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Meeting Her End

Sun, 23 May 2010 23:18:42 PDT

A story. Let me know what you think. I might have more to say about it at some point, but it's late.

A Pocket Full of Sky

Sun, 19 Dec 2010 14:19:07 PST

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Dogs Of War

Tue, 23 Nov 2010 23:28:26 PST

"For if the sun breed maggots in a dead dog, being a god kissing carrion... ~ Hamlet, Act II - Scene II by William Shakespeare

"And Caesar's spirit, raging for revenge,
With Ate by his side come hot from hell,
Shall in these confines with a monarch's voice
Cry "Havoc!" and let slip the dogs of war,
That this foul deed shall smell above the earth
With carrion men, groaning for burial." ~ Julius Caesar, Act III, Scene I by William Shakespeare

Some people don't know, don't know what is wrong
so they're knee-deep, knee-deep in sorrow... ~ Knee Deep by CKY

Disclaimer: this is a work of fiction based on my own extensive research on the current US conflicts in Iraq and Afghanistan. Any resemblance to real persons or events is coincidental.

the bit about the dead dog just came into my mind - flash of inspiration you might say... this piece grew from there.
this has sucked a lot of time away from my NaNoWriMo writing! but, i don't really mind. I enjoyed working on this, and I think it came out well, although i know i haven't quite hammered out all the kinks yet. especially going to be fine-tuning the formatting...

Feedback Questions:
Does the repetition work? Is it distracting/boring?

Is the transition of Ryan's memories as he remembers more and more believable? Is it too slow/fast?

Is it clear that Ryan's moods and anxiety stem from Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder?
I deliberately did not mention this in the text and I don't want to add it in unless it is really unclear.

I wanted to leave it open-ended as to which combat zone my characters were in [Iraq/Afghanistan]. Is the piece effective, or would it have more impact if their location was clearly one or the other?

Are any scenes or dialogues unclear/confusing? Which ones and why? Suggestions to improve them?

Is the minimal character building for Dodger and Stevens effective?
Should I add similar segments for Michaels and Keller?

more to come, as i think of them...

Questions, constructive crit, and general comments are very helpful, as always!
Esp grateful to any OIF/OEF Vets who would be willing to share insight.[i.e. tell me just how full of BS i really am! ]

Links of Interest:
Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder
Amputees Return to Active Duty
Real life Marine Staff Sergeant Brandon Miller [paragraph 9] an instructor at the Marine Corps Mountain Warfare Training Center
Real life Marine Sergeant Brandon Lee Miller honored here [mid page, 1st photo @ left]
Lone Survivor: An Eyewitness Account of Operation Redwing by Marcus Luttrell

Food Fight

Sun, 09 Jan 2011 18:52:34 PST

Yaaaay! I'm so glad to finally have 100 llamas because now I can feel justified in FINALLY posting this! Now, here's the big secret: A while back, I collaborated with , I wrote a story, he illustrated it. Not sure how to stick the illustrations into the story, so I'll just post them as well afterwards.

Oh, if you aren't already watching , why not? You're only missing out on one of the best artists in this community...actually, you could just say he's a great artist period, but I don't want to embarrass him with too much effusive praise XD

This contains bursting, so stop reading before the end if you don't like that. You have been warned!

Aftermath

Wed, 25 May 2011 12:50:13 PDT

_{taboo
1 : forbidden to profane use or contact because of what are held to be dangerous supernatural powers
2 a : banned on grounds of morality or taste
b : banned as constituting a risk

deviant
1 : deviating especially from an accepted norm

[link]

my entry at 3,997 words. stick with it, i know it's a lot of words.

well, i think that the question i'm trying to ask here is; which taboo is worse? the socially acceptable one of famial abuse, and the supression of desire? or the taboo of incest and rape? do you think to loss of innocence and the subversion is more terrible than the actual rape? what about Amélie and François (out of curiousity, how old do you think they are?)? do you hate him for his actions, do you hate her for her weakness, and do you think ultimately it was the parents that caused this inevitability [in the words of Philip Larkin; They fuck you up, your mum and dad] and the ending? does it work? i guess the question i'm trying to ask is; do the shattering events of the present destroy or cheapen the happy events of the past?

please, i'd love to know.

this was incredibly difficult to write and i still bare my teeth on reading certain passages. so bearing that in mind, please, please comment. if you comment on nothing else of my work, i don't mind. i spent days and days and strange hours on this. comments in general would just be really nice.

{end epic artist comment}}

The Silo Complex

Sat, 18 Dec 2010 19:57:18 PST

this is based on the dream i had last night, except i was the one seeing men and women made of black smoke, and they were more of trying to cross into the past instead of take glimpses.
i woke up after it was done and just sat in bed with my eyes open for 2 hours because it was so freaky
but i knew i had to write about it, some of my best work comes from dreams.

REVISTITED 7/12/12: I've always liked The Silo Complex, and I'm always interested in hearing what others have to say about it.

7/27/12: A DD? HOLY SHIT. Here's a big thank you to *monstroooo!

--> ALSO: There's a very high chance that there won't be more of this story, but I can't say it's an absolute no at the same time. I ended this right where my dream did, and I'm content with leaving it at that.

mentioned here at #WritersInk: [link]

featured at: [link]

Thief!Denmark x Police!Reader - Unexpected Truth

Fri, 24 Aug 2012 12:40:40 PDT

Ok first off, you dont wanna tell you how many times I spelled 'thief' wrong in this story xD (Thank GOTT for spell-check )

I'm not really a huge fan of Denmark but he fitted in so well with the ideas I HAD to use him! (plus I love his drinking habits as much as Luddy's~)

I do not own Hetalia or the picture

You (~~and your handcuffs~~~) belong to Denny however~

(Speaking of Denny's I wanna go to that place sometime, I think it's as good as IHOP so im a bit curious~)

Mono.

Wed, 09 May 2012 09:33:16 PDT

I haven't been this happy with a finished product in a very long time. Feel free to rip this into pieces and tell me what you like and don't like. I want to make it better if I can.

Origin: This weekend I was derping around the mall and paying for an Otep shirt when I noticed the store was giving away free band stickers. And if it's free, it's for me. One was of the new Cattle Decapitation album cover, Monolith of Inhumanity. I looked at it, and wondered, how would we get to this situation? How could a monolith end the world? Thus, Mono. was born. No, this didn't end with the town ripping off their flesh as they turned into gorillas, but I still gave it a Layla-twist at the end.

I also printed this one off and showed it to my mom. About halfway through I got a weird look out of her, though in my defense, I haven't called it a peanut or weiner for a long time.

Enjoy. All feedback appreciated greatly.

EDIT 20/05/12: My second DLD! I'm over the moon happy! featured here --> [link]

Also mentioned here: [link]

featured again: [link]

EDIT 2/7/2013: WHAT? I MEAN.....WHAT? A DD? IS THIS RIGHT? AM I OKAY? Wow....I am actually speechless! Here's the first of thank-yous to `Kneeling-Glory and ^NicSwaner who are both very awesome people, and thank you to everyone who takes the time to read this as well! Now, time to pour myself a cup of coffee and be shocked some more

mentioned here: [link]

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_{and it seems to me this apathy
kills the life and honesty
it will deepen industry}

First

Sun, 11 Dec 2011 22:19:28 PST

Several years after the events of the TV series, Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash have a discussion about painful events in the past, what the future holds, and self-realization and the nature of destiny.

Also, I guess I should point out that an illustration of the pegasus original character Alabaster from this story is here: [link]

EDIT 12 Dec. 2011: Added a preview image, like a boss. So long, boring scrolling wall of text!

EDIT AGAIN 13 Dec. 2011: Based on feedback received, the story has undergone some revision. It's nothing too hugely story-changing, but it fixes (or attempts to, at least) a couple of issues that have been recurrently pointed out to me. Thanks for providing feedback, everyone who has! It's welcomed and appreciated. I'm ready to let the story as it is now stand as the final version, but further comments and feedback are still very appreciated, they're a large part of the basis for improving my skills for future projects. Thanks again!

Revenge [Sollux Captor]

Sun, 20 May 2012 04:17:32 PDT

Just a little drabble. Came to my mind when I was feeling depressed and lonely.

Writing is like the only thing I can do, without you know, Getting trouble with it later. Like OH YOU USED A BASE FOR THAT or sth.

I just wanted to submit it.

Sollux Captor/Dying!Reader

Got the picture from Zerochan.net

Sollux does not belong to me

Angels with Dirty Faces

Sun, 03 Jul 2011 08:06:09 PDT

Written for the Private Eye Contest

Quite an odd take on the contest rules, I fear.

I welcome feedback, but can't edit until the contest is over. No idea what I'll do with the piece after that, anyway. :/

The title is from a real Noir (like what this is not) Movie released in 1938, and starring James Cagney and Humphrey Bogart. It doesn't have much to do with the story, but I couldn't think of another title.

Word count 4,401

Male stripper in labor

Sun, 13 Jun 2010 09:53:12 PDT

WARNING: mpreg, graphic scenes, nc-17

The Cow

Sat, 18 Feb 2012 13:56:47 PST

A busty young woman is led into a life of sexual slavery - as a cow.

The asterisk (*) will lead elsewhere.

Mature only.

Comments welcome.

Bunny's Diary

Mon, 29 Oct 2012 12:48:53 PDT

Something I wrote for [link] October Prompt #29. Something you shouldn't have heard...

*EDIT* OMG. I got a DD! 0_0 OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMG. Thank you to the people who nominated me! Holy cow on a barbecue....

Lifetime Supply

Mon, 09 May 2011 16:42:21 PDT

The details behind this idea are best left undisclosed, but let's just say that it came from an offer for a lifetime supply of cream filling. I liked the notion, but had a hard time forming into a substantial story. As such, this is little more than a plotless vehicle to get the idea out of my head as messily as possible.

This tale should cater to those who like the idea of expansion before an audience, force-feeding, and the 'splodies. Dang, who would want to read that?

Judy Loves Cake

Sun, 15 Aug 2010 14:03:28 PDT

Meh, just an old story that I thought I'd submit. It's short so maybe it's less "repetetive" and "mediocre."

Also, it wold be nice if people commented with something other than "MORE" or complaints that I'm a slow writer. I do have real life concerns that take priority over this sort of thing. If you're incapable of saying anything except MOAR, then you could at least give me some llamas and then maybe I'll post something more interesting! I WANT 100 LLAMAS! I must have them!

Martha's Last Straw

Fri, 31 Aug 2012 13:09:14 PDT

A short one that was somewhat inspired by an episode of Maury. It's definitely another dark one, so beware all the venture to read further.

Punks thought :PunkEngland:

Fri, 28 Oct 2011 08:15:03 PDT

Why I write so much about England? ù.ù
(Because he's cool, hot, handsome and he needs love!)
However, this was a request from , hope I did it has you meant!
It's the first time I write something like this... do you think it needs warning?

I had to research about raves and punks. I don't want to offend anyone: if I totally wrote wrong about punks thought, please don't kill me, just tell it and I'll write it here!

In this challenge ---> [link] It has the number 52. Anarchy.

Like this? I take requests: [link]

Wendy

Thu, 04 Mar 2010 01:11:42 PST

An old story I wrote long ago. It's different than my usual style, meant as an homage to a writer called The Admirer.

Katy - Part II

Tue, 05 Jul 2011 15:19:04 PDT

See part one for all the description you might ask for, and then some.

Lucy 2

Wed, 23 May 2012 00:26:20 PDT

People keep asking to read a conclusion for the story of Lucy at [link] This is a continuation that I wrote years ago but then forgot to post. I hope you enjoy it.

What does it take to break?

Mon, 19 Nov 2012 10:05:05 PST

Pic not mine, PruCan story. Enjoy

Post-Pregnancy Pepper

Sun, 09 Jan 2011 19:12:10 PST

Just because I know some joker will complain about the outcome in Food Fight, here's a second, gentler story that I've been sitting on for a while. I hope it pleases.

Chance Encounter

Sun, 19 Dec 2010 14:25:11 PST

No clue where this really came from. Sometimes I start writing and it just veers off into weird directions. Oh well! Felt like I ought to post something since it's been so difficult to get anything new down on paper recently.

Morgan (Redone) Part 1

Fri, 08 Feb 2013 20:55:33 PST

As I said above, this story idea isn't mine. Not entirely. In the original story ([link]) Morgan's mother does do a 180 in regards to her daughter's weight and the people at school do keep giving her food, but she thinks nothing of it and never reflects on how her life has changed so drastically in so short a time. There's also significant writing flaws and plotholes (like the narrator talking to her once, then walking away, then talking to her again and suddenly they're dating?) that I excised by tightening the focus to just Morgan becoming the center of attention at home and school and reveling in it.

I am promising 99% that there will be a sequel, hopefully maybe I can get it written over the next three days. Things will really get out of hand in that.

Katy

Tue, 05 Jul 2011 15:14:59 PDT

Here's another fantastically fattening tale from the way-back machine. If I were ranking my stories from favorite to least, this would sit somewhere in the middle. I like the scene at the end of the story where it describes the half-ton Katy getting to her feet. It's an example of another sub-strata of fat fetishism that I enjoy - the struggle of poundage.

I was walking in a local park the other day, and was fortunate enough to happen upon a group of women and children playing kick ball. Three of the women were all heavy-set (200 to 300 pounds), but one of them was over 400 if she weighed an ounce. She got in a good enough kick to make it to second base, and I was transfixed. The sight of all that flesh lurching hither and yon was utterly hypnotic and, by the time she made the base, I'd have been right at home drooling beside one of Pavlov's dogs. That sprint must have worn her out because when the next kick sent her to third, she barely managed a trot and they got her out. She waddled straight to her lawn chair, sat down, wiped her forehead, and pulled a snack from the bag beside her. Now that's my kind of woman.

On a different note -- I have spent some time in the south, and it actually agreed with me. Culturally, it seems to be a portion of the U.S. that's maligned for being "redneck" or "country", but I greatly enjoyed the lack of pretense and the "down home" atmosphere. It's also where I laid eyes on some of the fattest women I've ever seen, so there's that to like too. In the smaller towns, those fat women weren't treated with derision or ridicule; they were just ordinary folk who obviously liked to eat.

I was at a small diner one afternoon when a slender twig of a man staggered in, outfitted with a neck and back brace, and using a crutch. His face was bruised, and he looked like he'd been in a car wreck or on the losing end of one helluva fight. Right behind him, steadying him as he walked, was a copious specimen of femininity who must have weighed over 600 pounds. They made their way to a table and, after they got seated, a man at the bar turned and said, "Now Joe...I keep tellin' ya'...when you're doin' it, you have GOT to be the one on top!" The whole place broke out into laughter, including the man and woman, who returned fire with a friendly jape or two of their own. That's how things were down there. So if you wonder why stories like "Katy" and even the stalled "H.E.L.G.A." tale feature folks with drawls, it's because I have an affinity for them, and the areas from which they come.

Whew...this description's gotten long. That's what happens when waxing sentimental.

School Sissy Fantasy

Mon, 28 Feb 2011 18:16:04 PST

This is not some attempt at a Pulitzer, or to make some earth shattering literary statement. Nope. If you are looking for deep characterization or nuanced subplots, move on. This tale is not for you.

This is what I call One-Handed Reading. It is an exploration of my fantasies involving crossdressing. Sometimes it is sweet, sometimes it is sexual. And while many of them involve teen-aged characters, they are merely manifestations of my own psyche, glimpses of my deepest fantasies. I would never condone anything like this happening in real life.

I wrote this particular one-handed story five or six years ago just for myself (2005-6). No one has seen this one. It has never been posted before.

It was written as a one sided conversation between a nameless antagonist and school-aged boy.The cause for punishment is never stated. Nor is the school boy's age ever given.

In my mind, and that of the story's new readers, these things can be whatever fits your mood upon that reading.

Should you need a reason or specific antagonist, add the following as the third paragraph:

"I warned you to stop playing pranks on me. You may have thought setting off a remote control stink bomb in my closet was going to be funny, but you didn't count on me finding it and moving it to yours, instead. It is going to take weeks to get the smell out of your room, let alone your clothes. And don't think you're off the hook, my pet. Oh, no! As your step-mother it behooves me to correct your behavior."

The only other changes from the original are the addition of the very last line and spelling corrections. (Originally many of the words were spelled phonetically so the text-to-speech program I had could read it to me! ::wink:

If you enjoyed this one-handed read, let me know. I might post others.

Donna's Heaven

Thu, 07 Jul 2011 17:24:51 PDT

Heres another tale from the archives, and one that many have told me they enjoyed. Im a huge fan of literature so, when I measure it against short stories by true authors Ive read, its just a trifle. However, none of those men or women wrote about a womans journey into the outskirts of fatness, so it has some worth in that regard. I received one comment in response to a previous story posting, where I gave a description than included an assessment of my writing abilities it said, It'd have been better to say nothing at all than to claim you aren't a writer. Perhaps thats true, but it aint my style. If Im to err, then Id rather it be on the side of openness and expression, rather than avoidance or silence. It was that spirit that caused me to type out these tales in the first place, giving voice to a desire that I felt deserving of time and attention. But when using words to describe whats in my head, I often feel like Im using a hatchet when I really need a scalpel. When Im drawing, I dont feel quite that blunt, for whatever reason.

While I have written stories (and done drawings) that extend far beyond the reach of nature, I have the deepest appreciate for those tales and images that could be true, yet stretch things as far as possibleand this is one of those. Theres no sorcery, suspension of the laws of physics, or abandonment of physiological limitations here; its just a tale of a glutton, her lover, and a proprietor named Kay who take things to the extreme. And just so you know, I am happy that stories like this one have entertained and inspired others, and contributed to the scope of weight-gain related work thats a really cool thing to hear. I just think that the highest standards have yet to be metthough its not for lack of trying.

Force Feeding

Tue, 03 May 2011 13:38:39 PDT

A nice idea that I'm surprised I hadn't thought of sooner. I tried to resist making her go "Pop!", as I don't like ending a story that way.

Enjoy.

Insatiable

Tue, 02 Oct 2012 04:56:21 PDT

I've been busy with a lot of real life things and have had scant time to devote to writing smut. It takes the perfect cocktail of loneliness and insomnia to crank something like this out. Lucky (or unlucky, as it were) for you all, tonight was one such night.

I wrote and edited this in about two hours, and tried to go extreme in every aspect except for narrative. I suppose the lack of plot is extreme in its own way. I don't think anyone who typically reads these type of stories does it to be an intellectual.

I had a very vivid picture of how this should go down from start to finish, so hopefully that showed in the descriptions. If not oh, well. Maybe someone will draw a picture. Thanks for reading!

Home For The Holidays

Wed, 28 Dec 2011 20:20:44 PST

Bet you didn't see this one coming! Ha, well, there you go, it's still technically 2011, so I did get something done this year.

Standard WG story, nothing to write home about here.

This should really be called "Home For the Holidays - Part 1", as there should be more to come. However, we all know that I can be a little (*cough*) unreliable when it comes to writing followups. So let's be cautious and pretend like the next instalment may or may not appear in due course!

One thing that would help along the process of getting the next instalment done would be a boatload of comments on this one. I love comments. Comments make me all warm and fuzzy inside. Also, you know, it's Christmas, so give me a comment

Mandy TG

Sun, 17 Apr 2011 13:18:51 PDT

Closet TG

Laurie Gets Her Way

Wed, 28 Nov 2012 00:24:53 PST

This is NOT the next chapter of Alice. Instead, it's a little look into the future, in this short story about Laurie and Frank in the future. Look, they're adults!

I hope you like this little trip into the fuuuuuture
Let me know what you think.

Jean Therapy

Thu, 12 Jul 2012 01:04:38 PDT

"Jean Therapy" was inspired by a popular cereal commercial from 2007. In it, a teenaged girl shimmies into her forty-something Mothers old pants which, presumably, no longer fit her. The rest of the commercial centers around the Mother eating the advertised diet cereal in an effort to get her jeans back, while her pert Daughter continually parades past looking nubile and sexy. Of course, by the end of the commercial the Mother has triumphantly reclaimed her jeans while her daughter looks on, dismayed.

I thought it would be fun to explore a Mom's revenge efforts that weren't so subtle and innocuous.

Growth

Tue, 22 Nov 2011 14:03:16 PST

A young woman not quite dealing with her increasing weight. The result pleases her young man, no end.

Another tale not kind. Adult warnings apply.

Note that the asterisk leads to a very final ending, for both of them, in an optional continuation.

Kindly comment.

Alice 27d

Sat, 26 Jan 2013 12:06:52 PST

Wow, this was SUPPOSED to be short, but I think it's the longest chapter yet. Gonna cut down! Anyway, let me know your thoughts... <3 feedback ^__^

Alice 27a

Sat, 26 Jan 2013 11:59:32 PST

Phew, this was SUPPOSED to be a shorter chapter but it still ended up being huge. I really need to do these in smaller chunks. Anyway, here's the next chapter after way too long a hiatus. There are some things different about this one, so I would appreciate any feedback. Let me know what you liked or didn't like so I can improve in the future!

The Wicked Stepfather: Revisited (Part 1)

Wed, 11 Jul 2012 11:37:30 PDT

THE WICKED STEPFATHER: REVISITED

FORWARD

In the "My Story" section, I discuss my voyage of self-discovery and the late, great feeder.com's influence on it. One of the first stories on feeder.com that impacted me greatly was The Stepfather. It is a brilliant piece of stream-of-conscious writing and one of the most purely erotic--political correctness be damned--pieces of feeder fiction ever written. It contains, among other borderline immoral activities: forced-feeding, incest, verbal and psychological abuse, drug abuse, rape and (it can be argued) murder.

If it were a true story, it would be tragic and reprehensible; as a fantasy, however, it appeals to the darker desires of many feeders, feedies and weight-gain enthusiasts.

The main problem with the story, despite its carnal brilliance, is its borderline unreadability. The grammar and spelling start out bad, then quickly denigrate into one long run-on sentence, full of misspellings and random thoughts. These errors diminish the rapid-fire energy that the story builds throughout. For years, I thought about working the story into a bit more polished form, and the above is my effort (circa 2003).

What originally started as a quick correction of spelling and grammar turned into a full-on rewrite. I have kept the original plot and flow intact, but in addition to grammatical formatting, I have also added many of my own embellishments. I hope these additions maintain the spirit of the original, but add to the overall depth of the piece. Its still a bit rough and youll notice some grammatical errors, but I think it works.

I give full credit to the original author (a woman!). Most of the dialogue, plot points and character depth--including the internal struggles of the protagonist--were already in place. I just helped flesh things out a bit (pun intended!).

A WARNING:

This is a VERY DARK story. If the more disturbing elements of the plot (listed above) are offensive to you, even in fantasy form, then I encourage you not to read it. To be honest, even though I am aroused by many of the more sinister aspects of the story, I dont think I couldve written it from scratch myself.

If you like your feeder fiction with a darker edge, then sit back and enjoy. I hope you enjoy revisiting this unique story as much as I did

Tossed Aside

Mon, 25 Oct 2010 03:02:24 PDT

Another little number that came out of nowhere. I suppose this is a fear that every female bisexual has.

Alice 28

Tue, 23 Apr 2013 13:09:10 PDT

This actually isn't what I had planned for the next Chapter of Alice; there's a big long scene with Laurie coming up. Actually, the whole chapter will be very Laurie centric after so many chapters of focus on Jen. But sometimes one is seized by a sudden and inexpliccable urge to write something quick and dirty that's totally unplanned. I've been enamored with the idea of throwing in homages to various weight gain scenes that inspired me when I was younger -- we've already seen bits that reflect the pivotal scenes from European Vacation and Charlotte's Web and there's some good bits that you may recognize coming up -- so this chapter, little more than a vignette, is based on something that you might recognize. I was never a big fan of this particular cartoon because force feeding isn't reeeeally my thing, but somehow I just got a bee in my bonnet about it. So here it is.

Secret Sauce 1

Sun, 22 Apr 2012 14:05:16 PDT

Start of a new series. Updates will come as they come.

Maura Part 1

Sat, 01 Oct 2011 18:27:15 PDT

OK, a while back Mister released a Fat Mix, a collection of unseen art and stories about his usual mega-fat women, mostly unfinished pieces he just hadn't seen fit to post. Among them was a trio of pictures under the title 'Maura,' showing a fat woman bothering her roommate, his explanation that he's building a mind control device (that doesn't seem to be working), her asking for it, him agreeing with a standard 'what can go wrong' and then a cut to a mountain-dwarfing Maura commanding her slaves to feed her everything (while the roommate looks on and says 'Oh').

It was a quick and clean story told with just a couple panels, kind of like 'For sale: baby shoes. Never worn.', and I can see why Saxxon just let the idea stop there.

I, however, saw more potential in it, and after building a few ideas for a cohesive story I asked for his blessing to write my own take. He said yes and I spent all of Thursday and part of Friday banging out over 13,000 words. I've done a proofread with some slight revisions now, and here it is. Most of it, at least.

I had originally intended to make the Invasion of the Body Snatchers theme more prevelant, but as I wrote it my character ended up being too smart, too self-aware of what was happening to make any bad decisions like going to the cops (who turn out to already be converted). This is a problem I run into a lot, my characters intuitively knowing what I know, or thinking over their options too much before taking any action. Usually I have to compensate for this and force them to make bad decisions to keep the drama-level up, but this is just a bit of erotica and I was already ending up with too much plot, not enough weight gain, so I let it slide here.

EDIT: Added a picture that Mr. Saxxon was kind enough to draw depicting the first reunion between Ethan and Maura. I love the angle he chose, emphasizing Maura's imposing physique and character and showing things happening in the edges of the picture as well.

Alice in Feederland Part 2

Wed, 08 May 2013 10:49:43 PDT

And part two, with the requisite tea party scene. I didn't bother naming the Mad Hatter and March Hare because frack it, you all know who they are.

Finally a Man Who's Not Afraid to Commit

Thu, 27 Sep 2012 08:24:47 PDT

Short one that just kind of tumbled out.

As usually their are lifestyle elements that are not for everyone. That being said, this is one of my kinder, gentler stories.

Good Morning Dear...

Mon, 14 Jun 2010 00:04:42 PDT

A fun little story about playing with more bizarre transformation magic. Sexual themes.

Shortened title for DevientART, the full title is "Good Morning Dear, Guess what I've turned you into today?"

Alice in Feederland Part 3

Wed, 08 May 2013 10:52:17 PDT

Final part. I'm sure I could have done a lot more with Alice and the Queen of Hearts, who is always presented as the antagonist in adaptations of this book, but a) I was getting tired of the story by this point and wanted to finish and b) in keeping with the relative illogical of Carroll's work I figured "Why not avoid an actual confrontation and just have things end with no real reason?"

Alice 27c

Sat, 26 Jan 2013 12:03:00 PST

And more of Chapter 27. Again, let me know what you like and what you don't! I always like hearing what people want to see more of.

Overindulged

Fri, 13 Apr 2012 14:10:49 PDT

Enjoy.

Fattened Belly

Wed, 28 Mar 2012 19:59:01 PDT

Part III of Fat Belly

Mature.

In response to one specific, and some general, requests, Louise goes on a diet, just not quite the diet she expects. The results please her lover, and both of them, to the ....

The asterisk displays another look at Louise's future.

Lingerie

Sun, 15 May 2011 09:58:58 PDT

Yet another story originally written as a breast expansion tale, but revised to meet the FA audience of BUF. Unlike Witchery [link] this version worked, I think, so Im posting the fat version here.

Breeders Dorm Part 1

Sat, 12 Jan 2013 20:42:05 PST

Introducing our heroine, establishing the hedonistic life of the Breeders Dorm, and going through Gilda's first pregnancy.

I don't remember when I came up with the 'end game' for this story, hinted at in the final scene with the Shifter Overseer, but it would have been early on in writing this. I'll go into more detail later.

Prologue: [link]
Part 2: [link]

Frog Reapers 1: Scouting

Fri, 09 Mar 2012 11:54:59 PST

If you don't like this type of deviation, send me a message and we can have a pleasant discussion about it. Constructive comments are requested and may determine if I write more in the future.

This is just a short story I wrote to go along with the awesome image ([link]) drew and I won in a contest for . If you didn't read it, it's a transformation story. Yes, there is nudity. No, there isn't sex. The story is rated Adult because of the nudity even though it's harmless.

Characters are copyright their respective owners.

If I win/commission/other-people-commission followup images, I'll write followup stories.

Birth on webcam (Mpreg, NSFW)

Sun, 23 Dec 2012 13:59:37 PST

A massively pregnant male stripper gives his fans a unique show, something they wont forget
This is actually a rp I had some time ago with Lachian Reveler: he agreed about me posting it here. The story was on the old forum, but I haven't posted it here up to now. Sorry for any mistake and for the rushed end

WARNING: NC-17, graphic description of birth, strong language!

The champion gives birth

Mon, 26 Sep 2011 11:08:46 PDT

Cristiano Ronaldo gives birth...

Bethany

Mon, 19 Nov 2012 07:39:52 PST

Just a short vignette I found abandoned on my computer. This was an attempt at writing something a little different. The result is a bit... cloying. So be warned! Though I'd be curious to hear what people think of it.

Getting Hormonal

Fri, 07 Sep 2012 07:52:51 PDT

Written as kind of a trade I guess this one focuses a on pregnancy, but there is plenty of WG as well.

An Hour of Daydream

Fri, 30 Mar 2012 03:35:33 PDT

I challenged myself to write as much as I could within an hour, so here is the result. It's a light bit of fluff depicting a not-so-light bit of fluff that may or may not be heavily inspired by ~InvizQueen.

I hope that this hour frozen in time is found to be enjoyable.

The plan -Chapter 1

Mon, 18 Oct 2010 08:00:27 PDT

Pueden visitar "El plan" en español aqui -> [link]

This history is a colaboration between and me, originally it was started as a little description for the image, but it evolved in a story that we divided on chapters, we worked together to shape and shine it, but the credit is more for than for me ^_ ^

The art as you can see is my creation but the concept history is a team work, we used concepts such as the infamous GB cookies that you surely know about (if you are watcher of my site of course)

The story is divided in some chapters (I don´t say how much) and will be uploaded every monday (1 chapter)

Next chapter -> [link]

The construction worker-pt. 1

Sun, 10 Apr 2011 08:43:51 PDT

It was a boring, hot summer evening. I lay half-asleep on my sofa, when the doorbell rang. I expected it to be my neighbour, coming to return me the drill I had lent him, so neither I asked whos that and opened the door. Ill never forget the amazing scene I saw: standing in front of me there was a young man...well, actually he looked like some sort of giant come from another planet: he stood at some 6 7, impressively built and, above all, he had a fucking gigantic dome of a belly. No doubt he was heavily pregnant: maybe with some alien baby, because I had never seen something so absurdly large, neither in the book of world records: the thing jutting from his torso was about two times and half the size of an ordinary full-term male belly!

What does it take to break? 2

Mon, 19 Nov 2012 13:14:58 PST

Part 2! And how close the snapping is lol PruCan!