile.

How to kill a writer

Mon, 09 Nov 2009 18:13:29 PST

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For the members, does the "Doctor" part is the source of a second degree reading of the whole poem? What if there wasn't this part in the poem?

I

Tue, 02 Oct 2007 07:31:47 PDT

Sated

Tue, 08 Jun 2004 13:28:02 PDT

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah

Note to Self

Wed, 14 Jan 2009 14:10:11 PST

^{Self vs. Self. Round one. Fight!}

Computer

Sat, 08 Mar 2003 00:27:13 PST

An experiment into existentialism and relationships.

A computer attains consciousness, and finds an error in a poetry file called "Man Loves Woman". It's nature compels to find it and repair it, it begins an exploration into human relationships and the nature of love.

It has no internet connection, and so references it's own files (particularly other poetry files) to try and solve the puzzle before it...

Full view it so the text opens up a bit. I used to have font size tags all over it, but dA currently doesn't allow them. Perhaps in the near future I can resubmit this one with great HTML...

This was a lot of fun, and it has never been shown anywhere else but right here at DeviantArt.

Thank you very much for checking it out!

bored

Sat, 08 Feb 2003 07:56:40 PST

bored

ELEVEN O'CLOCK

Sat, 17 Oct 2009 10:21:21 PDT

going in scraps.

i feel quiet now.

When Day Dies

Sun, 02 Dec 2007 15:33:27 PST

I dont know anymore.

an expirement with formatting.

Insanity

Sat, 13 Jan 2007 09:58:26 PST

That was strangly fun to write.

12. Insanity, for the challenge.

napoleon at seven

Sat, 08 Apr 2006 02:56:16 PDT

a whiff of grapeshot.

Heavy and Medic Fifty Themes

Wed, 23 Dec 2009 01:01:20 PST

SO GUESS WHAT I'VE BEEN OBSESSING OVER FOR THE PAST WEEK AND A HALF huh it seems so much longer than that, usually it takes a while for me to start writing fanfiction

So, anyways, I was like HEY I BET IT'D BE FUN TO DO ONE OF THOSE FIFTY THEME ONE SENTENCE CHALLENGE THINGIES

so i did one
and it was fun like I thought it'd be

used the delta set, if anyone cares

man, i'm such a wimp, i cried writing the very last one emoooooo i need sleep

jesus i started this at like seven in the evening it's four am now oh god whyyyyy

also, yay first fanfiction and first gay i've posted on devart

ALSO, WARNING, CONTAINS GAY, IMPLIED SEX, STRONG LANGUAGE, VIOLENCE, NAZIS, COMMIES, and SANDVICHES

SANVICHES, BITCHES
Sleep? Sleep is for leetle babies!

winter footnotes

Fri, 11 Dec 2009 23:26:34 PST

update June 2,2010
first place???!?!?!?!?
[link]

this hurt really badly to type.
sorry if I have been inattentive-
my neck is injured and I can't sit at the computer for long.

The Vampire and His Servant I

Sun, 23 Nov 2008 18:51:35 PST

THERE ARE MANY PARTS TO THIS POEM SERIES, SO BE SURE TO READ THEM ALL!!! >_<

THIS IS AN UPDATED VERSION OF THE SAME POEM THAT I SUBMITTED A FEW DAYS AGO. ^_^ THERE WERE SOME MISTAKES IN IT, SO I FIXED THEM AND RESUBMITTED IT.

This is a poem I wrote about a vampire and his... um... servant... thing... ;
...Yes, they are both guys...

Tell me what you think about the poem. I would like to hear feedback from you all. ^_^

I'm kind of into Gothic Poetry right now, so I tried to make a little Gothic poem, but I think I failed... ;

Oh well... I like the visuals that it gives me. ^_^

2nd Part- [link]
3rd Part- [link]
4th Part- [link]
5th Part- [link]
6th Part- [link]
7th Part- [link]
8th Part- [link]
9th Part- [link]

i cannot feel it anymore

Mon, 26 Oct 2009 17:59:54 PDT

i swear i can't, i swear i'm almost over it entirely.

block of words, it's how it has to be.

Control.

Thu, 16 Oct 2008 08:02:29 PDT

^{Edit: I bet you guys have absolutely no idea what this is about.}

Macrophobia

Wed, 15 Nov 2006 16:37:26 PST

If you knew my old work, you might not get this.

It Feels Good to Love

Fri, 22 Aug 2008 16:22:35 PDT

^{Dance, fucker, dance.

-Finch}

exclaim

Thu, 30 Sep 2004 21:05:23 PDT

i love punctuation . . . i often wished that it was tangible because i would love to be able to put it to use . . . .

another older piece [10.1.03] and i have it titled "exclaim" only because it wouldn't let my ! stand alone

sending big thanks out there to *breathheld for the wonderful advice

scrap

Thu, 08 Apr 2004 11:57:07 PDT

There was a stray scrap of paper on the top of one of my notebooks from where I tore a sheet of paper for some reason or another. Bored in math class, I carefully tore the scrap off, and just started scribbling down random ideas. Eventually a theme developed, and I managed to miraculously end the poem at the tip of the scrap paper. Turned it in as one of the required two to three poems for a poetry class I was in at the time, and the professor loved the whole concept. What can I say? Weird things happen when I get bored.