http://search.deviantart.com/?q=by:VenomousBane23&section=today deviantART RSS for by:VenomousBane23 en-us Copyright 2009, deviantART.com Mon, 21 Dec 2009 07:15:04 PST deviantART.com http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/tech/rss http://s.deviantart.com/minish/widgets/apple-touch-icon-precomposed.png http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/16117568/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/16117568/ Thu, 27 Dec 2007 01:08:14 PST Cars screech by as people busy themselves with shopping and lazy activities. Families go by shopping for gifts, lovers walk together in their joyous times, and business men run home to be with their families. The buildings are a strech of red and green lights, with the occasional yellowy gleem of headlights or lights inside buildings. As the snow begins to fall it leaves a gentle loveliness always found with the time of year. So jolly and cheerful for most.

But she can't help but feel betrayed by the beauty. All this gorgiousness isn't for her. She has no one to celebrate with. Her family gone, and friends with their families. She has no boyfriend since he cheated and left her. She has no reason for the season, as it were.

She sighes to herself, pulling her jacket tighter around her. Her breath shows before her as she makes her way back toward her apartment. She had nothing special planned as the businesses closed for the celebrations. Perhaps she would go home, have a shower, drink so coco, and go to bed. Merry Christmas, indeed. For once couldn't things go her way? Could she be happy and have her life just be her own again.

The black haired girl shivered, than sneezed.

"Damn it, now I'm getting sick," she groaned cursing her luck.

Suddenly something caught her eye. Car thrown like pillows as the thing crashed through them. That was all she could call the hulking grotesque beast, a thing. Police officers fired upon it but it did no good. Men and women screamed alike as the explosions grew in its wake. She couldn't move, even as the people around her ran for their lifes, or lost them. Just as the beast came, something caught her attention. A glimmer of light reflecting off a cold metal blade. She stared on as a being no taller than her burst from the flames and swung the blade, slicing through the beast's flesh. The being lept over the beast as it swung its claw, tearing through a building like butter. The being turned in midair and swung one final time, cleving the beast's head in two. She was alone as the beast slumped down, beheaded. Being turned away from her, its job done. Just as the being began to leave, the beast's arm came rushing for it. In a split second, no more than a blink, the being had kicked an offiecer's gun into the air, caught it, and fired, hitting a nearby car. The following was a blur of crimson and yellow as the flames over took the beast. It's last sound was a gurgled screech of pain, than silence.

She watched on as the being came through the fire, it seeming to part just for the person. As she stared, the new Christmas lights cast a glow on the person bringing them from the shadows. It was a woman, a beautiful woman with a sword in her left hand and blood staining her torn clothes. Her golden lockes glew on their own, with as if with no aid from the fire. Her crimson eyes burned into her as the woman walks towards her. It was like watching a beautiful angel rise from the depths of hell. Just as she grew entranced by this faux-angel, the woman dropped to the ground.

She felt her legs move on their own. Before she knew it she stood before the angel. Her eyes looked over the woman as the snow grew harder. Even above the sounds of the police sirens, she could hear a soft sound coming from the woman. This swordswoman, who had just slain such a terrible beast was snoring....



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And to answer any questions about why I'm putting up these works in my journal it is simple. I need results and if I put up a journal it is more likely to get views than a deviation. That said, I want results, please! I'm putting these up, this one and the last - and perhaps more - to see which story has the greater results. The last one sucked so I went in another direction this time. So help me! Does this interest anybody? Or is this one shit as well?

Sorry, I forgot to explain in the last one.

And if any wish to know the girl that viewed the battle isn't entirely straight, she'd be bi in fact. I can't write a story strickly about straight characters, sorry. It's a stretch for me to have one be at least interested in men and be the main character. I'm not bashing, just explaining a fault in my creative process. I only know what I know, and can only guess or imagine so far. Like all my works this will have romance between two women, so that's a heads up.

This one will also be unlike most of the ones before it. It will be action pact, mild romance, monster-bashing, guns firing, swords slashing, and all around Western meets Samurai movie meets collection of monster movies meets (insert movie involving homosexual romance). That's the ide... ]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/16022207/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/16022207/ Thu, 20 Dec 2007 23:51:49 PST ZEKKOU!*

A girl sits low, with her black hair covering her face like dark curtains ending a sad show. Her dark green eyes stare on at nothing as it never responds to her needs. Her skin is pale and her body is weak. Her heart is torn and her mind is wrecked. Her clothes are tattered and dirty: a baggy black shirt under an old overcoat, jeans worn with age, and a black woolcap upon her head.

"This world is trash," she whispers staring at a pool of water forming in the curb. Bright car lights flash by her eyes but she doesn't see them. "We all deserve to die."

'Get over yourself, you emo-fuck! Goddamn, you're so whiny!

"Shut up," she whispers holding her head with her dirty hands. "Stay away from me!"

People pass her by not understanding her word, looks, or needs...Or lack of them. She stumbles to her feet, walking tried and weary in the night.

She never loved you. You were a stupid shit to believe she would.

"Why do you ignore my words? Shut up!"

Who would love a worthless excuse of a bastard as you?

"I can't take it!" Her words screamed out into the night. "Ginny!"

Sudden:

A car horn blowing.

A flash of light coming at her fast.

A blink.

A crash.

A smile.

A silence.

Banshou issai kaijin to nasse.*

Light blinds brightly as two eyes flutter open. Rain falls heavily upon the body as people crowd around. A girl stands upon with no help from another person. A smile spreads across her hardened face. The girl stumbles for a moment. Hard to move in such a pained state. But pain could be handled. No, there was no time to wait. She had things to tend to.

" These are desperate times, and desperate measures are called for ," she said in a singsong manner....


Japanese:
*Zekkou = Bite
*Banshou issai kaijin to nasse = Ashes to ashes, dust to dust

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/15636819/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/15636819/ Fri, 23 Nov 2007 14:33:52 PST
As for my life. All has gone on way better than I'd ever hope. My fear has died, my joy still grows, and my creativity has begun to peek. I'm not sure what this'll mean in the long run but things are weird lately. Not bad, not good, just weird.


"In the chim of a bell I created my world - In the blink of an eye I give it life - In the drop of a ball I end the world. And this is how it grows and dies. All at the breath from my lips." - Me


And to show my confusion at this happenings -

Across the Universe by the Beatles

Words are flowing out like endless rain into a paper cup,
They slither wildly as they slip away across the universe
Pools of sorrow, waves of joy are drifting through my opened mind,
Possessing and caressing me.
Jai guru deva om
Nothing's gonna change my world,
Nothing's gonna change my world.
Nothing's gonna change my world.
Nothing's gonna change my world.

Images of broken light which dance before me like a million eyes,
They call me on and on across the universe,
Thoughts meander like a restless wind inside a letter box
They tumble blindly as they make their way
Across the universe
Jai guru deva om
Nothing's gonna change my world,
Nothing's gonna change my world.
Nothing's gonna change my world.
Nothing's gonna change my world.

Sounds of laughter shades of earth are ringing
Through my opened views inciting and inviting me
Limitless undying Love which shines around me like a
million suns, It calls me on and on
Across the universe
Jai guru deva om
Nothing's gonna change my world,
Nothing's gonna change my world.
Nothing's gonna change my world.
Nothing's gonna change my world.

Jai guru deva
Jai guru deva
Jai guru deva
Jai guru deva

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/15495541/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/15495541/ Tue, 13 Nov 2007 16:04:04 PST
And as they say (or sing)


The Show Must Go On - Queen

Empty spaces - what are we living for?

Empty spaces - what are we living for?
Abandoned places - I guess we know the score..
On and on!
Does anybody know what we are looking for?

Another hero - another mindless crime.
Behind the curtain, in the pantomime.
Hold the line!
Does anybody want to take it anymore?
The Show must go on!
The Show must go on!
Inside my heart is breaking,
My make-up may be flaking,
But my smile, still, stays on!

Whatever happens, I'll leave it all to chance.
Another heartache - another failed romance.
On and on!
Does anybody know what we are living for?
I guess i'm learning
I must be warmer now..
I'll soon be turning round the corner now.
Outside the dawn is breaking,
But inside in the dark I'm aching to be free!

The Show must go on!
The Show must go on! Yeah!
Ooh! Inside my heart is breaking!
My make-up may be flaking!
But my smile, still, stays on!
Yeah! oh oh oh

My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies,
Fairy tales of yesterday, will grow but never die,
I can fly, my friends!

The Show must go on! Yeah!
The Show must go on!
I'll face it with a grin!
I'm never giving in!
On with the show!

I'll top the bill!
I'll overkill!
I have to find the will to carry on!
On with the,
On with the show!

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/15471691/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/15471691/ Sun, 11 Nov 2007 23:49:49 PST *In a dark room a lone computer sits upon a table in an empty black room. Upon the screen shows a small scene of Raven Crane sitting on the corner of a raining street.*

Raven: It's going to be lonely.

*Walking up behind her is Ophelia, her wife, holding an umbrella up above her.*

Raven: It is almost time for our farewell.

*She looks up, rain dripping from her hair as she smiles with hurt soft eyes.*

Raven: You'll understand soon.

*She lowers her head as Ophelia holds the umbrella over her. Raven doubles over - no more words uttered- and falls suddenly into a large puddle of water on the road, as the church bells rang. Ophelia sits down next to her and holds her up as Raven's eyes close slowly staring at her, but not seeing her. The screen becomes fuzzy, then the picture turns black showing nothing but simple words.*


Transmission...00:00:00:03
Transmission...00:00:00:02
Transmission...00:00:00:01
Transmission...R is dead.

*Screen goes black and turns off by self.*

Fin

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So look forward to my own stuff from now on!

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-heart- Rae

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/14260988/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/14260988/ Mon, 20 Aug 2007 18:09:57 PDT [link]

I know this is way different from what most people think of me, a ditzy romantic with her head on wrong but this is how I feel. Never be ashamed to show what you feel. Pain or joy, let it flow. To be able to look at your reflection and smile is to truly be happy with what you've become.

I've only got two requests, one for Andie and the other for SouthernlebianCharm and that's all I'm taking. Sorry, but I don't think I can do a good request with this weird feeling inside of me.

Also, please if you are going to favorite my works have the kindness to tell me what you think about them. It's only polite.



"To my father, thank you
To my mother, farwell
And to the children, congratulations" - Neon Genesis Evangelion

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/14120077/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/14120077/ Sat, 11 Aug 2007 13:37:07 PDT [link] - Tenri
The rules:

1. Post these rules
2. Each person tagged must post 8 random (hopefully interesting) facts about themselves
3. Tags should write a journal of these facts
4. At the end of the post 8 more bloggers are tagged and named
5. Go to their page and leave a comment telling them they're tagged

My Random Facts:
1. I'm stalking a fictional character, Bonnie Rockwaller
2. I had a TV hit me on the head when I was little
3. I use to be Buddhist, but am now atheist
4. Burst Angel and Bleach are my favorite animes
5. Most of my characters and stories are influenced from old myths and tales
6. The first movie I ever saw was Dawn of the Dead when I was little
7. I've always been an open lesbian, and am in love
8. My girlfriend nearly ran me over with her car, by accident of course

People I've Tagged:
[link] - Gimmemahfishsticks
[link] - Owenicus
[link] - Megan-Nightfire
[link] - projectNao
[link] - Alexlayer
[link] - Dushmanrus
[link] - Werekatt
[link] - Elephantking89


Now normally I don't do things like that but I decided what the fuck, why not. Oh, I'm still working on the requests, and yet again sorry if I feel a work coming on it goes first hence why I haven't got any done yet. There for, unless I really like you or the idea, it won't likely happen. Sorry :beg:

One's I've got:

- Axel for Andie's sis - Bonnie in cheerleading uniform flaunting her boxum chest over Kim for My Friend and Teammate, GG
- Three-way Fight Between Shego/Kim/Bonnie all Jack/Will/Northingham-style for the Dark King of Elephants

Also, I'm still working on BBR, but not done yet

"Do you want me to get naked and start the revolution? I'll take that as a maybe." - Orange County

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/14078210/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/14078210/ Wed, 08 Aug 2007 16:42:13 PDT 1,553 Deviation Comments
103 Deviant Comments
1,881 Pageviews

Thank you, all for everything you've done - works I've seen, comments on my stuff, favorites, etc.

To those I must recognize most of all

- GimmeMahFishsticks (My first viewer and fan, thank you!)
- Owenicus (My partner in writing, thank you)
- Tenri - (My third viewer, and second request giver)
- projetNAO - (Merci, mon ami)
- DushmanRus (Thank you for coloring Thief V. Cheerleader)
- Megan-Nightfire (Thank you for the great pics to view)
- Alexlayer (Thank you for the comments)
- Elephantking89 (Thanks)
- wolffpc2001 (Thanks for the fav)
- WereKatt (Thanks for the fav, as well)
- inukaglove (Thank you)
- kp101 (Thanks)

I'm working on the requests, but sorry if I feel a work coming on, it goes first hence why I haven't got any done yet. There for, unless I really like you or the idea, it won't likely happen. Sorry :beg:

One's I've got:

- Axel for Andie's sis - Bonnie in cheerleading uniform flaunting her boxum chest over Kim for My Friend and Teammate, GG
- Three-way Fight Between Shego/Kim/Bonnie all Jack/Will/Northingham-style for the Dark King of Elephants

Oh, the puppy's fine and the quiting is doing fine. Thanks again, Andie, for the idea

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/14029851/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/14029851/ Sun, 05 Aug 2007 14:23:25 PDT Ophie just bought me this little black puppy with one blue eye and one brown eye. I named him Sirius, after the star and character And because of this, I've cut back on my smoking. I know it's bad for me, and I should stop so Ophie and me are trying to stop. :hooray:

Then the bad, I suppose:
Not really bad, as sad. Me and my astounding partner in writing, Owen, have reached the nearly the end. It's bizarre to think about, and really saddening but all good things come to an end. So after finishing, proofreading, correcting errors, etc. it will be open for the public. GG, my friend, I will miss our story.

The whatever...Ah, yeah:
I'm working on the requests, but sorry if I feel a work coming on, it goes first hence why I haven't got any done yet. There for, unless I really like you or the idea, it won't likely happen. Sorry :beg:

One's I've got:

- Axel for Andie's sis (working on, sorry)
- Bonnie in cheerleading uniform flaunting her boxum chest over Kim for My Friend and Teammate, GG
- Three-way Fight Between Shego/Kim/Bonnie all Jack/Will/Northingham-style for the Dark King of Pachyderms

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13827081/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13827081/ Wed, 25 Jul 2007 21:07:54 PDT
So, I'm still working on the horror movie KP fan fics, which I'm taking my time on so don't rush me. What time I am not devoting to my GF, goes to my story with Owenicus.

As well have I uploaded Revenge is a Dish Best Served Rare, again. So if you didn't get it the first time around, try it now. But don't expect me to actually continue writing on that story. It's still finished and caput, a few friends just wanted me to upload it.

So, that's that...Oh, I'm taking requests again so give them to me!

One's I've got:

- Axel for Andie's sis (working on, sorry)
- Bonnie, topless and anime for my GF
- Bonnie in cheerleading uniform flaunting her chest against Kim for Owenicus
- Three-way Fight Between Shego/Kim/Bonnie all Jack/Will/Northingham-style for the Dark King of Pachyderms

Also I am sad to admit that I bought a copy of the final Harry Pothead series. What can I say, if I start a series I have to finish it no matter how terrible it gets over time - like Jurassic Park or Star Wars. I must say, I take back some of my comments on the writer - whatever her name is - she actually did kinda good despite the epiloge. The last five or so chapters were well written and for once had some real emotion to them, ecspecially the chapter called The Prince's Tale or something or other. I almost cried...Almost! So don't bust my hump about this. I've got enough comments from Ophie about it.


QUOTE!!!

Doctor Who - Parting of Ways

Ninth Doctor: (to Rose) Before I go, I just want to tell you: you were fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. And you know what? So was I.

(With that, blazing energy courses through his body, and before Rose's astonished eyes, his features shift and change, his hair becoming longer and his general appearance becoming younger.)

Ten Doctor: (to Rose) Hello (swallows) New teeth. That's weird. Now, where was I? Oh, that's right (grins the Tenth Doctor) Barcelona!

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13751282/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13751282/ Mon, 16 Jul 2007 00:48:13 PDT
So, I'm still working on the horror movie KP fan fics as well have I uploaded Revenge is a Dish Best Served Rare, again. So if you didn't get it the first time around, try it now.

So, that's that...Oh, I might start taking requests again so give them to me!

One's I've got:

- Axel for Andy's sis (working on)

That's all for now, bye byes!

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13714980/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13714980/ Fri, 13 Jul 2007 00:39:42 PDT
Okay, so nothing's new other then I'm taking requests again. Anyone and everyone give me your requests, I may say yes if I like the idea. There are three you get their requests at the top of the lists, Andy, GG, and Tenri. Make your requests I'm ready.

A Beautiful Lie is almost done, only three more chapters. Should I make a follow up story or try something new. Any ideas, I am a very open-minded lesbian.

If anyone cares about RIADBSR, then tell me now cause so far there's only one name in the list of ten needed. If by next Wedsday there aren't ten, it's done. Sorry, folks.

"Rae, you spazz, stop screaming everytime someone comes up behind you and sticks their ice cold hands down you shirt." - Ophelia, my GF

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13665748/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13665748/ Mon, 09 Jul 2007 00:58:49 PDT

Well, not much to say. I think I'll take a bit of a break for now. Unless I'm sketching something I like don't expect any uploads for a short while. I'm working on multipule pics and a couple of fics all at once and it just bite me. *glares at pencil* It's grounded for now but with good behavior maybe it'll get out sooner.

I might take requests - If anyone ever cares, which they don't it seems - but not many 'cause it's these stupid requests that are taking forever! Oh well, I choose to do it so I'm stuck with it.

I'm thinking...Maybe, if I get ten or more requests from ten or more different people I might bring back RIADBSR 'cause I found a dish with the stories and pics saved on it. Damn me and my accursed cautious ways. So, that said, unless its ten and I can only think of one or two people who might actually have cared but there might be some people I don't know of or friends I just made who didn't get a chance to read that pile of crap but are somewhat interested. This isn't a definately but a maybe. There is a difference. A maybes more likely a no. I'm really just posting this to get the full affect of its death and burial.

Okay, let's clear something up. If anyone has ever looked up for my e-mail address know this: I'm sharing it with a male friend, named William, who the address originally belonged to because I lost my password to my original account (before I made this dA page or anything that followed) and seem to have been perminately shut out of that address. I use the address name he choose 'cause it sounded cool to me, VB23 that is. If there is anymore confusion, ask me now least I lose a friend. Which would be simply heartbreaking.

]]> ~VenomousBane23 http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13626868/ http://VenomousBane23.deviantart.com/journal/13626868/ Thu, 05 Jul 2007 21:37:33 PDT
I am still taking requests from others, so tell me what you want and I might do it. I don't do Yaoi or Shounen-ai, certain animes and cartoons, and I won't do works to sexual 'cause it makes me feel dirty.

I now have 50 deviations! I must make a tribute! RAE, HO!!!

Also any fans of Bonnie Rockwaller out there, from KP, go here [link] for a Bonnie Forum. Tell 'em VB23 aka Rae sent you. Yes, I have become a False Icon, and I'm selling out.

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Bad news always goes first. I think...I'm gonna give up on RIADBSR. I really am sure I will. There's too many reason to explains, so I won't. Sorry, anyone who was interested in the story, but as of 4:54 June 28, 2007 I announce that Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Rare, a story I poured my heart, soul, and imagination in only to have it blow up in my face, has be canceled. I've even begun to delete it from my gallery, pictures and all, and maybe I'll just stick specifically with basic no-thought-out-plot KiBo/SheBo stories. Whoopty fuckin' doo.

*sigh*

Okay, good news now. As of recently I've been getting more view every day. With 414 as of last count! Good job, all! Those that viewed, thank you all. I would mostly like to thank Owenicus and GimmeMahFishsticks for all their support and kind words. You guys kick so much ass that you are the top Two of my Ass-Kickery List.

Oh, the first person who gets my views to 666 gets to be the first person to get me to do a request of any kind. No matter the content, as long as it isn't nasty or too sexual. I promise! And if someone gets me a pic of it, I swear I'll move you to the Top Four of my Ass-Kickery List.

And because I'm bored and now have a lot of free time on my hands thanks to the death of my old story, I am now taking requests! So if you have an idea, tell me, and will see where we go from there.

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