http://search.deviantart.com/?q=by:equinexus&section=today deviantART RSS for by:equinexus en-us Copyright 2010, deviantART.com Tue, 05 Jan 2010 23:04:57 PST deviantART.com http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/tech/rss http://s.deviantart.com/minish/widgets/apple-touch-icon-precomposed.png http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/29311617/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/29311617/ Thu, 31 Dec 2009 16:39:33 PST So here's to another good year, my lovelies. Happy New Year!

Dragon Age: Origins: OH MY FRIKKIN GAWD! What an amazing fucking game!

I've been wanting this game ever since Gameinformer did a spread on it back in 2008, and since it was released last month, my mom bought it for me for Christmas and OH MY FRIKKIN GAWD! It's one of the best games I've ever played. Not only is the storyline chosen/influenced by your decisions, the overall plot/subplots are so original and engaging that it makes writer's like me weep in happiness!

Dragon Age: Origins is made by Bioware; a company known for allowing romance subplots and sex scenes, and trust me, there is no shortage of them. You can have sex with several different main characters; depending on your gender or if the character is bisexual. (Zevran and Lelianna *coughs*)

I played as a female Human Noble, so I dated the hetero Alistair. He's like every little girl's dream; an innocent, hilarious and adorably sweet knight. Since he's a Templar, he's religious, believes in justice, but above all.. IS A VIRGIN! (Not for long though... )

Zevran has to be my second favorite character. Since he's an Assassin, he's more dark-humored, playful and lusty. The best part is that he goes either way; your gender doesn't affect dating him. (Shame on him for checking out Wynne's "bosom", she's a grandmother!) He's easy to sleep with, unlike Alistair, but it's so hard to win his heart! Say one wrong thing and you lose your chance to make him fall in love with you!

Review on Dragon Age: Origins

Music: The soundtrack has simple instrumental/folk music, along with epic orchestral themes for battles and operatic singing throughout. Very beautiful. 10/10

Battle System: Can be a little confusing at first if you're new to real-time RPG. You can take control of any party member at any point during battle, and set up "Tactics" that the other computer-controlled characters will follow when not in your control. You can pause mid-battle to issue commands, and swiftly switch control of who's in charge. Battles can sometimes lag due to multiple enemies/spells on screen, but very rarely. 9/10

Plot: One of the best parts of this game is that even though it has an overall story that is amazing and original in itself, you have huge impact on what happens due to your decisions, however minor. Each chapter in the game leaves the fate of villages, cities, other characters, and pretty much the world in your hands. Some decisions can be difficult to make, and you're held responsible for the consequences. 10/10

Sidequests/Subplots: Depending on your character/actions, different sidequests may emerge that will benefit you. There are several sidequests in each city that can require hours of work to complete, but vary depending on the quest. "Romancing" characters is optional, but if you choose to, it can create subplots that can grant bonuses to the characters. Unlike other games, however, you must work to establish the relationship. You must give them gifts, make decisions they approve of, and have meaningful conversations with them on a regular basis. It takes time and effort, much like a real relationship. Depending on the character you are romancing, a point can be reached where you can become intimate. 10/10

Graphics: Released on PS3/360/PC, Dragon Age: Origins was designed mostly for the PC, so the graphics tend to lack for the PS3/360. The character models/armor designs look a little bland/flat and 2006-ish, which can be disappointing for some. 8/10

Character Origins/Customization: You can pick from different Origins such as: human noble, Magi (human/elf), Dalish elf, city elf, dwarf noble or dwarf commoner. These Origins highly reflect how t... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/29063087/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/29063087/ Fri, 25 Dec 2009 00:11:23 PST Christmas: Since I usually only update my journal about once a month, I would like to have a moment to wish everyone a Merry Christmas! I hope it's full of.. merry.. and.. gifts you actually like!

Toby commish: As in my last updated journal, did a commission of Tobias from Pariah which can be seen here: [link] He's absolutely gorgeous isn't he? I am going to commission her with more characters come February, possibly Vincent and/or Kendal. I was hoping maybe I could have her do the entire cast. *nods* We'll see how the money thing goes.

Sex drive?: So if you were one of the lucky two people who saw it last night (yes, it had 2 views), I uploaded the first chapter of a short story I was writing containing the first sex scene I ever wrote. I was extremely nervous and eventually lost the nerve and took it down.

I ended up make a new account, a more anonymous one, to see how people who haven't been reading me for awhile will react to it. Maybe one day I'll get the balls to post it here. D:

Soooo, Merry Christmas!, check out Tobykins: [link] , and no sex for you!


Updated: I got the balls. -.- Read first sex scene here: [link]

-equi


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Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:



I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/28829476/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/28829476/ Thu, 10 Dec 2009 12:58:24 PST EDIT: The amazing artist did an astounding job on Tobias!

See him here: [link]

She did a perfect job turning my vision of Toby into reality.

Be sure to check out her other art, too.

I'm going to commission her in the future for other characters! So keep an eye out.



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equi needs suggestions on a new story title!

Yessss, in my latest depression fit (my boyfriend of 8 months broke up with me, haha..) I came up with a new story idea!

I was inspired by this song, the ending theme from the game ICO:

The island bathes in the sun's bright rays
Distant hills wear a shroud of grey
A lonely breeze whispers in the trees
Sole witness to history

Fleeting memories rise
From the shadows of my mind
Sing "nonomori" - endless corridors
Say "nonomori" - hopeless warriors
You were there
You were there

Am I forever dreaming
How to define the way I'm feeling

You were there
Countless visions they haunt me in my sleep
You were there
Though forgotten all promises we keep

Slaves to our destiny
I recall a melody
Sing "nonomori" - seasons lit with gold
Say "nonomori" - legends yet untold
You were there
You were there

Happiness follows sorrow
Only believing in tomorrow

You were there
Countless visions they haunt me in my sleep
You were there
Though forgotten all promises we keep

The island bathes in the sun's bright rays
Distant hills wear a shroud of grey
A lonely breeze whispers in the trees
Sole key to this mystery

If any of you want the song, I can give you a link to download it.

But anyway, the story is going to be about a girl, simply called The Princess, who suffers from a terrible prophecy. This prophecy is broken up into fragments and nobody knows it fully. In this prophecy, there are several things that will occur in her life, including finding her Prince, being saved by a Knight, and finding everlasting friendship (a best friend.)

Unfortunately, the prophecy does come true, but nothing is as it seems. (All of this will be explained in three short stories that are going to being the history/prologue of the actual story.)

In the end, she cries a tear for every person in her prophecy.

These tears give birth to the protagonists of the story. They are called Tears, and are being hunted by the world, basically.

I've had some names planned out for the story, but I can't decide. Here's my list:

Tears
Fragments
Fragments of Tears
Tear Fragments
Fragmented Tears

I like all of them but can't decide! ><;

I'd like some of my readers to leave a comment on their favorite one, or provide opinions of their own.

I would really appreciate your help..

I am working on Pariah, I promise! So close to the end, I can't give up now.

Thanks

-equi




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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite intere... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/28516501/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/28516501/ Sun, 22 Nov 2009 18:54:51 PST
I have to say it was very good, and I enjoyed it alot. Though some cons were:
1) Stink-faces isn't acting. (Robert Pattinson)
2.) Fangs much?
3.) Wtf is dying in the background? Oh, that's the soundtrack.
4.) It's looong, over two hours.
5.) Pout pout. Sulk. Pout. Sulk. More sulking...

But it was still a good movie, and stayed about 90% true to the book. 8.5/10

Moving on..

I want to confide a little to my fans. I always say that I write best during the worst times of my depression, and it is true. My heart was just broken, by an old lover again, and I feel absolutely.. trampled..

My mother once told me all of my characters are a little piece of me, asked me, "Who was Gerraint to you? Why are you so heartbroken over him?"

When I stopped to think about it, all the love and the longing Kendal experiences is my own cry for someone I once loved. Well, the real life Gerraint broke my heart, and he is dead now. The love and longing Kendal experiences is that part of me, making it's way out.

I brought this up because I got a note from an angry deviant, putting my stories down. Saying my characters were flat and that I wrote about unorthodox/taboo things that weren't realistic and that I should be ashamed of flaunting rape as something to entertain people with.

I need to say: please don't complain about the assault of the Tobias. Although sexual assault was written into my story, this is also true about my life. I won't go into detail, but something realistically similar happened to me. So please, do not attack me, or insult me for my writing.

Writing is my therapy. It makes me happy, and I put my own heart, soul, and life experiences into it.

I updated the archive.

My heart is aching as I type this. Expect more chapters soon..

Thanks.

-equi

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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:



I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/27676365/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/27676365/ Fri, 09 Oct 2009 20:59:32 PDT
Anywho, now that we're done with that, I wanna apologize. I feel like such a horrible person for being unable to dish out chapters quick enough, or even finish a story three years in the making (Pariah.. ._. ) and I don't even know if I have fans still out there. But if you are a fan, and you are reading my work, I thank you so much for sticking with me.

Being a college girl now keeps me so busy, but I promise you that I am once again getting depressed, which is good for you all because it's my inspiration to write!

I came up with Pariah's plot almost three years ago, and it's been so hard to finish it up, because I loved it so much, I thought about it too much! and wore myself out! But I promise you, Pariah only has about 4-6 chapters left, and I want to make sure I wrap their beautiful story up. Beautiful? Is it? I dunno. LOL

Also, I decided to abandon Pariah II, because I see what people say about sequels, and how it would've been good enough as is, and I believe that Pariah has held it's own, so I will not continue on with it's sequel. (This means, if I have told you the ending to Pariah, then it has somewhat changed to be wrapped up air tight.)

Let's see, what else.. I'm still working on Marionette, and finally figured out the plotline down to the last thread, so I will finish up Chapter 6 - True Selves soon, and hopefully continue on in a steady pace.

I updated the archive, with all of the Emergence short stories, and Marionette chapters all posted up.

Also, while I have some money floating around, I wanted to know if there is an artist out there willing to draw several characters (full body or waist up) in a group photo, or singular characters for a decent price! Maybe a group package deal if I order like 3+?

I has the money, I just need to hear reasonable offers!

Thanks, guys!

-equi
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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/25579253/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/25579253/ Sat, 27 Jun 2009 01:25:43 PDT Marionette chapters like pancakes on a Saturday morning just last month, and then they suddenly just stopped!

Well, unfortunately, the next chapter is when the plot starts picking up and I realized there were some MAJOR flaws in the main character, Claire Dumont. It wasn't until I got to chapter four that I hadn't decided on what exactly her character would do to achieve the main goal in the plotline. So it is on hiatus while I sort a few flaws, which highly impacts the storyline.

EDIT! Oh! I had Dorian from Eternal commissioned!
Check him out: [link]

The past few months, mostly during the most stressful weeks of my last few months of high school, I started having these romantic, sad, and sometimes arousing dreams about this thing called Emergence. There are always two characters who are soulmates that are destined to be together. They can be complete strangers, but the instant they touch or connect in their unique way, they fall into this dreamlike state called Emergence and are able to hear, feel, and see thoughts and memories of their soulmate.

So each dream I would have, there would be soulmates in some sort of conflict in a world of their own, which wasn't always explained to me by my own dreams, so I was able to have some fun with them, too.

I've written 3 Emergence short stories so far, though I'm still working on the second half of the Ginger and Blue story.

I'll be adding them to my archive, with their brief introductions.

The Arch (angels) and the Coven (vampires) are mortal enemies at war, but when an Arch soldier finds that his soulmate is a forbidden Coven, how long can they live to love?
Emergence - Dylan & Darren: [link]

If your family was brutally murdered, and you found that your soulmate was the killer, would you be able to kill your soulmate? Find out the decision Synthesis must make.
Emergence - Absinthe & Synthesis: [link]

In a world where men have outlawed women, soldiers known as the FER (Female Extraction Reconnassiance) hunt, arrest, and execute women under the law. But what happens when a FER soldier emerges with a woman destined for death? Can he save her from the laws of his world?
Emergence - Ginger & Blue (Part 1): [link]
Emergence - Ginger & Blue (Part 2): will insert here






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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and unca... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/25349036/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/25349036/ Tue, 16 Jun 2009 10:20:42 PDT
I'm graduating high school in about two and a half hours and I'm extremely excited and nervous! D: My mom wants me to dance when they call my name, hahaha, so I might. ._.

My foots pops out of my heel if I walk too faaaast, aye, so I gotta tell my walking partner to walk a little slow with me. (I'm short and she has long legs so she's fast.)

So yes, graduation starts at 1pm, and when it's over we're going to Olive Garden, wooo, and I'm wearing a tiara! hahah.

I get to see my dad (and his girlfriend) today, haven't seen him in uhm... years, prolly. (I forgot I had a dad.)

So yess, sorry, I'm all giggly and bouncy. ._. Just so anxious! >
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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:



I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

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Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



MARIONETTE ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/24789604/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/24789604/ Sat, 16 May 2009 15:31:43 PDT Marionette.

Since I'm sending out stories to publishers over the summer, I noticed that a lot of them were requesting stories that could be made into series, and the Marionette stories and characters (with their world) could be spanned out tons if you follow them.

So I decided, "Yeah! I'm gonna make a series!"

I haven't decided what the overall series is gonna be called, but Marionette is just one story in it.

For those of you who have read it, I hope it's off to a great start for you.

In my English 4 class, one of our assignments right now is to write a short story: 3 chapters, 2-3 pages each. Since I'm all hot on Marionette I've been shortening the overall idea and story, and I had to present chapter 1 to my class and everyone was SHOCKED!

I was so happy! It was like a movie! My entire class was sitting there, stunned to silence with their jaws dropped, and my teacher was like "Any comments or questions on Mariah's story?" and one girl slowly raised her hand and was like, "Can you help me write mine?" LOL

I nearly skipped home! >
But anyway, I've always been a little girly-girl when it comes to trends and clothes, so when I came across polyvore.com, I became obsessed. O.O If you join the site, you can search through entire stocks of clothes and put together sets to make awesome outfits or designs! It's awesome to do for story characters! So I recommend it to all writers, because I'd love to see what their characters would be wearing, too.

I'll finish my little hyper rant with thanking my readers for the great comments and feedback I've been getting for Marionette.

You're my little inspirations, and your reads are the reason I write.

Thank you!




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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:



I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/24231758/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/24231758/ Tue, 14 Apr 2009 02:29:20 PDT
I play several characters, but my main role was Malcolm, Duncan's son and (SORRY, SPOILERS) the son who becomes king at the end of Macbeth.

Well.. there was this scene where I'm supposed to be running for my life.. and I never realized how girly I acted (I always thought I was a tomboy anyway), when I took off running and my arms were flailing and fwipping about like a girl in heels. (I was in converse.)

It doesn't matter if I wear no make-up, with my hair tied back, and a button downed shirt and tie... I'm still a girl.

(But damn, was I the sexiest crossdresser in the film.)

Thank you! ^.^

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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



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Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/23652439/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/23652439/ Wed, 11 Mar 2009 22:38:29 PDT

March 30th, yaaay! Wow, has it already been another year? x.x

I hardly post anything anymore. ;.;

I need to finish Pariah, I swear, I really want you all the enjoy the ending like I do. x.x That's my project for this summer! TO GET PARIAH DONE BEFORE AUGUST!

Anyway, I'm trying to decide what I want for my birfday..

I know for sure I want the new Star Ocean, cause it's EPIC (horrid voice acting was the only downside).

On a side note: I'm honestly done with dating, I swear. I haven't had a boyfriend or girlfriend in over a year, and I recently started poking around for someone. Of course, me being me, I fall hard and I fall hard fast. A few boys/girls over the last few months caught my eye, but they all ended up breaking my heart. ;.;

But that's good news for you! My heartache/depression is what inspires me to write!

So.. after this last bout.. I might have something up soon.

Stupid people hurting me.. again.

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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interact... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/23539559/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/23539559/ Thu, 05 Mar 2009 12:10:18 PST
I dreamed I was missing, you were so scared
But no one would listen, 'cause no one else cared
After my dreaming, I woke with this fear
What am I leaving when I'm done here?

So if you're asking me, I want you to know

When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest

Leave out all the rest, don't be afraid
I've taken my beating, I've shared what I made
I'm strong on the surface, not all the way through
I've never been perfect, but neither have you

So if you're asking me, I want you to know

When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest
Leave out all the rest

Forgetting all the hurt inside you've learned to hide so well
Pretending someone else can come and save me from myself
I can't be who you are

When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done
Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed
Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty
Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest
Leave out all the rest

Forgetting all the hurt inside you've learned to hide so well
Pretending someone else can come and save me from myself
I can't be who you are

I can't be who you are



Linkin Park - Leave Out All The Rest









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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a mor... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/23244969/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/23244969/ Mon, 16 Feb 2009 22:31:09 PST
but I can't write it out. I can't sit down and type it out the way I want to, or make anyone in real life talk to me long enough about my writing to help me think about my ideas.

The rewrite isn't going so good. I have to shorten Eternal into a short story. 2,500 is the max, and that's about 7 pages on Microsoft Word.

Eternal is currently 233 pages, and I have to somehow shorten it..

How can I, without having it lose it's originality? I tried to, and the first chapter came out to 1,700 words.

My mom said: "They're looking for people who can shorten their stories because that means they're good writers."

So does that make me a bad writer?

I don't want to give up my dream, but what is there for a writer who can't write? Who can't formulate new ideas without them somehow being beatdown by someone, or by something somewhere?

I don't know what I can do. I have until May to turn Eternal into a short story, without it losing it's originality... I don't know. Maybe the dream is over.





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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22723114/ Wed, 21 Jan 2009 21:13:14 PST

I'm currently rewriting Eternal for publishing, and there's something a little interesting missing. I need birthdays for Dorian, Sebastian, and possibly Evette and Simone later on.

So this is the deal: Whoever posts their birthday first, will be Dorian's. Second, Sebastian. Third, Evette. And fourth, Simone.

Your birthdays will be added into the rewrite of Eternal.

Thanks, guys! ;3

______________________________

I've always been curious which one of my many male characters gives off the most sex appeal!

So I made this poll: [link]

to find out which of my characters you would rather.. >.>

Oh play along with me, I think it'd be interesting to see! xD

I left off characters who would be illegal to rather, sorry!

ALSO: I just got finished making a quiz on which of my characters would be your boyfriend in modern times!

Check out who would be your boyfriend: [link]

If your choice isn't on there, comment here.
Also, if you want, share your choice here, too!


___________________________________

Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic " ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22621113/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22621113/ Fri, 16 Jan 2009 19:10:49 PST
So I made this poll: [link]

to find out which of my characters you would rather.. >.>

Oh play along with me, I think it'd be interesting to see! xD

I left off characters who would be illegal to rather, sorry!

ALSO: I just got finished making a quiz on which of my characters would be your boyfriend in modern times!

Check out who would be your boyfriend: [link]

If your choice isn't on there, comment here.
Also, if you want, share your choice here, too!


___________________________________

Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



________





Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of in... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22600607/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22600607/ Thu, 15 Jan 2009 17:13:31 PST
I got my first job today, working at the clothing/department store Marshall's.

I'm sooo excited, but very nervous, they seem to be expecting alot from me. <.<

Anywaaay, Tuesday is my first day, so wish me luck!

OH, BTW!

I recently bought this new RPG The Last Remnant and I'm totally obsessed over the main character Rush Sykes. He's actually sexy and not an annoying, flute playing douchebag wussy boy as most recent main characters... (if you played Infinite Undiscovery... you know who I'm talking about ._.)

I'm going to make him a profile page on here, just as a little tribute to my new boyfriend.. YES MINE! MINE! MY RUSH SYKES! <.<

Ahem..


I'll try to have some more writings up soon!

Thanks!





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Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



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Make sure to read chapters in... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22363805/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22363805/ Fri, 02 Jan 2009 21:57:55 PST Eternal..

There are TWO major plot differences that are being questioned, and I think the opinion of people who have actually read the story will help decide.

The first plot difference questioned is Sebastian's suicide in Chapter 23: [link]

Since my genre is directed towards older teens who have a higher percentage of depression, will teenagers go out and ask a vampiric marksman to shoot them in the head? I doubt it, but.. In a way, it's saying that I condone suicide. I've been battling severe clinical depression since I was 8 years old, and of course suicide and I have crossed paths many times, but I would never say Go out and get yourself shot in the head! BUT, anyway, I wanted to ask my readers: Should I remove or somehow alter Sebastian's decision to become an Archangel? Here's an alternate possibility:

1.) A Freya's necklace can be presented to him, but he will not have the power to perform the exorcism later in the story. (Though they don't necessarily succeed, anyway.) This also can mean there may be a breakthrough that there can be the first human Hierarch.

Although I love my original decision to have him become an Archangel, suicide in a teenage genre isn't really liked.

Opinions and thoughts, please?


UPDATE: It's been brought to my attention that the infamous Edward Cullen in New Moon tries to commit suicide in the way Sebastian did. They aren't doing it themselves, instead, are using other people to do it. New Moon is geared towards female tweenies, pre-teens, and teenagers. And I remember that suicide is discussed several times in the story, and is, in a way, accepted. So Sebastian's bullet-to-the-head scene may stay intact if I can explain my side of the argument well.



The other question I'm being asked is about Dorian's resurrection after judgement in Chapter 28: [link]

There has been conflicting arguments that Dorian's soul should become a demon like Evette, since she wasn't forgiven when she committed the same acts and was possessed like he was. So my question is: Should Dorian not be forgiven and return as an angel? Here's an alternate possibility that I've come up with:

1.) Both of their souls are lost in an in-between world. Not Heaven, Middle Earth, or Hell, but a landscape of nothingness where others that have dealt with Nivek (such as vessels before) are sent after their demise. (Possible setup for a sequel.)

If that is chosen, Dorian's son Denzel and his story, The Devil's Harbinger cannot exist.

So I need opinions...

Sebastian's suicide; and Dorian's ending.

Please let me know what you think. :]

_____________________________________________



Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22234743/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/22234743/ Sat, 27 Dec 2008 22:40:11 PST


Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



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Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who hav... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/21650575/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/21650575/ Mon, 24 Nov 2008 15:59:13 PST
I got Tobias's character interview up!
Which you can read here: [link]

I also posted some more Pariah II stuffs! O.O

Pariah II - Behind Blue Eyes:[link]
His Journal - My Memories: [link]

YES I KNOW! I still have to finish writing the ending summary for the first Pariah, because frankly, I've grown bored with it after 3 years of plotting and planning and I simply want to move on. I can't get myself to write the last few chapters, even though they are always the move excited! x.x;

But my latest stories, Archaic and The Devil's Harbinger have been doing pretty well, so I am excited about that!

Thank you, you guys ALL know that I love you. I used to dream about one person reading my stories, much less ALL of you guys, so each and every single read makes my heart jump. (If you guys could see me, I squeal on my computer all the time. >.>

ANYWAY!

Next Character Interview I want to do Kendal from Pariah, so PLEASE PLEASE, if you have any questions for him, LEAVE IT HERE IN THE JOURNAL AND HE SHALL RESPOND.

If not, I'll have to come up with some interesting questions about buttsekz now won't I?

OH HEY! I didn't lie, there is buttsekz in this journal! ;x

Anywaaaay, OH! I have a question for my readers. Since I'm growing up, (LOL!), I've been told I have some talent writing more.. explicit scenes... So I am wondering if I should begin posting my more sexual stories like Nocturne...

Perhaps I will make a seperate account for those!

ANYWHO, LEAVE YOUR QUESTIONS FOR KENDAL!


_____________________________________________



Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/21267708/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/21267708/ Sat, 01 Nov 2008 15:25:03 PDT
My laptop's charger decides to blow out, and it costs $90 to replace!

D:

BUT I FINALLY GOT MY CHARGER TODAY!

SO EQUI'S BACK! ... AGAIN!

x.x;

I had the best Halloween! I ran around, scaring people with a broken doll face mask, and a loud shaker can!

I chased teenage girls down the street in their heels, made countless kids cry.. >.>;;

played Rock Band, ate pizza..

Hehe, Happy belated Halloweenie, kids.

Love y'all.

(OH! SHOULD HAVE SOMETHING UP SOON, -JUST- GOT MY LAPTOP TURNED -ON-.)
-equi





Pariah Interviews:
Kendal - the main knight and protagonist
Tobias - the cute Harpie
Seth - the silent Valkyrie
Vincent - the evil Elf - [link]
Roarke - the spiteful human
Nadia - the desperate lover
Domitian - the main antagonist
Mervin - the caring General
April - the hyper barmaid
King Beowulf - the.. King
Unknown (Roarke clone) - the mysterious friend/foe?
Abigail/Harris - the vengeful siblings



ALSO!

Nobody really seemed interested in me posting up some music, but I will not be discouraged! I've never seen any other writers do this, SO I WILL! >=o

Next journal update, I'm going to have a section for each character of some of their music or themes. AND YOU SHALL LISTEN! or Tobias will slay you!

Tobias: I will what !?! O.O;







________

Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20867647/ Tue, 07 Oct 2008 00:14:29 PDT .>


I WILL ADD MORE TO THIS LATER! >.<








Pariah Interviews:
Kendal - the main knight and protagonist
Tobias - the cute Harpie
Seth - the silent Valkyrie
Vincent - the evil Elf - [link]
Roarke - the spiteful human
Nadia - the desperate lover
Domitian - the main antagonist
Mervin - the caring General
April - the hyper barmaid
King Beowulf - the.. King
Unknown (Roarke clone) - the mysterious friend/foe?
Abigail/Harris - the vengeful siblings



ALSO!

Nobody really seemed interested in me posting up some music, but I will not be discouraged! I've never seen any other writers do this, SO I WILL! >=o

Next journal update, I'm going to have a section for each character of some of their music or themes. AND YOU SHALL LISTEN! or Tobias will slay you!

Tobias: I will what !?! O.O;







________

Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20591423/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20591423/ Sat, 20 Sep 2008 20:11:18 PDT
I finished up my first character interview, which happens to be with Vincent from Pariah! Make sure to check it out!

Pariah - Character Interview - Vincent: [link]


Even though only two people participated in asking questions, I think it managed to come out well enough. xD

Please, please, please, I would like as many people's questions and input as possible!

I'm wondering which character I should do next..

Y'know what? I'll just go my favorite, and a lot of other people's: Tobias!

SO LISTEN UP!

Next Character Interview is with Tobias from Pariah! So post your questions here, and have them responded to by the little Harpie.

You can read his profile here: [link] as well.

PLEASE SEND IN YOUR QUESTIONS, IT'S CRUCIAL TO THE INTERVIEW!

You can ask an unlimited amount of questions, about anything, such as their: shoe size, favorite food, sex life, all the way to if they pick their noses or not.

Just ask, and they will respond!

Don't disappoint, Toby, or he'll cry.

Tobias: ;.;

Pariah Interviews:
Kendal - the main knight and protagonist
Tobias - the cute Harpie
Seth - the silent Valkyrie
Vincent - the evil Elf - [link]
Roarke - the spiteful human
Nadia - the desperate lover
Domitian - the main antagonist
Mervin - the caring General
April - the hyper barmaid
King Beowulf - the.. King
Unknown (Roarke clone) - the mysterious friend/foe?
Abigail/Harris - the vengeful siblings



Eternal:
Dorian - the arrogant Commander
Simone - the selfless angel
Sebastian - the kind soldier
Evette - the heartbroken soldier
Arbinger - the cowboy guide
Amaya - the shrine mother
Azriel? - the.. horse?
Beatrix/Ethan - the mysterious bystanders
Gerard - the all-knowing angel
Nivek - the dethroned God

The Devil's Harbinger (Eternal sequel):
Denzel - the insane.. protagonist?
Unnamed Succubus - the lusty demon
Raine - the innocent human
The (Brunette/Blonde) Devil's Harbinger - the dark protectors


Enigma (Eternal prequel):
Nevea - the schizophrenic Priestess
Aidan Locke - the witty thief
Nikolas Locke - the loyal knight
Edwin - the charming sorcerer
Gerald - the confident sorcerer
Sheila - the incompetent sister
Sienna - the bubbly friend
The Headmaster - the amulet owner
Silver-Haired Blue-Robed Guy - the inner voice
Helga - the mature caretaker

Archaic:
Milo - the humble orphan
Mitch - the serene twin
Ollie - the quirky twin
Shawn(a) - the gender-confused student
Holden - the legendary pilot
Doctor Kingsley - the observant scientist
Doctor Gammon - the curious partner


ALSO!

Nobody really seemed interested in me posting up some music, but I will not be discouraged! I've never seen any other writers do this, SO I WILL! >=o

Next journal update, I'm going to have a section for each character of some of their music or themes. AND YOU SHALL LISTEN! or Tobias will slay you!

Tobias: I will what !?! O.O;







________

Comments I'm Proud Of:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by


"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the charact... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20452087/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20452087/ Fri, 12 Sep 2008 09:20:38 PDT
Sorry, no posts for todaaay, just a mere archive update and some rambling.

First day of school was on the fourth, so I've had NO time to finish anything completely!

My mother ish screaming at me because she wants more Archaic but I can't get my thoughts sorted to write the next chapter, gahh!

Good news to you Pariah fans, I actually broke out of my laziness and started on Chapter 16, cause I really really wanna get this story done! I started posting it over a year ago, and I'm happy that I still have people waiting to find out the ending!

As I've said many times before, if my writer's block continues with Pariah I will just write up an entire ending summary, so none of you are left hanging..

Due to my absence and lack of internet, I lost MANY of my fans. ;.; Dohh, I'll just have to build up another good fanbase, eh? ^.^

These 2-5 views on my work are KILLING me! I mean, c'mon, poor Toby and friends have less than 6 views on their profiles, and they're the most popular ones!

Of course, each view is SO appreciated, I guess I've just been spoiled with my usual 20-30 views and 2-5 comments per chapter.

Dohh, I bet I'm sounding bitchy now! >.<

Let's move on!

I've always loved the idea of having character interviews! If there are still enough people around whom have read and know the characters enough to want to ask them questions, say YEIGH in a comment here, and proceed to ask a question.

Once I've gathered enough, I will make a submission with your questions, and the character kindly giving us a moment of their adventure-filled lives to answer them for you.

The questions can range from how big their feet are, what foods they like, what they like to do, etc, to if they pick their nose or not, I don't care. Ask anything. xP

I guess I can make a small form-like thing to make things easier!

For example, to make things clear, submit your question like this:

To Vincent: Have you ever had a girlfriend? Want one? ;]

then the character shall respond!

Vincent: I have better things to do with my time.

Now, I will only do this if there is a sufficient amount of questions.

You can ask an unlimited amount of questions, to any character, from any story.

Pariah:
Kendal - the main knight and protaganist
Tobias - the cute Harpie
Seth - the silent Valkyrie
Vincent - the evil Elf
Roarke - the spiteful human
Nadia - the desperate lover
Domitian - the main antagonist
Mervin - the caring General
April - the hyper barmaid
King Beowulf - the.. King
Unknown (Roarke clone) - the mysterious friend/foe?
Abigail/Harris - the vengeful siblings



Eternal:
Dorian - the arrogant Commander
Simone - the selfless angel
Sebastian - the kind soldier
Evette - the heartbroken soldier
Arbinger - the cowboy guide
Amaya - the shrine mother
Azriel? - the.. horse?
Beatrix/Ethan - the mysterious bystanders
Gerard - the all-knowing angel
Nivek - the dethroned God

The Devil's Harbinger (Eternal sequel):
Denzel - the insane.. protagonist?
Unnamed Succubus - the lusty demon
Raine - the innocent human
The (Brunette/Blonde) Devil's Harbinger - the dark protectors


Enigma (Eternal prequel):
Nevea - the schizophrenic Priestess
Aidan Locke - the witty thief
Nikolas Locke - the loyal knight
Edwin - the charming sorcerer
Gerald - the confident sorcerer
Sheila - the incompetent sister
Sienna - the bubbly friend
The Headmaster - the amulet owner
Silver-Haired Blue-Robed Guy - the inner voice
Helga - the mature caretaker

Archaic:
Milo - the humble orphan
Mitch - the serene twin
Ollie - the quirky twin
Shawn(a) - the gender-confused student
Holden - the legendary pilot
Doctor Kingsley - the observant scientist
Doctor Gammon - the curious partner





So if you're an fan of any of these characters, start sending your questions in, 'kay? =]



If this fails, oh welllll, I'll just probably write some scenes asking my own questions. It's fun to talk to your characters! xD



Uhmmm.. what else, what else.. OH!

I'd also like to know if -anyone- would find it interesting if I uploaded some of the music I listen to when writing, and have it set up in a place where you can download and listen to them to!

This includes character's themes, the songs I listen to in order to get in character, story theme's, like an opening and/or ending song, and basic scene theme's, I have certain songs for when c... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20207826/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20207826/ Thu, 28 Aug 2008 19:06:00 PDT
Hi guys.

I know most of you must not remember me... Name's equi, how's it going?

Anywho! I'm finally back in the game... somewhat.

Lost my internet connection back in April and won't get it back until October, but I managed to get this posted at ze college!

Gah, I miss you guys so much! Your comments and feedback always inspire me to write more and more but without it... I'm lost. x.x

I started some new stuff, still being lazy on my old stuff although I will eventually get to it.

Updated with profiles, my new mecha story Archaic, my first fanfic Drakengard: Seals of Fate, an Enigma chapter, as well as the full and FINISHED version of Pariah - Chapter 15.

So make sure to check atleast one of those out, it'll make my day. Or week. =o (Prolly week. x.x)

Thanks for bearing with me, loves!

Muahmuah.

See you guys soon!

-equi





________


Comments:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



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Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and c... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20191340/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20191340/ Wed, 27 Aug 2008 19:48:54 PDT
I finally got to put some new stuff up, THANK GOD!

Althought I'm upset that I forgot my ARCHAIC PROFILES AT HOME!

RAWR! >=o

But anyway..

I'll just to get those up soon.

Maybe next week!

Enjoy what I have up!

CHECK OUT MY NEW STORY ARCHAIC!

-equi

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Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



________





Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20118077/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/20118077/ Sat, 23 Aug 2008 18:14:01 PDT
So I'm at the internet cafe right now, but it won't read my flash drive so I can't update right now.

I'm going to shoot for Wednesday when I go back to my mom's college!

Hang in there, guys! ;.;



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Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part II: [link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 1 : [link]
Enigma - Chapter 8: [link]

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Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



________





Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/19828574/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/19828574/ Thu, 07 Aug 2008 13:54:34 PDT
Hey, guys, sorry it's been so long since I updated, but my computer totally crashed and I've lost connection to the internet until October.

I snuck in to my mom's college in order to use the computer for a moment, and I thought I should let you all know what's going on.

NO I HAVEN'T ABANDONED YE'!

I miss you guys so much. x.x;

I can only view certain aspects of DA from my PSP, only like... read and send notes.

I've been bugging and a few others of you for the past month or so. xD

I can't view comments or really reply to them yet, so if you've left one since April, I will try to reply to some now, and others when I go to an internet cafe sometime in the weeks ahead.

I'll have internet back up around October, but I'll try to post some before.

Love you, guys! ;.;

-equi





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Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part II: [link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 1 : [link]
Enigma - Chapter 8: [link]

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Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/17814562/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/17814562/ Sat, 12 Apr 2008 13:36:21 PDT
Nothing else to share.















Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part II: [link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 1 : [link]
Enigma - Chapter 8: [link]

________


Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



________





Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Be... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/17280307/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/17280307/ Fri, 28 Mar 2008 19:34:57 PDT UPDATE: Added a few chapters to The Devil's Harbinger, as well as a plot opener for it.

The Devil's Harbinger plot opener:"Angels and Demons exist... They walk amongst you, influencing your ideas and thoughts, and it's up to you, as a human, to decide which route you take. There is a balance that must be kept, to keep the cycle of the Afterlife moving, to keep the lifestream in motion.

But what if one man had the power... to alter the cycles?

To change the fate of the world, of each human, of each soul...

What if this man, this deity, was so powerful, no Demon, nor Angel, could harness him, muzzle him, or keep him bound and chained?

They can try...I dare them. Because I am this man.

My name is Denzel, and I am god of the Dying World."

So check it out.

Also, the weekly update of the archives or all my stories, an Enigma chapter here, a Pariah chapter there.

Thanks guys!

______________________________________________


So, good news to you Eternal fans!

I've decided to continue with the Eternal saga.



The Devil's Harbinger is my decided name, rather than Denzel, The Angel of Death. So check it out, 'kay? Lemme know how you like it so far.

=3

My birthday's coming up!

March 30th, I'm gonna be the ripe age of 17.

Perfect for a coming of age crazy adventure for me to be sucked in.
<.<

TAKE ME AWAY! I KNOW I AM THE QUEEN OF SOME FARAWAY PLANET, AWAITING MY AWAKENI-- ahem...

>.>;;

But anyway, until then, make sure you check out some of the stories, and I'm working on some more fanart for my stories! (bugging my friend! xD)

Ohh, and I might be working on some Pariah side stories, like their lives and relationships before the actual storyline begins.

^.^

If anyone might want to share a character or two, and work with me on some stuff, I'm opened to do some work out of my stories.

I'll share my characters as well.

=3

Also, I know this is prolly said everyday by everyone and probably seems meaningless by now, but I honestly have to say that with every view of my stories brightens my day..


All I've ever wanted was to have my stories read, and I have the greatest fanbase out there.

I try to share my enthusiasm when responding to your gracious comments, and I enjoy every critique or question.

I truly love you guys, my readers and fans.

Thank you for taking the time to read my works.

You're the best.





Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part II: [link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 1 : [link]
Enigma - Chapter 8: [link]

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Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonse... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/17217430/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/17217430/ Thu, 06 Mar 2008 21:54:17 PST
Sweet, sweet karma.

Remember my ex-girlfriend who hurt me last week?

The guy she left me for dumped her today, IN FRONT OF ME. He cursed her out, called her a whore, and many other things...
Made her cry and curse, and I tried to comfort her, but she threw me off and stomped away... and I just started... snickering..

Love it.

Anyway, I'm a bit disappointed in myself.

I rented FMA episodes 1-4 off of Netflix, and it turns out... I LOVE IT!

Omg, I've jumped on the bandwagon.

._.

Anyway, I updated an Enigma chapter, and I'm working on some other mini stuff.

Right now I'm getting over my flu and catching up on homework, so I can't promise anything soon.

But equi's feeling better.

Sometimes, I think I'm secretly a bitch.

<.<

Anyway, check out some of the newer chapters and lemme know how you like them!

Remember to read the second half of Pariah - Chapter 15. It's under recent admission, I'll fix the archive tomorrow.

Too much bloody homework.

Ta!




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Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part II: [link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 1 : [link]
Enigma - Chapter 8: [link]

________


Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful,... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/17060245/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/17060245/ Mon, 25 Feb 2008 15:45:50 PST
My great grandpa died this morning, and my girlfriend broke up with just now, saying she found a guy she loves and that she was testing herself if she was gay and that she never truly liked me.

To top it off, when I asked her why she asked me out in the first place, she told me to stop acting like a wounded puppy.

So, equi's crying like a little bitch right now.

I've been sick with the flu the last week, and I've been so weak and stressed out from school that it's getting worse.

I don't know if I'll be updating soon, I'm in sort've a writer's block.

See you guys around.


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Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2 v.2: [link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 1 : [link]


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Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



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Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/16585000/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/16585000/ Sat, 26 Jan 2008 17:22:56 PST
So I finally finished Eternal!

The last chapter, and the ending paragraph.

Eternal - Chapter 28: [link]
Eternal - Ending: [link]




But I have idea that I want to run past my readers.

Do you guys enjoy stories like "Choose Your Own Adventures"?

Because, I'm beginning to develop a story where there are many twists and turns, based on the reader's choice.

You choose who you want to be, what you want to do, where you were born, and along the way, you can choose whether you want romance, with who if you do, and how the story ends.

Also, there will be scenes where you direct the conversation, but remember that it all affects the ending.

So, I wanted to know who might be interested in something like this.

And if you are, if you were kindly give me ideas on what kind of character you'd like to choose from, and what kind of character you'd like to fight at your side, or quite possibly be your lover.

Any other details you might want to throw in, feel free.

:3


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Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2 v.2: [link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 1 : [link]


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Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/16479764/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/16479764/ Sat, 19 Jan 2008 19:05:36 PST
Since I'm wasting all my effort, I'm just going to write short stories worthy of 3 views.

Contemplating writing those ending summaries as I said before, because I've lost all will to write.

This is just an update of chapters.

See you around.


_______

Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2 v.2: [link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 1 : [link]


________


Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by


"*chuckles* I have to agree that Vincent makes me smile every time he talks. The character interaction is beautiful, huh ^.^"

"Set is very cute, but I typically go towards the bad asses and well... Vincent is orgasmic "

comments by



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Next Submissions:
Pariah - Ending Summary
Eternal - Ending Summary




Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/16198439/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/16198439/ Tue, 01 Jan 2008 01:41:01 PST Eternal.

That was my freshman year in high school, too, and now I'm almost a senior.

I also started writing Pariah at the beginning of 2006, interrupting the last few chapters of Eternal to get Kendal and his story down and started.

My story writing was sparked by the Halo 2 Theme Song, where the character Amaya, The Last Shinobi of the Michi was born, and all my influence began from there.

I felt like reminiscing a bit...

Sooo, I'd like to share my resolutions now!

My resolutions:

♥ finish writing my story Pariah.
♥ lose 5lbs by March 30th, my 17th birthday.
♥ get a job.
♥ finish my school year with my 3.8GPA.
♥ enjoy every single day, and live like it's my last.

Wish me luck!

So, right now, I'm working on a revised version of Pariah - Chapter 2, which I will post up as soon as possible.

but for now, revisit chapter 1, and COMMENT!

Oh please comment! >.<


Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2: [link]



After that, I will work on Eternal's last chapter, which I reread and was HORRIFIED. So I'm going to revise that a bit.

And then I will go back to Pariah, where you'll finally find out what that damn book mean't.

Ugh, cause I don't like how I left you readers off..

So bear with me!

Love you, guys. <3


Most Recent Submissions:
Darkwatch - Prologue: [link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: [link]
Enigma - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 14: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part I: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 27: [link]

Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2: [link]


________


Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a chi... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/15546606/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/15546606/ Sat, 17 Nov 2007 18:34:28 PST

but I still haven't decided what I am going to do yet..

Maybe taking a break is for the best.

I'll see how everything goes after I update with the revised Pariah - Chapter 1.

Eternal is almost done!
(Just updated with Eternal - Chapter 27)


Despite the crappy grammar, thanks for all the inspiring comments!

Love you, gals! *muah*

UPDATE!

Just updated with Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2!!

I think I did really well, even though my mother said it was written like a bad romance novel.

So, check it out! Lemme know what you think!

Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2: [link]




Most Recent Submissions:
Darkwatch - Prologue: [link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: [link]
Enigma - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 14: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part I: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 27: [link]

Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2: [link]


________


Reviews:


Eternal:

"I am crying !!!!!
this was great! *still not believing it* you made me cry! O_O
All of this story is so good... thanks for sharing it. ^^"
by

"Wow. I think... I need to re-read it to get the full effect. Just... bloody heck, what an endin'. And there's stil another chapter yet...

I think you just blew my feet out from under me."
by



Pariah :

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it! "

"Oh no. Did I leave Seth out? Ugh, stupid, stupid, stupid! Let's try and get it right this time.

Seth might be unable to talk but his body language and actions more than make up for it. He's quite a charmer. Might not be a 'badass', but he's one cool cat.

Man, I'm a moron sometimes."

comments by http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/15350351/ Sat, 03 Nov 2007 18:20:22 PDT
Being at a complete standstill for nearly three weeks, I decided that I was going to try and update with an updated version of Pariah - Chapter 1 since I wrote it over a year ago, and it's terrible.

But...

I let my mom read it... and she said it sounded like a "corny, romance novel".

And with that, all my inspiration drained.

So, I think this is the end, my friends.

It's time for old equin to give up trying to write.

Let's face it, I have no talent.

My dream of one day turning my stories into videogames is done.

I'm over it all..



but I won't leave my readers empty-handed.

I'm going to write a summary, explaining Pariah's entire storyline and ending, so you know what happens.

I'll do the same for Eternal and anything else that anyone would want to know the ending for.

I'm also thinking about just help spitting out ideas for stories that I was planning on writing, but since I won't be, maybe some other writer or artist might take interest in them.

Uhm.. I also made my own mediafire account, so I'll post up some songs that I listened to help me write.

Believe me, it's some beautiful music, and music is what inspired my very first story, anyway.


I'll post up Pariah's theme, opening credits, ending credits (if it were an anime or movie), and a few character's theme songs...



Forgive me, guys.

But I'm sick at failing at everything I love to do.

It's time to give this one up too.



In the next few days, expect the updated version of Pariah - Chapter 1, and some music.




I want to thank everyone who humored me for so long.

Believe me, just having my writing read was such a big deal to me.

Some comments that were left for me, by , , , and all my other great, devoted readers helped me out of my depression, and I appreciate all the time you all have spent on reading my stories.

Trust me, it made me so happy.

I would like to give a specific thanks to for drawing me my very first fanart for my stories EVER, and it was such a beautiful fanart that I will always treasure.

Thank you, Ankha!

(Btw, I'll still work on your story as payment for the fanart, but I still need the character sheets. )



Uhmm... I think that's all...

Thanks!


______________________________________
Most Recent Submissions:
Darkwatch - Prologue: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 14: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 23: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 24: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 25: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 26: [link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: [link]
Enigma - Chapter 6: [link]
Enigma - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part I: [link]

Next Sub... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/15036319/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/15036319/ Fri, 12 Oct 2007 22:02:11 PDT
So I'm sorry I haven't been updating more, folks.

Been so flippin' busy with school, and lately I've lost a lot of inspiration for my stories.

I try to write, but nothing comes out right.
Mostly in Pariah.

So bear with me, I'm trying my best to do what I can.

Added Enigma - Chapter 6 and Enigma - Chapter 7 to the archives, as well as Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part I.

Also, since I haven't been updating as much, I've lost alot of readers.

I used to get about 20-30 views per chapter, now I get about 6-18.

So I thank all you devoted readers!
I blow you kisses.

I'm going to try to edit Eternal - Chapter 27, since there are only two more chapters left in that story, and then I'm done with it forever! YES!

Anyway, please check out some of my other stories until I can get some more Pariah and Eternal up.

There's Enigma, the prequel to Eternal. It's about Simone's parents!


Kindred, a story about a ghost-possessed girl and her wolf shifting saviors. Fang and Shadow are adorable! (Hopefully, you'll all get to meet the Silencer, Ryuko.)

I really, really must insist you read The Progeny, as that will be one of my more higher-priority projects once I finish Pariah. I don't have a description for it yet, but it's about three guardians who must protect an angel for eternity to make amends for a crime they commited. (Angels are a -race-, in this story.)


There's also some character bio's on The Progeny, and a short quiz about the character Noah.

Check it out!


Added a new section: Stand Alone Pieces, which is mostly where I'll just put the chapters of stories that I won't be finishing. ( Denzel, the Angel of Death and Darkwatch are currently the only ones there. )

Uhmm.. if I think of anything else, I'll update..

*goes in search of inspiration*


Thankies.

-equi


______________________________________
Most Recent Submissions:
Darkwatch - Prologue: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 14: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 23: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 24: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 25: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 26: [link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: [link]
Enigma - Chapter 6: [link]
Enigma - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part I: [link]

Next Submissions:
Eternal - Chapter 27
Pariah - Chapter 15 - Part II
Kindred - Chapter 4
Enigma - Chapter 8



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Ken... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14839378/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14839378/ Sat, 29 Sep 2007 10:12:05 PDT
I added all of the new Eternal chapters, 23-26, and a prologue to a story I was planning on writing, Darkwatch. Check it out and let me know what you think!

I also readded the chapters for Enigma, I lost those somewhere in the updates. <<;

Just added Enigma - Chapter 5, and almost finished with Chapter 6.

I'm going to work on Pariah this weekend, but this scene is pissing me off and I'm having a hard time -wanting- to write it.

But I will, dun worry.

Added a new section: Stand Alone Pieces, which is mostly where I'll just put the chapters of stories that I won't be finishing. ( Denzel, the Angel of Death and Darkwatch are currently the only ones there. )

Uhmm.. if I think of anything else, I'll update!


Thanks!

-equi


______________________________________
Most Recent Submissions:
Darkwatch - Prologue: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 14: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 23: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 24: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 25: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 26: [link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 27/Pariah - Chapter 15/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14666677/ Sun, 16 Sep 2007 21:56:04 PDT
I added all of the new Eternal chapters, 23-26, and a prologue to a story I was planning on writing, Darkwatch. Check it out and let me know what you think!

I also readded the chapters for Enigma, I lost those somewhere in the updates. <<;

Uhmm.. if I think of anything else, I'll update!


Thanks!

-equi

________________________________________ ______Most Recent Submissions:
Darkwatch - Prologue: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 14: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 23: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 24: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 25: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 26: [link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 27/Pariah - Chapter 15/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: [l... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14639178/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14639178/ Sat, 15 Sep 2007 02:58:38 PDT 2. Each person tagged must post 8 random (hopefully interesting) facts about themselves.
3. Tags should write a journal of these facts.
4. At the end of the post 8 more bloggers are tagged and named.
5. Go to their page and leave a comment telling them that they're tagged..

1. I am a social phobic, and a phobic of school. (Diagnosed by a psychiatrist.)

2. I'm not good at talking about myself. x.x

3. I hate when people smack when they chew, or when they chew ultra loud.

4. After a long day of being around a lot of people, I like to spend the rest of the day alone and to myself.

5. I love coming up with new, and hopefully original, ideas for stories.

6. I got my nosed pierced on my 14th birthday. <<; It was my mother's idea. (which she now says it's mine.)

7. I hate the way my teeth feel in the morning, and the bad taste in my mouth. I nearly gag.

8. I hate hypocritical people, and people who ask for advice and then not follow.


I know that's a terrible tag, but I've been so exhausted from school, my brain is dead right now. o.-

]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14535546/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14535546/ Fri, 07 Sep 2007 19:07:44 PDT

Although, it sort've sucked, because they screwed up my schedule
majorly.

Well, here's my schedule (that I worked 2 hours to get):

1st period: Japanese 1
2nd period: US History
3rd period: Science 3
4th period: School Newspaper
5th period: PE
6th period: NO PERIOD! I get a minimum day.

And then I'm going to be home-schooled 2-3 hours a week for English

3 and Algebra A, although technically I should be in Geometry, but I won't complain. o.-

My science teacher is also my PE coach, who's really nice and talks to me personally a lot. So it's cool.

I'm only worried about the School Newspaper, but if I get too overwhelmed, they said I can switch out.

So YAY!

Hooray for Japanese! I'll know how to speak it. (Although I know a lot already. >>
=x

Ohh, please reread and comment on Pariah - Chapter 14!
I only received one comment and 6 views, and even though that's a lot of attention, I'm used to my 16-20 page views with 30-40 comments.

A lot of good stuff happens if you haven't read it yet!

I'll give you a preview: a kiss.

Bua hahaha, go read!


________________________________________ ___________


Words from equin:

Yay, I finally FINISHED 14!

Please reread, as there are new scenes added to it.

Thank you, my freaky darlings!

Pariah - Chapter 14 (completed!): [link]



ALSO

has given me the idea that maybe I should write a fanfic for Drakengard since I love it so much.

I believe I will, since I was already coming up with ideas to write a story about a dragon rider.

I've never written a fanfic, so wish me luck!

I'm going to finish Pariah before I work on any of my other project, so don't worry!

And forgive me, Eternal fans!

I'll try to get my butt movin' to edit Eternal, because it's right at the end! x.x;


________________________________________ ______Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 14: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 23/Pariah - Chapter 14 Part II/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel du... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14510876/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14510876/ Thu, 06 Sep 2007 00:21:51 PDT Words from equin:

Yay, I finally FINISHED 14!

Please reread, as there are new scenes added to it.

Thank you, my freaky darlings!

Pariah - Chapter 14 (completed!): [link]



ALSO

has given me the idea that maybe I should write a fanfic for Drakengard since I love it so much.

I believe I will, since I was already coming up with ideas to write a story about a dragon rider.

I've never written a fanfic, so wish me luck!

I'm going to finish Pariah before I work on any of my other project, so don't worry!

And forgive me, Eternal fans!

I'll try to get my butt movin' to edit Eternal, because it's right at the end! x.x;


________________________________________ ______Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 14: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 23/Pariah - Chapter 14 Part II/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14434824/ Sat, 01 Sep 2007 02:02:35 PDT Omg, omg!

Recently, I've had this obsession with two games.

Drakengard and Drakengard II.

From what I've read, I've fallen in love with the stories.

They're dark and not quite.. happy.
xD

Caim is the main character in Drakengard, and happens to be soul-pacted with a dragon. The pact is on his tongue, which makes him mute, but his actions and facial expressions more than make up for it.

He's just like how I like my men: powerful, insane, and emotionally broken.

On top of that, he's brown-haired blue-eyed, which is indeed sexy.

BUT

I bought Drakengard II two days ago, and I've been obsessed with it.

The main character in Drakengard II is named Nowe.

He's not mute, but he happens to be a "dragon child", which they haven't explained quite yet, but I know he's not considered a "normal human", and was left in the woods, where a dragon, Legna, raises him.

At first, I wasn't attracted to Nowe. He's quite thin, but as I see more and more of him, I'm starting to fall for him, too. He's noble, and quite adorable.



There should be more fanart of Caim and Nowe!

They're both smexy!

Anywho, I had to get that off my chest.

GO DRAKENGARD!

(P.S. That's why I haven't been working on Pariah. Don't hate on the game! It's -that- good!)

















Words from equin:

Alright, alright, so I got my butt movin' and got some more Pariah up.

Pariah - Chapter 14 - Part I: [link]

I'm working on the second half for a few more hours tonight, and then hopefully finishing it up by tomorrow night.

And (I won't make any promises!) I hope to have some time to edit Eternal tomorrow so I can finish up that damn story. It's -almost- finished! So hang in there Eternal fans! You'll see what'll become of Dorian, Sebastian, Evette, Arbinger, and Simone's crew.

Thanks for all your support!

And make sure to comment!

Update: Added a little more to Pariah! I will try to finish it tonight, but I'm tired, so we'll see.. Most likely finish it up by tomorrow. But for now.. go say hello to the creepy boy in the white hood.











________________________________________ ________________
Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 14 - Part I : [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 23/Pariah - Chapter 14 Part II/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14404084/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14404084/ Thu, 30 Aug 2007 18:40:10 PDT Words from equin:

Alright, alright, so I got my butt movin' and got some more Pariah up.

Pariah - Chapter 14 - Part I: [link]

I'm working on the second half for a few more hours tonight, and then hopefully finishing it up by tomorrow night.

And (I won't make any promises!) I hope to have some time to edit Eternal tomorrow so I can finish up that damn story. It's -almost- finished! So hang in there Eternal fans! You'll see what'll become of Dorian, Sebastian, Evette, Arbinger, and Simone's crew.

Thanks for all your support!

And make sure to comment!

Update: Added a little more to Pariah! I will try to finish it tonight, but I'm tired, so we'll see.. Most likely finish it up by tomorrow. But for now.. go say hello to the creepy boy in the white hood.











________________________________________ ________________
Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 14 - Part I : [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 23/Pariah - Chapter 14 Part II/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14248837/ Mon, 20 Aug 2007 00:56:32 PDT Words from equin: Well, I forced myself out of my depression and finally got some work done. Posted up the second half of Pariah - Chapter 13, and I'll now be working on Pariah - Chapter 14.

I assure you, things'll start picking up again in Pariah in the next chapter.

Also, I'll be editting and posting up some Eternal tonight, or tomorrow.

Thanks for hanging in there with me!



xoxo
- equin






________________________________________ ________________
Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 13 (updated!) : [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 23/Pariah - Chapter 14/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 11: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 13 (Completed!): [link]
Pariah - Chapter 14: In developme... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14094537/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/14094537/ Thu, 09 Aug 2007 17:56:58 PDT I'm going to be too busy crying.

I lost my best friend today..

We got into a huge fight last week, and I told him that I didn't want to speak to him ever again.

But then I realized I didn't want to lose my best friend over something stupid, like me being depressed one night.

So I've been trying to call him every night since then.

He finally answered today, and told me that he's really sick.
Something wrong with his kidneys.

Me: "I really missed you..."

Him: "Hm."

Me: ".. You going to be okay?"

Him: "I'm going to the doctors."

Me: "Oh, okay.. Look, I'm really sorry about that fight we had last week, I've been trying to apologize everyday since then.."

Him: "Well, I never got any of your calls."

Me: "Oh.. Well, I really missed you, and I really wanted to talk to you.."

Him: "..."

Me: ".. Do you want to talk to me?"

Him: "No."

Me: "Oh... well... i'll just.. go then.. Bye.."

Him: "Yeah. *hang up*"


I lost my best friend cause I was being stupid one night..

So I need to go weep in my own self-pity for a few days.

Sorry.

I'll try to have Pariah and something else up by next week.

-equi



________________________________________ ________________
Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 13 : [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 23/Pariah - Chapter 13/14/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah -... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13993224/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13993224/ Thu, 02 Aug 2007 21:46:39 PDT

The 1st player of this "game" starts with the topic "6 weird habits/facts/dislikes about yourself" and people who get tagged must write in their journals about their 6 weird habits/facts/dislikes as well as state this rule clearly.

In the end, you need to choose the next 6 people to be tagged and list their names. Don't forget to leave a comment that says "you're tagged" in their deviant page comments and tell them to read yours.

1) I am a diagnosed social phobic. I don't talk to people unless spoken to, and I avoid situations where I am in large crowds. o.O

2) I am also a diagnosed school phobic. I have a tremendous fear of school which makes it impossible for me to take normal classes. I'm in a program where I stay in one classroom all day so I can deal with school. If people try to force me to go to school, I have panic attacks and try to kill myself. No joke. o.o

3) I HATE the way my brother chews his food, and the way my mother smirks after she demands you do something. I want to smack them across the faces when they do.

4) My life is a fairy tale nightmare. I'm like Cinderella of this modern day n' age. My mother and brother treat me like shit, I'm forced to clean everything, and I'm the only one who's trying to do something with their life.

5) I like telling my own stories, but I could never be a writer. I hate how people tell you to word your sentences, and tell you what you can and can't do, and I want to go, "Fuck you, it's my story," when people do say something.

6) I can only write when I'm inspired by someone/something that urges me to write, or when I'm extremely depressed. I emerged myself into my story's world, and I'm able to escape my reality. Another reason why I like to write.

I TAG:

Uhm, I'd rather not.
o.o

You can do this if you want.
xD


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 11: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 13 (first half): [link]
Pariah - Chapter 14: In development.

Chapter Archive:
Eternal - Chapter 1: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 2: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 3: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 4: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 5: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 6: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 7: http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13865924/ Thu, 26 Jul 2007 18:09:27 PDT Words from the equi:

Alright, well, I posted Eternal - Chapter 22, Kindred - Chapter 3, and the first half of Pariah - Chapter 13. I have one more scene to be written in 13, which I'm having a hard time, so I didn't want to delay updates any further, so I thought I'd post what I had so far.


I'll let you guys know when it's updated!



UPDATE Thurs/July/26th: I just posted Enigma - Chapter 3!
UPDATE: Fri/July/27th: I just posted Enigma - Chapter 4!

Check out my latest story: Enigma.
It is a prequel to the story Eternal.

It has professional thieves, knights, and shizophrenic necromancing summoners...

o.o

ENIGMA
Enigma - Prologue - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 1 - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 2 - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 3 - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 4 - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 5 - editing process.
-equi





Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 13 : [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 3: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 23/Pariah - Chapter 13/14/Kindred - Chapter 4/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13665943/ Mon, 09 Jul 2007 01:32:56 PDT Words from the equi:

YAY!
I finally broke through my writer's block on Pariah, so I'm clickety-clicking away at it, finally finishing Pariah - Chapter 12, so, I'll try to have Pariah - Chapter 13 up by next week. Also, I'll put up editted chapters of Eternal, Kindred, and Enigma within the next few days.



Check out my latest story: Enigma.
It is a prequel to the story Eternal.

It has professional thieves, knights, and shizophrenic necromancing summoners...

o.o

ENIGMA
Enigma - Prologue - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 1 - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 2 - [link]

-equi



Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 12 : [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 2: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 22/Pariah - Chapter 13/Kindred - Chapter 3/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 11: http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13523290/ Thu, 28 Jun 2007 12:34:42 PDT Words from the equi:

Just added my story Enigma.

It is a prequel to the story Eternal.

Check it out!

It has professional thieves, knights, and shizophrenic necromancing summoners...

o.o

ENIGMA
Enigma - Prologue - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 1 - [link]
Enigma - Chapter 2 - [link]

-equi



Most Recent Submissions:
Pariah - Chapter 12 - Preview: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: -[link]
Kindred - Chapter 2: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 22/Pariah - Chapter 12/Kindred - Chapter 3/Enigma - Chapter 3-6/



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 11: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12 - Preview: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12: In development.


As of May 30th: Pariah is on temporary hiatus. I will try to have a chapter submitted by next week.






... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13349846/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13349846/ Fri, 22 Jun 2007 21:26:20 PDT Words from the equi:

Just posted up Eternal - Chapter 21!


Still working on Pariah - Chapter 12, but I am also working on a bio page like I did for The Progeny's characters.


Thank you all for supporting me through the rough times.
It's -always- appreciated.

Still working on Pariah, unsure when I'll have it up.
Be patient, dears.


Hugs for all my lovely readers.


-equi



Most Recent Submissions:
The Progeny - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12 - Preview: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 20: [link]
The Progeny - OC Quiz - Noah: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 21: - [link]

Next Submission: /Eternal - Chapter 22/Pariah - Chapter 12



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)


Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 11: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12 - Preview: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12: In develo... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13337178/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13337178/ Thu, 14 Jun 2007 01:22:21 PDT
_You_
1. Name: Mariah
2. Nickname(s): Riah, Mo, Momo, Mokie, Mokiebear
3. Birthday: March 30th
4. Place of Birth: Anaheim Hills, California
5. Zodiac Sign: Aries
7. Education: Junior in HS
8. Schools you went to: Orangeview Jr. High, Western HS
9. Occupation: Unemployed
10. Residence: Anaheim
11. Screen Names: equinexus, Sen Astrid, DementedCookieBear

_Your Appearance_
12. Hair Color: Dark, dark brown.
13. Hair Length: To shoulders.
14. Eye color: Golden brown.
15. Best Feature: Uhh. There's your answer.
16. Height: 5' 1"
17. Braces?: Nope
18. Glasses?: Sometimes
19. Tattoos: Nope
20. Piercing: Ears and nose.
21. Righty or Lefty: A creature of left.

_Your 'Firsts'_
22. First best friend: ... Nick? I dunno.
23. First Award: Best Literature of the Year
24. First Sport You Joined: Volleyball at Orangeview.
25. First Pet: Some flea-ridden cat I don't remember.
26. First Real Vacation: San Diego
27. First Concert: Meteora World Tour
28. First Love: Do we ever really know when it's love?

_Favorites_
29. Movie: Equilibrium/Gladiator
30. TV Show: House/AFV
31. Color: Blue/Green/Brown/Black... hell, I like most colors.
32. Music: Anything that sounds good.
33. Band: Some band.
34. Song Right Now: Death Note soundtrack.
36. Candy: Anything sour and chewy.
37. Sport to Play: Volleyball
38. Restaurant: Not sure.
39. Favorite brand to wear: I don't care.
40. Store: I don't really shop. Never any money.
41. School Subject favorite: Going home. -.-
42. Animal: I love all animals.
43. Book: Artemis Fowl series.
44. Magazine: Not sure.
45. Shoes: I like 3 inch pumped sandals, or anything that makes me taller.

_Currently_
46. Feeling: A bit worn down by life right now.
47. Single or Taken? Single
49. Eating: Nothing. I avoid eating.
50. Drinking: Nothing.
51. Typing: Trying to finish Pariah.
52. Online? ...
53. Listening To: Nothing right now.
54. Thinking About: Why the hell my life is mine.
55. Wanting To: Go RP and become my alter-ego.
56. Watching: The news.
57. Wearing: PJs.

_Future_
58. Want Kids?: Never. I hate kids.
59. Want to be Married: No. Men are pigs.
60. Careers in Mind: My dreams are always shattered when I tell.
61. Where do you want to live? Costa Mesa near the beach.
62. Car: Yeah, right. My broke ass family and a car?

_Which is Better With The Opposite Sex_
63. Hair color: Dark
64. Hair length: To slide my fingers through.
65. Eye color: Light. Blue/green drive me crazy.
66. Measurements: ... o.o;
67. Cute or Sexy: Cute is sexy.
68. Lips or Eyes: Both, please.
69. Hugs or Kisses: I hate french kissing. Yuck.
70. Short or Tall: Just right.
71. Easygoing or serious: Serious when he needs to be.
72. Romantic or Spontaneous: Don't care.
74. Sensitive or Loud: Tired of the criers.
75. Hook-up or Relationship: Relationship
77. Trouble Maker or Hesitant One: Hesitant

_Have you ever_
78. Kissed a Stranger: No.
79. Had Alcohol: Yes.
80. Smoked: Yes.
81. Ran Away From Home: Twice.
82. Broken a bone: Fractured my finger.
85. Broken Someones Heart: I'm a heartbreaker.
86. Broken Up With Someone: Yup.
87. Cried When Someone Died: When my pets die. o.o
88. Cried At School: -.-

_Do You Believe In_
89. God: There's somebody enjoying our suffering.
90. Miracles: No.
91. Love At First sight: No.
93. Aliens: Space is huge. There are other universes somewhere.
94. Soul Mates: Perhaps.
95. Heaven: Depends on what kind of Heaven.
96. Hell: Depends on what kind of Hell.
98. Kissing on The First Date: Depends.
99.Horoscopes: People who sit around, trying to make other people feel better.

_Answer Truthfully_
100. Is there someone you want but you know you can't have? Of course, but I try not to care anymore.

________________________________________ ________________


Well, if you got through that long, dreary, survery you'd know that equi isn't in the best of moods right now.

My mother has a drinking problem and she got fired from her job about a month ago.

So her drinking hit full force, and she didn't try finding a job for awhile.

Now the bills are here, and everything is -my- fault.

I'm 16, and she wants me t... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13231476/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13231476/ Sat, 09 Jun 2007 18:42:10 PDT Words from the equi:

I was planning on having Pariah up by Monday, but then I realized I have tons of homework and studying for my finals on Monday.

D:

I'm not even halfway done with Chapter 12, so I'm sorry for misinforming you.

>.<

I never realized how long it took me to get inspiration for each chapter. >.>

I will try to have it up by Friday, since my last day of school is on Wednesday.

I've also put up the first chapter of my story The Progeny along with some of the character bio's, and their character themes.

I'm planning on having Pariah and Eternal's character themes up soon.

For now, I hope The Progeny gives you a little fix until then.

Still trying to get myself to edit Eternal - Chapter 20, but I've lost so much interest, I can't get my lazy ass to do it. <.<

So I'll try to have that up, soon, too.

Thankies!




Most Recent Submission: The Progeny - Chapter 1: [link]
Next Submission: Eternal - Chapter 20/Pariah - Chapter 12



Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.


Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)

Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 11: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12: In development.


As of May 30th: Pariah is on temporary hiatus. I will try to have a chapter submitted by next... ]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13158349/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13158349/ Fri, 01 Jun 2007 21:24:37 PDT Most Recent Submission: Pariah - Chapter 11 [link]
Next Submission: Eternal - Chapter 20


Please comment! I want feedback!
Make sure to read chapters in chronological order if you don't want spoilers!

For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:



PARIAH -

Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the King’s request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendal’s true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man.


Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: PG-13 Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)

Chapter Archive:
Pariah - Chapter 1: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 2: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 3: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 4: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 5: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 6: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 7: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 8: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 10: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 11: [link]
Pariah - Chapter 12: In development.

As of May 30th: Pariah is on temporary hiatus. I will try to have a chapter submitted by next week.






ETERNAL -

A complex tale about an arrogant and self-centered superior vampire by the name of Dorian. Fueled by the hatred he harbors for his own kind, Dorian works for a vampire extermination company called The Solution. There, he holds the high rank of Commander. While investigating a murder believed to have been committed by a vampire, Dorian and his “children”, Sebastian and Evette, are thrown right into the middle of the eternal battle between the Angels of Heaven and the Demons of Hell.

Genre: Action/Adventure/Supernatural
Rated: R for Graphic violence, brief language, brief nudity, and other mature subject matter.



Chapter Archive:
Eternal - Chapter 1: [link]
Eternal - Chapter 2: http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13106813/ Sun, 27 May 2007 21:55:27 PDT Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II - SUBMITTED!
Pariah - Chapter 10 - SUBMITTED!

Please comment!
I am looking for feedback!

Pariah: Tobias and Seth share their secrets about their past lives, their struggle with the disease and the true creators of the Sacrosanct. Now, as they trail Domitian to his home to retrieve the journal, what other secrets will be revealed along the way?

Read and find out!

Feedback is always loved and it gives me more of an incentive to read your stories as well.

Recently, a song has been brought to my attention.

Princes of The Old Kingdom is my nickname for it, because I believe it's the theme of both Seth and Tobias as brothers, trying to help each other through their ever tragic lives.

It is really named: Promised Pain (116)
From the game: Xenosaga Episode III

You can download it here: [link]

I would highly recommend downloading it, as it is a beautiful song, and I believe it gives and shares my character's emotions.

In the song, I believe Tobias is represented by the violins (for his child-like attitude, anguish, struggle to love his brother, and vengeance for his pain), while Seth is represented by the heavy beats and opera singing (revealing his guilt, passion, and the need for the love from his brother).

Together, it shows their strength to help each other through the centuries of their lives, and the overall love they have for each other as brothers.

The song itself reminds me of a battle of words between the brothers.
It's almost as though Tobias is trying to convince Seth not to do something terrible, and how Seth is explaining his reasons for his actions.

Trust me, this song is well worth it to download.

If you do, let me know how it made you feel.
I would really appreciate it.
(And I will give you hugs. )

UPDATE:

Eternal - Chapter 19 - Part II - SUBMITTED!

Please comment!
I am looking for feedback!

Eternal: Lord Vampire Dorian Arbinger, his adopted human children, Sebastian and Evette, and the lost Archangel Simone, have found their way to the Broken Seven, and spoke to the angel Gerard. Being led by Dorian's cowboy father, Lord Vampire Wolfegang Arbinger, they must now make their way to Blackwater Cave; a cave only visible at dusk. Will the tension between father and son settle? Will Simone finally speak to Dorian about their emotional attachment to each other? Read and find out.

Yay!
So I got both of the Part II's for each chapter up.
(Phew, those were some long chapters! D: )

So go read and commeeeent, and I'll return the favor.

(equi isn't doing so well emotionally right now, so please leave comments to cheer her up..)

Much love.
-equi

]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13069702/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13069702/ Sat, 26 May 2007 00:41:57 PDT UPDATE: Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II is posted!

I've only been using my DA account for about two weeks, and I've gotten 300+ page views.

Thank you to all who have taken interest in my work.
It's means -so- much to me!

Make sure you leave comments on my stories!


Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II - SUBMITTED!
Eternal - Chapter 19 - Part I - SUBMITTED!

PLEASE comment on my stories! I am looking for feedback!

Pariah: Well; a few more things are cleared up about the mysterious 'mute' Seth and the strange, yet adorable, Tobias. What did Domitian say about them? A kingdom that fell? Find out in the latest chapter. (The focus will change from the two in a bit, don't worry. )

Eternal: In the last chapter, Dorian got to let out some frustration on Evette, much to Sebastian's dislike. It's actually quite funny. Now with Evette by their side, the vampire Dorian, the angel Simone, and Dorian's adoptive childer continue their way to Verdana and the Broken Seven, to find the Archangel Gerard. (A new character is introduced. Go see him. Ladies, prepare to drool. *hands out napkins*)

-equi

]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13046557/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13046557/ Wed, 23 May 2007 09:58:09 PDT Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I - SUBMITTED!
Eternal - Chapter 19 - Part I - SUBMITTED!

PLEASE comment on my stories! I am looking for feedback!

Pariah: Well; a few more things are cleared up about the mysterious 'mute' Seth and the strange, yet adorable, Tobias. What did Domitian say about them? A kingdom that fell? Find out in the latest chapter. (The focus will change from the two in a bit, don't worry. )

Eternal: In the last chapter, Dorian got to let out some frustration on Evette, much to Sebastian's dislike. It's actually quite funny. Now with Evette by their side, the vampire Dorian, the angel Simone, and Dorian's adoptive childer continue their way to Verdana and the Broken Seven, to find the Archangel Gerard. (A new character is introduced. Go see him. Ladies, prepare to drool. *hands out napkins*)

-equi

]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13027103/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/13027103/ Sun, 20 May 2007 14:45:55 PDT
If you haven't, you should go read, to understand this.

Even if you did read, I know you're a bit confused by the whole scene that just unfolded, but I promise that in the next chapter, a lot more is explained.

It might take me a bit to edit the next chapter, and I might turn it into two parts because it is so long. (It was hell editing Chapter 8. x.x)

But after the next chapter, Pariah's posting is going to slow down.

I have only written up to chapter 12, and I still have to plan out and write the ending to perfection.

Meanwhile, you can go read Eternal, as I have finished it 100%.
UPDATE: Some people are being confused that I finished posting Eternal. No, no, no. I've just finished writing it completely, and I have to finish posting it. That's what I mean't. xD

I know Eternal doesn't seem to be the majority's favorite, but it's a story worth paying attention to anyway.

It's a bit more darker than Pariah throughout the entire story, with less jokes and less happy characters, but the story does have some important lessons and I'm sure you can relate to some of the characters, metaphorically.

If Pariah takes more time than I expected, I will begin to post Kindred, the story about the werewolves and wolf shifters.

I'm sorry for this slowdown, but don't worry, I have an outline for the ending of Pariah, I just have to type it out.

*nods*

-equi

]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/12984691/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/12984691/ Fri, 18 May 2007 14:25:00 PDT UPDATE:

Eternal - Chapter 18: SUBMITTED!
Pariah - Chapter 7: SUBMITTED!
Pariah - Chapter 8: SUBMITTED!

Enjoy!

(now back to your originally typed journal)


Okayokayokay.

I've been writing my stories for nearly two years, and I've never received ANYTHING like this before:

Comment from 'Pariah - Chapter 4'

"This is comin' along wonderfully. The way the characters are portrayed is very well done; they each have their own seperate identities that both clash with and compliment one another. The relationships between each of the characters is developin' quite interestin'ly. And some of the lines have my snickerin' so much that my family is givin' me odd looks. Such as:

“There’s also a smartass in chains, making witty remarks when he’s in no position to.” - Kendal is fast becomin' a favourite character. He has no-nonsense, down-to-earth persona that leaves no room for arguements, and he's not above defendin' what or who he cares for. That's not easy to find in a pesron.

“But what about me? I’m cute, too.” - Might act all tough, but Roarke's still like any other child. Ever seen TMNT? If so, then he reminds me a little of Raphael, minus the language. Cheeky little bugger. ^^

“They do, but as you can see, Tobias and Seth aren’t normal.” - I don't know what, but somethin' about Vincent always makes me crack up. Not the effect you were lookin' for, huh? I like this tough and uncarin' attitude he seems to have. Is he a big softy underneath? Maybe not...

“That’s how I greet all my friends.” - . . . I feel so sorry for his enemies. Tobias is my favourite of your characters. He's still like a child, no matter how old he is, but he can act serious when it is needed. It'll be interestin' to find out some more about his past.

All in all, this story is as well-written as Eternal, though please take no offence when I add that it has a better storyline than Eternal. Great characterisation, wonderful plot, a definite A+ for the layout of the story. And I really can't think of what else to say other than:

I love it!" Silvercalovere


*squeals happily*

That was the best comment I've ever received and like, I almost cried.
<.<

So yeah, now I'm dancing happily at the computer and my mother is laughing at me.

Oh, well.

Check out her work!

Thank you, Silvercalovere.
You rock.
:3 <3

]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/12983678/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/12983678/ Wed, 16 May 2007 22:02:52 PDT loved it!

That cheers me up, A LOT, knowing that all my hard work isn't complete crap.

She said it made her laugh, and cry, and that I am going to be one of the best new manga writers or novelists.

*squeals*

Anyway, SKETCHES!

Comment on my sketches!

Dorian is in my gallery, and Tobias and Vincent are in my scraps!

Comment on my stories!

I see people are reading, but I'm not getting any feedback.
D:

Please comment, that's why I'm putting them on here.

I would appreciate it, and it will give me more of an incentive to read your stories, too!

So please.
You'll have my love if you do. <3

Thank you.
-equi

]]> ~equinexus http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/12965277/ http://equinexus.deviantart.com/journal/12965277/ Wed, 16 May 2007 01:39:09 PDT
I posted a few sketches of my characters, including Dorian, the main character from my story Eternal.

There's also Vincent and Tobias from Pariah posted.

I have a sketch of Sebastian from Eternal, but he looks a little boyish rather than a man. *shrugs* I might as well.



So, if you want a quick peek at some of the characters (the sketches are nothing special), then take a look at my gallery.

(Dorian's in my gallery. Tobias and Vincent from Pariah is in scraps.)


I might be adding sketches often.



UPDATE:

So, instead of posting Sebastian from Eternal, I posted Kino from my latest story.

It's by far my worst sketch, but hell, it's a tiny image of him.
D:

Wait for Tsuna. Tsuna is in Kino's story, and I guarantee... Tsuna is going to be.. SMEXY!

xD

Okay, I'm done.
<.<

]]> ~equinexus