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        <pubDate>Thu, 23 May 2013 13:49:48 PDT</pubDate>        
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                <title>shadow</title>
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                <pubDate>Fri, 05 Mar 2010 16:47:47 PST</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">shadow</media:title>
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                <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ <sub>the shadows are after me,<br /><br />---<br /><i>flickr: <a class="external" href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.flickr.com/badbodydoubletrouble">[link]</a><br />tumblr: <a class="external" href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.badbodydoubletrouble.tumblr.com">[link]</a></i></sub> ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th00.deviantart.net/fs70/150/i/2010/064/0/c/shadow_by_forgottenx.jpg" height="150" width="148"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/300W/i/2010/064/0/c/shadow_by_forgottenx.jpg" height="305" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/064/0/c/shadow_by_forgottenx.jpg" height="609" width="600" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ <sub>the shadows are after me,<br /><br />---<br /><i>flickr: <a class="external" href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.flickr.com/badbodydoubletrouble">[link]</a><br />tumblr: <a class="external" href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.badbodydoubletrouble.tumblr.com">[link]</a></i></sub><br /><div><img src="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/300W/i/2010/064/0/c/shadow_by_forgottenx.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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                <title>Illusions No 4</title>
                <link>http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-4-61157435</link>
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                <pubDate>Wed, 01 Aug 2007 07:57:12 PDT</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">Illusions No 4</media:title>
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        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">c00lpix</media:credit>
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        <media:copyright url="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com">Copyright 2007-2013 ~c00lpix</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ <a href="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-1-61156400">[link]</a> Illusion 1<br /><a href="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-2-61157098">[link]</a> Illusion 2<br /><a href="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-3-61157173">[link]</a> Illusion 3<br /><a href="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-4-61157435">[link]</a> Illusion 4 ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th07.deviantart.net/fs18/150/i/2007/213/8/9/Illusions_No_4_by_c00lpix.jpg" height="98" width="150"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th04.deviantart.net/fs18/300W/i/2007/213/8/9/Illusions_No_4_by_c00lpix.jpg" height="196" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs18/i/2007/213/8/9/Illusions_No_4_by_c00lpix.jpg" height="392" width="600" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ <a href="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-1-61156400">[link]</a> Illusion 1<br /><a href="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-2-61157098">[link]</a> Illusion 2<br /><a href="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-3-61157173">[link]</a> Illusion 3<br /><a href="http://c00lpix.deviantart.com/art/Illusions-No-4-61157435">[link]</a> Illusion 4<br /><div><img src="http://th04.deviantart.net/fs18/300W/i/2007/213/8/9/Illusions_No_4_by_c00lpix.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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                <title>Blade Warrior</title>
                <link>http://widjita.deviantart.com/art/Blade-Warrior-107148666</link>
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                <pubDate>Tue, 23 Dec 2008 00:40:47 PST</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">Blade Warrior</media:title>
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        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">widjita</media:credit>
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        <media:copyright url="http://widjita.deviantart.com">Copyright 2008-2013 *widjita</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ How to make the water effect: fill a ballon with water and swing the sword to destroy it by the model.<br /><br />Photo by me<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /><br />This is what you get when you daydream too much..<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/letters/D.gif" border="0" align="middle" /> D<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/biggrin.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" /><br /><br />edit by <a href="http://afvoetomath.deviantart.com/"><img class="avatar" src="http://a.deviantart.com/avatars/a/f/afvoetomath.gif" width="50" height="50" alt=":iconafvoetomath:" title="afvoetomath"/></a> and me<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />  you are the best bro..<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/biggrin.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" /> ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th02.deviantart.net/fs39/150/f/2008/358/3/2/Blade_Warior_by_widjita.jpg" height="109" width="150"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th04.deviantart.net/fs39/300W/f/2008/358/3/2/Blade_Warior_by_widjita.jpg" height="218" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs39/f/2008/358/3/2/Blade_Warior_by_widjita.jpg" height="654" width="900" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ How to make the water effect: fill a ballon with water and swing the sword to destroy it by the model.<br /><br />Photo by me<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /><br />This is what you get when you daydream too much..<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/letters/D.gif" border="0" align="middle" /> D<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/biggrin.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" /><br /><br />edit by <a href="http://afvoetomath.deviantart.com/"><img class="avatar" src="http://a.deviantart.com/avatars/a/f/afvoetomath.gif" width="50" height="50" alt=":iconafvoetomath:" title="afvoetomath"/></a> and me<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />  you are the best bro..<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/biggrin.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" /><br /><div><img src="http://th04.deviantart.net/fs39/300W/f/2008/358/3/2/Blade_Warior_by_widjita.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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                <title>remember</title>
                <link>http://photosentez.deviantart.com/art/remember-81143318</link>
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                <pubDate>Thu, 27 Mar 2008 03:52:46 PDT</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">remember</media:title>
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        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">photosentez</media:credit>
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        <media:copyright url="http://photosentez.deviantart.com">Copyright 2008-2013 ~photosentez</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ gokhan susler<br />model: handan eks&#305;oglu ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs29/150/i/2008/087/7/b/remember_by_photosentez.jpg" height="150" width="100"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th07.deviantart.net/fs29/300W/i/2008/087/7/b/remember_by_photosentez.jpg" height="450" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs29/i/2008/087/7/b/remember_by_photosentez.jpg" height="900" width="600" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ gokhan susler<br />model: handan eks&#305;oglu<br /><div><img src="http://th07.deviantart.net/fs29/300W/i/2008/087/7/b/remember_by_photosentez.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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                <title>Coffee with milk</title>
                <link>http://stridsberg.deviantart.com/art/Coffee-with-milk-130417480</link>
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                <pubDate>Tue, 21 Jul 2009 22:35:39 PDT</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">Coffee with milk</media:title>
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        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">Stridsberg</media:credit>
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        <media:copyright url="http://stridsberg.deviantart.com">Copyright 2009-2013 ~Stridsberg</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ Thank you so much for "dropping" by! <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/heart.gif" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart" /><br /><br />Have a fantastic day!!! <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/hug.gif" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" title="Hug" /><br /><br /><br />/ Andreas Stridsberg &#169;<br /><br />My website -&gt; <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.mystic-pic.com">[link]</a><br />My Blog -&gt; <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.freewebs.com/mysticpic/apps/blog/">[link]</a> ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th05.deviantart.net/fs46/150/f/2009/202/0/7/07d9a116d1ac547085e34a2e6287057d.jpg" height="150" width="150"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th08.deviantart.net/fs46/300W/f/2009/202/0/7/07d9a116d1ac547085e34a2e6287057d.jpg" height="300" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs46/f/2009/202/0/7/07d9a116d1ac547085e34a2e6287057d.jpg" height="800" width="800" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ Thank you so much for "dropping" by! <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/heart.gif" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart" /><br /><br />Have a fantastic day!!! <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/hug.gif" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" title="Hug" /><br /><br /><br />/ Andreas Stridsberg &#169;<br /><br />My website -&gt; <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.mystic-pic.com">[link]</a><br />My Blog -&gt; <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.freewebs.com/mysticpic/apps/blog/">[link]</a><br /><div><img src="http://th08.deviantart.net/fs46/300W/f/2009/202/0/7/07d9a116d1ac547085e34a2e6287057d.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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                <title>"Humor" in Binary: Detail</title>
                <link>http://rebootmaster2001.deviantart.com/art/quot-Humor-quot-in-Binary-Detail-124146918</link>
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                <pubDate>Fri, 29 May 2009 15:56:26 PDT</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">"Humor" in Binary: Detail</media:title>
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        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">rebootmaster2001</media:credit>
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        <media:copyright url="http://rebootmaster2001.deviantart.com">Copyright 2009-2013 ~rebootmaster2001</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ Work from my Bachelor of Fine Art thesis show<br /><br />___________________________<br /><br />This is one of my favorite pieces, just because I really had a vision and passion to complete it. Here I spelled out "Humor" in Binary code using ceramic toilet paper. I threw the toilet paper on the wheel as a closed off double cylinder. It took a while, and I don&#039;t think I would have finished it if it wasn&#039;t so close to my heart. It&#039;s not the best image, it&#039;s much better seen in person.<br /><br /><a href="http://rebootmaster2001.deviantart.com/art/quot-Humor-quot-in-Binary-124146812">Complete View</a><br />___________________________<br /><br /><br />In this line of work, using everyday objects as text, I wrote out concepts which I have struggled to grasp in binary code. I chose binary code because of its simple yet complex characteristics. In binary code, you either have a &#147;1&#148; or a &#147;0&#148;. It&#146;s simply one or the other. However, when put together in a sequence they can represent characters which form words used for communication. Everything input into a computer has to be filtered through binary code. I compared this to the way people think. Everything I feel is brought into me through a language that I understand. The objects I choose may or may not make sense to everyone because it is the mental connection I make when I relate difficult concepts to my tangible, physical world. The viewer may be able to draw the same connections I do, or to their own ideas. These pieces also work as hieroglyphs in that sense, giving this body of work a bilingual quality that I enjoy. ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th01.deviantart.net/fs70/150/i/2009/357/b/f/__Humor___in_Binary__Detail_by_rebootmaster2001.jpg" height="113" width="150"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/300W/i/2009/357/b/f/__Humor___in_Binary__Detail_by_rebootmaster2001.jpg" height="225" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2009/357/b/f/__Humor___in_Binary__Detail_by_rebootmaster2001.jpg" height="768" width="1024" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ Work from my Bachelor of Fine Art thesis show<br /><br />___________________________<br /><br />This is one of my favorite pieces, just because I really had a vision and passion to complete it. Here I spelled out "Humor" in Binary code using ceramic toilet paper. I threw the toilet paper on the wheel as a closed off double cylinder. It took a while, and I don&#039;t think I would have finished it if it wasn&#039;t so close to my heart. It&#039;s not the best image, it&#039;s much better seen in person.<br /><br /><a href="http://rebootmaster2001.deviantart.com/art/quot-Humor-quot-in-Binary-124146812">Complete View</a><br />___________________________<br /><br /><br />In this line of work, using everyday objects as text, I wrote out concepts which I have struggled to grasp in binary code. I chose binary code because of its simple yet complex characteristics. In binary code, you either have a &#147;1&#148; or a &#147;0&#148;. It&#146;s simply one or the other. However, when put together in a sequence they can represent characters which form words used for communication. Everything input into a computer has to be filtered through binary code. I compared this to the way people think. Everything I feel is brought into me through a language that I understand. The objects I choose may or may not make sense to everyone because it is the mental connection I make when I relate difficult concepts to my tangible, physical world. The viewer may be able to draw the same connections I do, or to their own ideas. These pieces also work as hieroglyphs in that sense, giving this body of work a bilingual quality that I enjoy.<br /><div><img src="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/300W/i/2009/357/b/f/__Humor___in_Binary__Detail_by_rebootmaster2001.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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                <title>deviantART is NOT Flickr stamp</title>
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                <pubDate>Wed, 01 Mar 2006 06:30:00 PST</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">deviantART is NOT Flickr stamp</media:title>
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        <media:copyright url="http://deviantstamps.deviantart.com">Copyright 2006-2013 ~deviantStamps</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ <b>Group : </b> Read the comment =<a class="u" href="http://karth.deviantart.com/">karth</a> made about this stamp <img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> (see original location below).<br />
<b>Made by : </b> =<a class="u" href="http://karth.deviantart.com/">karth</a><br />
<b>Link to : </b> <a href="http://www.deviantart.com">[link]</a><br />
<br />
Original location: <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/view/29024518/">[link]</a> please <img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/p/plusfav.gif" width="15" height="16" alt=":+fav:" title="+fav" /> over there. ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs9/i/2006/060/4/3/deviantART_is_NOT_Flickr_stamp_by_deviantStamps.gif" height="56" width="99"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs9/i/2006/060/4/3/deviantART_is_NOT_Flickr_stamp_by_deviantStamps.gif" height="56" width="99"/>            <media:content url="http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs9/i/2006/060/4/3/deviantART_is_NOT_Flickr_stamp_by_deviantStamps.gif" height="56" width="99" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ <b>Group : </b> Read the comment =<a class="u" href="http://karth.deviantart.com/">karth</a> made about this stamp <img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> (see original location below).<br />
<b>Made by : </b> =<a class="u" href="http://karth.deviantart.com/">karth</a><br />
<b>Link to : </b> <a href="http://www.deviantart.com">[link]</a><br />
<br />
Original location: <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/view/29024518/">[link]</a> please <img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/p/plusfav.gif" width="15" height="16" alt=":+fav:" title="+fav" /> over there.<br /><div><img src="http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs9/i/2006/060/4/3/deviantART_is_NOT_Flickr_stamp_by_deviantStamps.gif" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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                <title>Sub-Con</title>
                <link>http://dmvcomics.deviantart.com/art/Sub-Con-95118636</link>
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                <pubDate>Sun, 17 Aug 2008 01:22:27 PDT</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">Sub-Con</media:title>
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        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">dmvcomics</media:credit>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/m/dmvcomics.png?1</media:credit> 
        <media:copyright url="http://dmvcomics.deviantart.com">Copyright 2008-2013 ~dmvcomics</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ My Super Mario Bros. piece has always gotten a great reaction-- that is by far my most popular, commented drawing.  I had a lot of fun working on that piece, and always wanted to do some sort of follow up. So I began working with something similar-- the characters of Super Mario Bros. 2 reworked in my own style. There are far more characters in this piece, and much more focus on the environment-- more so than I think any drawing I have ever worked on. I put hours and hours working on the details of this piece, making sure that optimal viewing was at 18"x24". So, needless to say, I think that the small internet version you see here takes away quite a bit. <img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/f/frown.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)" /><br /><br />I&#039;m pretty happy with it. To be honest-- I&#039;m kinda happy to be done with it. I have some other ideas floating around in my head, and I needed to get this done first!<br /><br />August, 2008<br />18" x 24"<br />Pigma Archival Ink on 18" x 24" Bristol Board<br />Colored digitally on Adobe Photoshop<br />Super Mario Bros. and all related characters &#169; Nintendo ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs31/150/f/2008/230/3/8/Sub_Con_by_dmvcomics.jpg" height="150" width="105"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th03.deviantart.net/fs31/300W/f/2008/230/3/8/Sub_Con_by_dmvcomics.jpg" height="427" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs31/f/2008/230/3/8/Sub_Con_by_dmvcomics.jpg" height="854" width="600" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ My Super Mario Bros. piece has always gotten a great reaction-- that is by far my most popular, commented drawing.  I had a lot of fun working on that piece, and always wanted to do some sort of follow up. So I began working with something similar-- the characters of Super Mario Bros. 2 reworked in my own style. There are far more characters in this piece, and much more focus on the environment-- more so than I think any drawing I have ever worked on. I put hours and hours working on the details of this piece, making sure that optimal viewing was at 18"x24". So, needless to say, I think that the small internet version you see here takes away quite a bit. <img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/f/frown.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)" /><br /><br />I&#039;m pretty happy with it. To be honest-- I&#039;m kinda happy to be done with it. I have some other ideas floating around in my head, and I needed to get this done first!<br /><br />August, 2008<br />18" x 24"<br />Pigma Archival Ink on 18" x 24" Bristol Board<br />Colored digitally on Adobe Photoshop<br />Super Mario Bros. and all related characters &#169; Nintendo<br /><div><img src="http://th03.deviantart.net/fs31/300W/f/2008/230/3/8/Sub_Con_by_dmvcomics.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
            <item>
                <title>Princess Peach</title>
                <link>http://dashmartin.deviantart.com/art/Princess-Peach-66820548</link>
                <guid isPermaLink="true">http://dashmartin.deviantart.com/art/Princess-Peach-66820548</guid>
                <pubDate>Mon, 08 Oct 2007 09:29:20 PDT</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">Princess Peach</media:title>
        <media:keywords></media:keywords>
                        <media:rating>nonadult</media:rating>
                <media:category label="Other">cartoons/digital/comics/other</media:category>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">DashMartin</media:credit>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/a/dashmartin.jpg?2</media:credit> 
        <media:copyright url="http://dashmartin.deviantart.com">Copyright 2007-2013 ~DashMartin</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ Princess Peach and Yoshi. Photoshop 7.<br /><br />==========================================<br /><br />Buy a print of this piece at: <a class="external" href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.dashmartin.com/?page_id=80">[link]</a> ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th08.deviantart.net/fs19/150/f/2007/281/e/9/Princess_Peach_by_DashMartin.jpg" height="150" width="97"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th01.deviantart.net/fs19/300W/f/2007/281/e/9/Princess_Peach_by_DashMartin.jpg" height="464" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs19/f/2007/281/e/9/Princess_Peach_by_DashMartin.jpg" height="773" width="500" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ Princess Peach and Yoshi. Photoshop 7.<br /><br />==========================================<br /><br />Buy a print of this piece at: <a class="external" href="http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.dashmartin.com/?page_id=80">[link]</a><br /><div><img src="http://th01.deviantart.net/fs19/300W/f/2007/281/e/9/Princess_Peach_by_DashMartin.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
            <item>
                <title>I'll Never Forget</title>
                <link>http://sswolfie.deviantart.com/art/I-ll-Never-Forget-109526573</link>
                <guid isPermaLink="true">http://sswolfie.deviantart.com/art/I-ll-Never-Forget-109526573</guid>
                <pubDate>Wed, 14 Jan 2009 22:43:47 PST</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">I'll Never Forget</media:title>
        <media:keywords></media:keywords>
                        <media:rating>nonadult</media:rating>
                <media:category label="Weather and Sky">photography/nature/sky</media:category>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">sswolfie</media:credit>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/s/sswolfie.jpg?7</media:credit> 
        <media:copyright url="http://sswolfie.deviantart.com">Copyright 2009-2013 ~sswolfie</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/biggrin.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th03.deviantart.net/fs41/150/i/2009/035/9/2/I__ll_Never_Forget_by_sswolfie.jpg" height="113" width="150"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th00.deviantart.net/fs41/300W/i/2009/035/9/2/I__ll_Never_Forget_by_sswolfie.jpg" height="225" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs41/i/2009/035/9/2/I__ll_Never_Forget_by_sswolfie.jpg" height="675" width="900" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/biggrin.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/><br /><div><img src="http://th00.deviantart.net/fs41/300W/i/2009/035/9/2/I__ll_Never_Forget_by_sswolfie.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
            <item>
                <title>Sanctus Infinitum</title>
                <link>http://jarofjuice.deviantart.com/art/Sanctus-Infinitum-14919808</link>
                <guid isPermaLink="true">http://jarofjuice.deviantart.com/art/Sanctus-Infinitum-14919808</guid>
                <pubDate>Mon, 07 Feb 2005 00:23:33 PST</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">Sanctus Infinitum</media:title>
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                        <media:rating>nonadult</media:rating>
                <media:category label="Exterior">photography/architecture/exterior</media:category>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">jarofjuice</media:credit>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/j/a/jarofjuice.jpg?5</media:credit> 
        <media:copyright url="http://jarofjuice.deviantart.com">Copyright 2005-2013 ~jarofjuice</media:copyright>             <creativeCommons:license>http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/</creativeCommons:license>
                <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ <b>About the pic:</b> I wanted to call this "The Road to Eternity" but I thought that Sanctus Infinitum is more suitable. Roughly translated, it means "Infinite Santuary". If anyone guesses what the the photo <b>actually</b> is (not what it represents) then I will treat you with a special gift <img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /><br />
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<b>Poem: Gregorian Anthem by Gabriel Faure</b><br />
<br />
You take my death away<br />
<br />
Libera me domine<br />
From everlasting death<br />
On that dreadful day<br />
When the earth<br />
Shall be moved<br />
When thou shalt come<br />
To judge the world<br />
I quake with fear<br />
I tremble<br />
Awaiting the day<br />
Of account and the wrath to come<br />
<br />
Libera me domine<br />
Deliver me my Master<br />
<br />
That day, the day of anger<br />
Of calamity, of misery<br />
That day, the great day<br />
And most bitter<br />
<br />
Libera me domine<br />
Deliver me my Master ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs22/150/f/2007/314/9/a/Sanctus_Infinitum_by_nawras.jpg" height="113" width="150"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs22/300W/f/2007/314/9/a/Sanctus_Infinitum_by_nawras.jpg" height="225" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs22/f/2007/314/9/a/Sanctus_Infinitum_by_nawras.jpg" height="600" width="800" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ <b>About the pic:</b> I wanted to call this "The Road to Eternity" but I thought that Sanctus Infinitum is more suitable. Roughly translated, it means "Infinite Santuary". If anyone guesses what the the photo <b>actually</b> is (not what it represents) then I will treat you with a special gift <img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/smile.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /><br />
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<br />
<b>Poem: Gregorian Anthem by Gabriel Faure</b><br />
<br />
You take my death away<br />
<br />
Libera me domine<br />
From everlasting death<br />
On that dreadful day<br />
When the earth<br />
Shall be moved<br />
When thou shalt come<br />
To judge the world<br />
I quake with fear<br />
I tremble<br />
Awaiting the day<br />
Of account and the wrath to come<br />
<br />
Libera me domine<br />
Deliver me my Master<br />
<br />
That day, the day of anger<br />
Of calamity, of misery<br />
That day, the great day<br />
And most bitter<br />
<br />
Libera me domine<br />
Deliver me my Master<br /><div><img src="http://th09.deviantart.net/fs22/300W/f/2007/314/9/a/Sanctus_Infinitum_by_nawras.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
            <item>
                <title>ULTIMATE Photography Critique</title>
                <link>http://doubtful-della.deviantart.com/art/ULTIMATE-Photography-Critique-16857827</link>
                <guid isPermaLink="true">http://doubtful-della.deviantart.com/art/ULTIMATE-Photography-Critique-16857827</guid>
                <pubDate>Mon, 04 Apr 2005 12:01:14 PDT</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">ULTIMATE Photography Critique</media:title>
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                        <media:rating>nonadult</media:rating>
                <media:category label="deviantART Tutorials">resources/tutorials/tutorials</media:category>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">Doubtful-Della</media:credit>
        <media:credit role="author" scheme="urn:ebu">http://a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/o/doubtful-della.gif</media:credit> 
        <media:copyright url="http://doubtful-della.deviantart.com">Copyright 2005-2013 `Doubtful-Della</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ I compiled this for =<a class="u" href="http://stumbleine179.deviantart.com/">stumbleine179</a>'s club, (that I co-founded) <a href="http://thephotocritic.deviantart.com/"><img class="avatar" src="http://a.deviantart.com/avatars/t/h/thephotocritic.gif" width="50" height="50" alt="" title="thephotocritic" /></a><br />
<a href="http://www.deviantart.com/view/28041650/">CLICK HERE</a> to see the full illustrated version<br />
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On a side note, if you could help get the word out there on this Critique by placing it in your journal, signiture, or just by simply faving it, it will be very much appreciated. Thank you!<br />
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Please note that this tutorial is focusing on critiquing <b>photography</b><br />
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The whole point of commenting is to express both your positive and negative thoughts on whatever piece; the positive will act as compliments on the artist, while the negative will help them realize their mistakes. When we point out mistakes, we often do not know how to say it constructively, and in the end we tend to skip the negative all together, which is a big no-no. Speaking of which, if you have received the ultimate critique, do not fret; it is not directed to you as a person. Do not take them as personal attacks, and feel all mad and confused. This should be a helpful learning tool. `<a class="u" href="http://leodadominico.deviantart.com/">leodadominico</a><br />
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If you follow this simple structure based on `<a class="u" href="http://leodadominico.deviantart.com/">leodadominico</a>s <a><u>How to give better comments</u></a>, we are sure that your comments will be helpful and appreciated.<br />
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<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletred.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> <b><i>Interpretation</i></b>- How this image makes you feel, what it says to you, how you relate to the image.<br />
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<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletred.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> <b><i>Compliments</i></b>- Now is the time to build the artists confidence by telling them exactly what you like about the photograph. Why do you love it? What caught your eye?<br />
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<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletred.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> <b><i>Critique</i></b>- Find something that might help the artist with his or her future work. Or find something that can be easily changed. It is ok to point out the errors even if you do not know the artistic term for it. Just remember to be polite.<br />
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<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletred.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> <b><i>Questions</i></b>- Learn from other artists. Is there something in the image that you dont know how it was achieved? Ask about it! This expresses a genuine interest<br />
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Now onto knowing what to look for to give a good critique:<br />
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There is no right or wrong way to give a critique. There is no order. But there are certain things that you can address to give a well-rounded and meaningful critique. We are going to address these topics:<b><br />
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1.	Message<br />
2.	Creativity<br />
3.	Technical Aspect</b><br />
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<b>1. Message</b><br />
	The parts of photography include the technical aspect, the composition, and also the emotion behind a photo. What moved a person to take this photo? Is there a hidden or double meaning? Most artists love to hear your interpretation, so make sure to take the time to really look at the image and think about it.<br />
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Some questions that you might ask yourself and comment on:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> How does this image make me feel?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> What message is conveyed in the image? <br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> How do I connect with or relate to the image?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Is there an emotion or story attached to the photo, and does the photographer do a good job conveying it?<br />
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<b>2. Creativity</b><br />
	<i>You could teach a monkey to take a picture, but it takes an artistic eye to compose one.</i> =<a class="u" href="http://stumbleine179.deviantart.com/">stumbleine179</a><br />
To create can be defined as to appoint to new rank or position. A creative image is one that stimulates the mind and eye by being both imaginative and original. Originality is one of the key factors in creative photography. Photography, does not have hard and fast rules, but composition does have a number of guidelines that can be understood, considered and applied--or not We will consider those in the technical aspect of our critique.<br />
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 If you are about to comment on a photo, it must have caught your attention.  Make sure to note why it caught your attention. Is it a different view of a commonly photographed subject? Is it a macro shot of an everyday item? Does it make light of a serious subject? Is the photo taken from a unique angle? An eagle or worm's eye viewpoint can totally change a picture's impact. Does the photo leave any elements to the imagination? <br />
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When giving a critique note this:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> What makes this image different from the rest?<br />
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<b>3. Technical Aspect</b><br />
	Yes, this is the longest section by far because there are a lot of terms involved. We will try to keep it short and simple. <b><br />
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I.	Composition<br />
II.	Colors and Lighting<br />
III.	Contrast<br />
IV.	Depth of Field<br />
V.	Perspective</b><br />
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<b>I. Composition</b><br />
	Composition is simply defined as the organization of space. Take a good look at the photograph and try to note the center of interest. Also note any distractions that you might find that you might offer up as some constructive criticism. Here is a good link to understanding parts of composition <a><br />
	<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Has the artist used the <a><i>Rule of Thirds</i></a>?<br />
	<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> How does the center of interest relate to the other parts of the image?<br />
	<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Is there a story told by the placement of the objects?<br />
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<b>II. Colors and Lighting</b><br />
	The light that falls on objects constantly changes, and thus the color. Daylight is warmer and has more reds at the beginning and the end of the day. An overcast day produces cooler bluer images than bright sunshine. Hazy sunlight gives muted colors. Filters and Photoshop can edit these colors to make certain parts of an image stand out more.<br />
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<i>Color Terms</i><br />
<b>High and Low-Key Colors</b>: High-key color pictures contain large areas of light desaturated colors (pastels) with very few middle colors or shadows. A low-key effect is created when the scene is dominated by shadows and weak lighting. Low-key pictures tend to have large areas of shadow, few highlights, and degraded colors. Naturally dark subjects are best for low-key pictures.<br />
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<b>Monochromatic</b> Monochromatic colors are all the hues (tints and shades) of a single color. As a result, the energy is more subtle and peaceful due to a lack of color contrast. <br />
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<b>Complimentary Colors</b>: Colors that are located directly across from each other on the color wheel. Complementary pairs contrast because they share no common colors.<br />
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<b>Clashing Colors</b>: Colors that do not look good near each other<br />
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<i>Lighting Terms</i><br />
<b>Ambient Light</b>: the available light completely surrounding a subject that is not introduced artificially.<br />
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<b>Diffuse Lighting</b>: lighting that is low or moderate in contrast, such as on an overcast day.<br />
<i>Studio Lighting Terms</i> Broad lighting, Short lighting, Butterfly lighting, Rembrandt lighting, Split lighting, Rim lighting. For detailed info check out <a href="http://64.78.42.182/sweethaven/MiscTech/Photog01/default.asp?unNum=7&amp;lesNum=4">This Link</a><br />
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Questions to think about:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Do these colors help convey an emotional response?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Do these colors hurt the art rather than help it?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Does the lighting create any weird shadows?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> How does the lighting harden or soften the photograph?<br />
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<b>III. Contrast</b><br />
 <i>Tonal Contrast</i><br />
	In black-and-white photography, contrast is considered either <i>high, normal</i>, or </a>low. A high-contrast scene or photograph consists primarily of white and black with few or no middle gray tones. A low-contrast (flat) scene has colors or tones in which highlights and shadows have very little difference in densities. In other words, all colors or tones within the scene are very similar in appearance. In black-and-white photography, high contrast conveys a sense of hardness and is characteristic of strength and power. Low contrast conveys a sense of softness and is characteristic of gentleness and mildness.<br />
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<i>Color Contrast</i><br />
Colors with opposite characteristics contrast strongly when placed together. Each color accentuates the qualities of the other and makes the color images stand out dramatically. Color contrast is enhanced when you create the contrast of detail against mass. Cold colors and warm colors almost always contrast. Cold colors recede, while warm colors advance. Light colors contrast against dark ones, and a bold color offsets a weak color.<br />
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Things to think about contrast:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Does the contrast make the image jump out at you, or does it convey a softer greyer feel?<br />
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<b>IV. Depth of Field</b><br />
Depth of field (DOF) is described as the range in a photograph, from near to far, that appears to be in focus. Basically A smaller depth of field would mean that the subject is in focus, and the background is not, whereas a larger depth of field would mean that the foreground and the background are in focus. Depth of field can be a great help to get rid of a confusing background, thus drawing all of your attention to the main subject. The same desired affect can be accomplished in Photoshop by using a selective blur. <br />
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When considering a photograph ask yourself:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Does the depth of field draw my attention to the main subject, or does it detract from the photo by making me wonder what is in the background?<br />
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<b>V. Perspective</b><br />
Perspective refers to the relationship of imaged objects in a photograph. This includes their relative positions and sizes and the space between them. In other words, perspective in the composition of a photograph is the way real three-dimensional objects are pictured in a photograph that has a two-dimensional plane. In photography, perspective is another illusion you use to produce photographs of quality composition. <a>Different kinds of Perspective</a><br />
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When thinking about perspective:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Does the perspective make the objects in the photograph look bunched together, or far apart?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Do the lines from the linear perspective converge at a central point, giving a strong feeling of depth? <br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> If the photo is of a building does the building look like its leaning, or does it give a powerful feeling?<br />
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"Now you have a set of tools at your fingertips to give well thought out, meaningful critique. Bear in mind however that these are only guidelines, not rules to be strictly followed. If you want to follow a rule, let it be this: Be respectful and honest. Only then can both you and the artist benefit from your critique. And both of you will." =<a class="u" href="http://saddogeyes.deviantart.com/">saddogeyes</a><br />
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Also think about what ~<a class="u" href="http://lewcid.deviantart.com/">lewcid</a> has to say as a final touch:<br />
"'Critiques are a two way street. If you want people to critique your work you have to appear receptive to it. In other words, even if you dont agree with the suggestions/opinion expressed, respect it and respond accordingly. Whatever you do, dont be blindly defensive. Try to be objective about the opinion received.<br />
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There is nothing more demoralizing for someone who just spent a long time critiquing your work, than to get a generic reply 'thank you for the comment'. Therefore try to be open to discussing the suggestions that may have been given and put some effort in to your reply, to mirror that of the person who commented on your work. <br />
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In situations where a possible flaw or improvement might have been pointed out in your work, and you agree with the assessment, show a willigness to change and improve. No one will come back to critique your work a second time around if you arent receptive.'<br />
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We hope that these tips can help you to improve and become and even more active member of the community. Have fun, and remember to be positive when giving or recieving critiques!<br />
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<b>References</b><br />
I want to give a huge thanks to:<br />
~<a class="u" href="http://lewcid.deviantart.com/">lewcid</a>s <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/16449489/"><u>Photography for Beginners</u></a><br />
`<a class="u" href="http://splat.deviantart.com/">splat</a>s <a href="http://splat.deviantart.com/journal/forum/1481/"><u>Guide to Commenting</u></a><br />
~<a class="u" href="http://procritique.deviantart.com/">ProCritique</a> <a href="http://procritique.deviantart.com/journal/3909791/"><u>Critique Standards</u></a><br />
`<a class="u" href="http://leodadominico.deviantart.com/">leodadominico</a> <a href="http://leodadominico.deviantart.com/journal/1693176/"><u>How to give better comments</u></a><br />
<a href="http://photoinf.com/">Photoinf.com</a><br />
<a href="http://www.luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/understanding-series/dof.shtml">The Luminous Landscape</a><br />
<a href="http://travel.state.gov/passport/guide/glossary/glossary_882.html">Travel.State.Gov Glossery</a><br />
<a href="http://iit.bloomu.edu/vthc/Design/monochromatic.htm">Virtual Training Help Center</a><br />
<a href="http://www.sanford-artedventures.com/study/g_complementary.html">Sanford Adventures</a><br />
<a href="http://www.findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m1306/is_2_69/ai_97235695">PSA Journal&gt; Creative Photography</a> ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th04.deviantart.net/fs6/150/i/2005/094/d/6/Give_the_ULTIMATE_Critique_by_Doubtful_Della.jpg" height="150" width="150"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th02.deviantart.net/fs6/300W/i/2005/094/d/6/Give_the_ULTIMATE_Critique_by_Doubtful_Della.jpg" height="300" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs6/i/2005/094/d/6/Give_the_ULTIMATE_Critique_by_Doubtful_Della.jpg" height="350" width="350" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ I compiled this for =<a class="u" href="http://stumbleine179.deviantart.com/">stumbleine179</a>'s club, (that I co-founded) <a href="http://thephotocritic.deviantart.com/"><img class="avatar" src="http://a.deviantart.com/avatars/t/h/thephotocritic.gif" width="50" height="50" alt="" title="thephotocritic" /></a><br />
<a href="http://www.deviantart.com/view/28041650/">CLICK HERE</a> to see the full illustrated version<br />
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On a side note, if you could help get the word out there on this Critique by placing it in your journal, signiture, or just by simply faving it, it will be very much appreciated. Thank you!<br />
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Please note that this tutorial is focusing on critiquing <b>photography</b><br />
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The whole point of commenting is to express both your positive and negative thoughts on whatever piece; the positive will act as compliments on the artist, while the negative will help them realize their mistakes. When we point out mistakes, we often do not know how to say it constructively, and in the end we tend to skip the negative all together, which is a big no-no. Speaking of which, if you have received the ultimate critique, do not fret; it is not directed to you as a person. Do not take them as personal attacks, and feel all mad and confused. This should be a helpful learning tool. `<a class="u" href="http://leodadominico.deviantart.com/">leodadominico</a><br />
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If you follow this simple structure based on `<a class="u" href="http://leodadominico.deviantart.com/">leodadominico</a>s <a><u>How to give better comments</u></a>, we are sure that your comments will be helpful and appreciated.<br />
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<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletred.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> <b><i>Interpretation</i></b>- How this image makes you feel, what it says to you, how you relate to the image.<br />
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<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletred.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> <b><i>Compliments</i></b>- Now is the time to build the artists confidence by telling them exactly what you like about the photograph. Why do you love it? What caught your eye?<br />
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<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletred.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> <b><i>Critique</i></b>- Find something that might help the artist with his or her future work. Or find something that can be easily changed. It is ok to point out the errors even if you do not know the artistic term for it. Just remember to be polite.<br />
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<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletred.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red" /> <b><i>Questions</i></b>- Learn from other artists. Is there something in the image that you dont know how it was achieved? Ask about it! This expresses a genuine interest<br />
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Now onto knowing what to look for to give a good critique:<br />
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There is no right or wrong way to give a critique. There is no order. But there are certain things that you can address to give a well-rounded and meaningful critique. We are going to address these topics:<b><br />
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1.	Message<br />
2.	Creativity<br />
3.	Technical Aspect</b><br />
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<b>1. Message</b><br />
	The parts of photography include the technical aspect, the composition, and also the emotion behind a photo. What moved a person to take this photo? Is there a hidden or double meaning? Most artists love to hear your interpretation, so make sure to take the time to really look at the image and think about it.<br />
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Some questions that you might ask yourself and comment on:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> How does this image make me feel?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> What message is conveyed in the image? <br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> How do I connect with or relate to the image?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Is there an emotion or story attached to the photo, and does the photographer do a good job conveying it?<br />
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<b>2. Creativity</b><br />
	<i>You could teach a monkey to take a picture, but it takes an artistic eye to compose one.</i> =<a class="u" href="http://stumbleine179.deviantart.com/">stumbleine179</a><br />
To create can be defined as to appoint to new rank or position. A creative image is one that stimulates the mind and eye by being both imaginative and original. Originality is one of the key factors in creative photography. Photography, does not have hard and fast rules, but composition does have a number of guidelines that can be understood, considered and applied--or not We will consider those in the technical aspect of our critique.<br />
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 If you are about to comment on a photo, it must have caught your attention.  Make sure to note why it caught your attention. Is it a different view of a commonly photographed subject? Is it a macro shot of an everyday item? Does it make light of a serious subject? Is the photo taken from a unique angle? An eagle or worm's eye viewpoint can totally change a picture's impact. Does the photo leave any elements to the imagination? <br />
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When giving a critique note this:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> What makes this image different from the rest?<br />
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<b>3. Technical Aspect</b><br />
	Yes, this is the longest section by far because there are a lot of terms involved. We will try to keep it short and simple. <b><br />
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I.	Composition<br />
II.	Colors and Lighting<br />
III.	Contrast<br />
IV.	Depth of Field<br />
V.	Perspective</b><br />
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<b>I. Composition</b><br />
	Composition is simply defined as the organization of space. Take a good look at the photograph and try to note the center of interest. Also note any distractions that you might find that you might offer up as some constructive criticism. Here is a good link to understanding parts of composition <a><br />
	<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Has the artist used the <a><i>Rule of Thirds</i></a>?<br />
	<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> How does the center of interest relate to the other parts of the image?<br />
	<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Is there a story told by the placement of the objects?<br />
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<b>II. Colors and Lighting</b><br />
	The light that falls on objects constantly changes, and thus the color. Daylight is warmer and has more reds at the beginning and the end of the day. An overcast day produces cooler bluer images than bright sunshine. Hazy sunlight gives muted colors. Filters and Photoshop can edit these colors to make certain parts of an image stand out more.<br />
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<i>Color Terms</i><br />
<b>High and Low-Key Colors</b>: High-key color pictures contain large areas of light desaturated colors (pastels) with very few middle colors or shadows. A low-key effect is created when the scene is dominated by shadows and weak lighting. Low-key pictures tend to have large areas of shadow, few highlights, and degraded colors. Naturally dark subjects are best for low-key pictures.<br />
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<b>Monochromatic</b> Monochromatic colors are all the hues (tints and shades) of a single color. As a result, the energy is more subtle and peaceful due to a lack of color contrast. <br />
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<b>Complimentary Colors</b>: Colors that are located directly across from each other on the color wheel. Complementary pairs contrast because they share no common colors.<br />
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<b>Clashing Colors</b>: Colors that do not look good near each other<br />
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<i>Lighting Terms</i><br />
<b>Ambient Light</b>: the available light completely surrounding a subject that is not introduced artificially.<br />
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<b>Diffuse Lighting</b>: lighting that is low or moderate in contrast, such as on an overcast day.<br />
<i>Studio Lighting Terms</i> Broad lighting, Short lighting, Butterfly lighting, Rembrandt lighting, Split lighting, Rim lighting. For detailed info check out <a href="http://64.78.42.182/sweethaven/MiscTech/Photog01/default.asp?unNum=7&amp;lesNum=4">This Link</a><br />
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Questions to think about:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Do these colors help convey an emotional response?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Do these colors hurt the art rather than help it?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Does the lighting create any weird shadows?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> How does the lighting harden or soften the photograph?<br />
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<b>III. Contrast</b><br />
 <i>Tonal Contrast</i><br />
	In black-and-white photography, contrast is considered either <i>high, normal</i>, or </a>low. A high-contrast scene or photograph consists primarily of white and black with few or no middle gray tones. A low-contrast (flat) scene has colors or tones in which highlights and shadows have very little difference in densities. In other words, all colors or tones within the scene are very similar in appearance. In black-and-white photography, high contrast conveys a sense of hardness and is characteristic of strength and power. Low contrast conveys a sense of softness and is characteristic of gentleness and mildness.<br />
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<i>Color Contrast</i><br />
Colors with opposite characteristics contrast strongly when placed together. Each color accentuates the qualities of the other and makes the color images stand out dramatically. Color contrast is enhanced when you create the contrast of detail against mass. Cold colors and warm colors almost always contrast. Cold colors recede, while warm colors advance. Light colors contrast against dark ones, and a bold color offsets a weak color.<br />
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Things to think about contrast:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Does the contrast make the image jump out at you, or does it convey a softer greyer feel?<br />
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<b>IV. Depth of Field</b><br />
Depth of field (DOF) is described as the range in a photograph, from near to far, that appears to be in focus. Basically A smaller depth of field would mean that the subject is in focus, and the background is not, whereas a larger depth of field would mean that the foreground and the background are in focus. Depth of field can be a great help to get rid of a confusing background, thus drawing all of your attention to the main subject. The same desired affect can be accomplished in Photoshop by using a selective blur. <br />
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When considering a photograph ask yourself:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Does the depth of field draw my attention to the main subject, or does it detract from the photo by making me wonder what is in the background?<br />
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<b>V. Perspective</b><br />
Perspective refers to the relationship of imaged objects in a photograph. This includes their relative positions and sizes and the space between them. In other words, perspective in the composition of a photograph is the way real three-dimensional objects are pictured in a photograph that has a two-dimensional plane. In photography, perspective is another illusion you use to produce photographs of quality composition. <a>Different kinds of Perspective</a><br />
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When thinking about perspective:<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Does the perspective make the objects in the photograph look bunched together, or far apart?<br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> Do the lines from the linear perspective converge at a central point, giving a strong feeling of depth? <br />
<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/bulletblue.gif" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue" /> If the photo is of a building does the building look like its leaning, or does it give a powerful feeling?<br />
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"Now you have a set of tools at your fingertips to give well thought out, meaningful critique. Bear in mind however that these are only guidelines, not rules to be strictly followed. If you want to follow a rule, let it be this: Be respectful and honest. Only then can both you and the artist benefit from your critique. And both of you will." =<a class="u" href="http://saddogeyes.deviantart.com/">saddogeyes</a><br />
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Also think about what ~<a class="u" href="http://lewcid.deviantart.com/">lewcid</a> has to say as a final touch:<br />
"'Critiques are a two way street. If you want people to critique your work you have to appear receptive to it. In other words, even if you dont agree with the suggestions/opinion expressed, respect it and respond accordingly. Whatever you do, dont be blindly defensive. Try to be objective about the opinion received.<br />
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There is nothing more demoralizing for someone who just spent a long time critiquing your work, than to get a generic reply 'thank you for the comment'. Therefore try to be open to discussing the suggestions that may have been given and put some effort in to your reply, to mirror that of the person who commented on your work. <br />
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In situations where a possible flaw or improvement might have been pointed out in your work, and you agree with the assessment, show a willigness to change and improve. No one will come back to critique your work a second time around if you arent receptive.'<br />
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We hope that these tips can help you to improve and become and even more active member of the community. Have fun, and remember to be positive when giving or recieving critiques!<br />
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<b>References</b><br />
I want to give a huge thanks to:<br />
~<a class="u" href="http://lewcid.deviantart.com/">lewcid</a>s <a href="http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/16449489/"><u>Photography for Beginners</u></a><br />
`<a class="u" href="http://splat.deviantart.com/">splat</a>s <a href="http://splat.deviantart.com/journal/forum/1481/"><u>Guide to Commenting</u></a><br />
~<a class="u" href="http://procritique.deviantart.com/">ProCritique</a> <a href="http://procritique.deviantart.com/journal/3909791/"><u>Critique Standards</u></a><br />
`<a class="u" href="http://leodadominico.deviantart.com/">leodadominico</a> <a href="http://leodadominico.deviantart.com/journal/1693176/"><u>How to give better comments</u></a><br />
<a href="http://photoinf.com/">Photoinf.com</a><br />
<a href="http://www.luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/understanding-series/dof.shtml">The Luminous Landscape</a><br />
<a href="http://travel.state.gov/passport/guide/glossary/glossary_882.html">Travel.State.Gov Glossery</a><br />
<a href="http://iit.bloomu.edu/vthc/Design/monochromatic.htm">Virtual Training Help Center</a><br />
<a href="http://www.sanford-artedventures.com/study/g_complementary.html">Sanford Adventures</a><br />
<a href="http://www.findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m1306/is_2_69/ai_97235695">PSA Journal&gt; Creative Photography</a><br /><div><img src="http://th02.deviantart.net/fs6/300W/i/2005/094/d/6/Give_the_ULTIMATE_Critique_by_Doubtful_Della.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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        <media:copyright url="http://alyn.deviantart.com">Copyright 2005-2013 `alyn</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ This is my poetry submission for a competition.  Don&#039;t worry, it&#039;s more or less a one off (unless something similar crops up in future)... so I won&#039;t be trading my photoshop boots for a caligraphy set.<br /><br />I affixed this following explanation to the poem entry to clear up "grey areas" (I quietly don&#039;t believe the judges are competent enough to appreciate the poem).<br /><br /><br /><br /><i>With this submission I feel a need to explain the processes that were involved into the creation.  I simply do not believe that it would be possible to appreciate wholly the poem in its entirety without some sort of explanation.<br /><br />The theme was carefully chosen to avoid the clich&#233;.  The poem is effectively a short story depicting a man who, initially Godless, chooses to make prayer on his deathbed so to escape going to hell.  It tackles the point that it&#146;s entirely hypocritical to denounce God during life then expect him to save you later.  God is not here to be used when it suits you.<br /><br />I initially aimed for a free verse effect.  No specific structure, no obvious meter or rhyming system.  However, several attempts at this led me to come to the conclusion that enveloping my ideas with some sort of loose structure would better the fluidity and readability of the poem.  So, I encapsulated the words with the following style:<br /><br />Line 1 : A familiar phonetic adverb (commonly ending in &#147;ly&#148; for repetition and common factors in stanza) &#150; reflects the tonality of the stanza.<br />Line 2 : Free rein is given for this line<br />Line 3 : Free rein is given for this line<br />Line 4 : Free rein is given for this line<br />Line 5 : Free rein as long as it rhymes with the ending of line 3. (rhyming couples introduced).<br />Line 6 : Free rein as long as begins with second person pronoun &#147;you&#148;<br />Line 7 : Bracketed, begins with (in fear &#133<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/wink.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" /> &#150; broken for last stanza as symbolic of more upbeat tone.  Brackets depict how it&#146;s less &#147;said&#148;, but added as more of an afterthought, depicting the real reasons behind actions.<br />Line 8 : Short, structured with &#147;&#133; divine &#133;&#148; &#150; word following divine ends in &#147;tion&#148; for repetition and common factor in stanza.<br /><br />It boils down to a regular 8 line per stanza poem, but with a unique twist in how each line is presented when looking at the poem as a whole, giving room for a good degree of repetition, rhyming, and unique flair. The poem also demonstrates visual symmetry.<br /><br />In stanza 1, there is reference to the &#147;immaculate conception&#148; by means of opposites.  There is no word &#147;in-immaculate&#148; or &#147;un-immaculate&#148;, and this is purely intended to be symbolic.<br /><br />Instead of &#147;you&#148; &#150; poem initially used &#147;him&#148; and &#147;his&#148;.  However, this caused conflict when referring to God as him/his in the same stanza.  I concluded that changing to &#147;you&#148; and &#147;your&#148; would involve the reader more in any case, holding attention for longer (although at the slight sacrifice of the &#147;story&#148; effect).<br /><br />I hesitate before going into any more detail on this, since I don&#146;t want your own conclusions and ideas drawn from the poem to be clouded by my explanation.  But what is presented above is more-over a clearing up of what would initially come across as grey areas.<br /><br /><br />Glossary :<br /><br />Numen = God or divine spirit.<br />Ipsissimis Verbis = Word for Word<br />Verbatim et Literatim = Word for Word (different way of saying it, used for subtle repetition).<br /></i><br /><br /><br /><br />Something different from me, I may move to scraps after a day or so, depending on how well it&#039;s received.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><b>PLEASE NO IN DEPTH CRITICISMS</b> - not saying I can&#039;t take it, but I&#039;d like to think that this is an entry I&#039;m finished with, and I&#039;d rather have no regrets about submitting it as it is.  <b>DO NOT IGNORE THIS</b>. ]]></media:description>        
        <media:text type="html"><![CDATA[ Mind the deity on your way out.<br /><br />Readily,<br />Denouncing God in all his supremacy,<br />Since your in-immaculate conception.<br />One near lifetime of ignorance,<br />Parental misdirection?<br />You denied yourself a Christianity<br />(In fear of an enlightened future)<br />And divine revelation.<br /><br />Decisively,<br />Chalking it up to the way the world works,<br />No sense of the omnipotent presence,<br />Peace of mind in religious chastity.<br />Leading a diminutive existence without essence,<br />You claim no need of a numen,<br />(In fear of something of substance?)<br />Or divine manifestation<br /><br />Undeniably,<br />As time passes irrevocably,<br />And age marks your guise with disdain,<br />Seeds of doubt sown  ]]></media:text>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th06.deviantart.net/fs6/300W/i/2005/067/a/e/Mind_the_deity_on_your_way_out_by_alyn.jpg" height="437" width="300"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th05.deviantart.net/fs6/150/i/2005/067/a/e/Mind_the_deity_on_your_way_out_by_alyn.jpg" height="150" width="103"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ This is my poetry submission for a competition.  Don&#039;t worry, it&#039;s more or less a one off (unless something similar crops up in future)... so I won&#039;t be trading my photoshop boots for a caligraphy set.<br /><br />I affixed this following explanation to the poem entry to clear up "grey areas" (I quietly don&#039;t believe the judges are competent enough to appreciate the poem).<br /><br /><br /><br /><i>With this submission I feel a need to explain the processes that were involved into the creation.  I simply do not believe that it would be possible to appreciate wholly the poem in its entirety without some sort of explanation.<br /><br />The theme was carefully chosen to avoid the clich&#233;.  The poem is effectively a short story depicting a man who, initially Godless, chooses to make prayer on his deathbed so to escape going to hell.  It tackles the point that it&#146;s entirely hypocritical to denounce God during life then expect him to save you later.  God is not here to be used when it suits you.<br /><br />I initially aimed for a free verse effect.  No specific structure, no obvious meter or rhyming system.  However, several attempts at this led me to come to the conclusion that enveloping my ideas with some sort of loose structure would better the fluidity and readability of the poem.  So, I encapsulated the words with the following style:<br /><br />Line 1 : A familiar phonetic adverb (commonly ending in &#147;ly&#148; for repetition and common factors in stanza) &#150; reflects the tonality of the stanza.<br />Line 2 : Free rein is given for this line<br />Line 3 : Free rein is given for this line<br />Line 4 : Free rein is given for this line<br />Line 5 : Free rein as long as it rhymes with the ending of line 3. (rhyming couples introduced).<br />Line 6 : Free rein as long as begins with second person pronoun &#147;you&#148;<br />Line 7 : Bracketed, begins with (in fear &#133<img src="http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/wink.gif" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" /> &#150; broken for last stanza as symbolic of more upbeat tone.  Brackets depict how it&#146;s less &#147;said&#148;, but added as more of an afterthought, depicting the real reasons behind actions.<br />Line 8 : Short, structured with &#147;&#133; divine &#133;&#148; &#150; word following divine ends in &#147;tion&#148; for repetition and common factor in stanza.<br /><br />It boils down to a regular 8 line per stanza poem, but with a unique twist in how each line is presented when looking at the poem as a whole, giving room for a good degree of repetition, rhyming, and unique flair. The poem also demonstrates visual symmetry.<br /><br />In stanza 1, there is reference to the &#147;immaculate conception&#148; by means of opposites.  There is no word &#147;in-immaculate&#148; or &#147;un-immaculate&#148;, and this is purely intended to be symbolic.<br /><br />Instead of &#147;you&#148; &#150; poem initially used &#147;him&#148; and &#147;his&#148;.  However, this caused conflict when referring to God as him/his in the same stanza.  I concluded that changing to &#147;you&#148; and &#147;your&#148; would involve the reader more in any case, holding attention for longer (although at the slight sacrifice of the &#147;story&#148; effect).<br /><br />I hesitate before going into any more detail on this, since I don&#146;t want your own conclusions and ideas drawn from the poem to be clouded by my explanation.  But what is presented above is more-over a clearing up of what would initially come across as grey areas.<br /><br /><br />Glossary :<br /><br />Numen = God or divine spirit.<br />Ipsissimis Verbis = Word for Word<br />Verbatim et Literatim = Word for Word (different way of saying it, used for subtle repetition).<br /></i><br /><br /><br /><br />Something different from me, I may move to scraps after a day or so, depending on how well it&#039;s received.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><b>PLEASE NO IN DEPTH CRITICISMS</b> - not saying I can&#039;t take it, but I&#039;d like to think that this is an entry I&#039;m finished with, and I&#039;d rather have no regrets about submitting it as it is.  <b>DO NOT IGNORE THIS</b>.<br /><div><img src="http://th05.deviantart.net/fs6/150/i/2005/067/a/e/Mind_the_deity_on_your_way_out_by_alyn.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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                <title>Hold Yourself Together</title>
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                <pubDate>Thu, 11 Nov 2004 12:58:01 PST</pubDate>
                        <media:title type="plain">Hold Yourself Together</media:title>
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        <media:copyright url="http://genni.deviantart.com">Copyright 2004-2013 ~genni</media:copyright>            <media:description type="html"><![CDATA[ I wanted to do a different style of self portraiture and make it original and meaningful as well as encorporate my love of photography and drawing. The use of my hands holding the picture together is supposed to symbolize how many people like to keep everything in their lives together by themselves(including myself), and the sullen look on my face represents how trying to 'hold yourself together' can be emotionally straining. It's impossible to be perfect or to keep everything together on your own. That's sort of the general idea behind the portrait.<br /><br />Medium: graphite<br />Size: 14"X 20"<br />Tools: Staedtler Mars Lumograph graphite pencils (HB, 2B, 4B, 6B, 8B&lt;--I used an entire 8B doing the background <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/whew.gif" width="25" height="17" alt=":phew:" title="Phew!"/>), kneaded eraser, masking tape, tissue, blending stump<br />Time: I didn't really count, but I'd estimate...about 15-20 hours, the longest I've ever taken on a drawing ]]></media:description>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th01.deviantart.net/fs6/150/i/2005/077/8/9/Hold_Yourself_Together_by_genni.jpg" height="150" width="114"/>            <media:thumbnail url="http://th03.deviantart.net/fs6/300W/i/2005/077/8/9/Hold_Yourself_Together_by_genni.jpg" height="394" width="300"/>            <media:content url="http://th00.deviantart.net/fs6/PRE/i/2005/077/8/9/Hold_Yourself_Together_by_genni.jpg" height="1025" width="780" medium="image"/>            
            <description><![CDATA[ I wanted to do a different style of self portraiture and make it original and meaningful as well as encorporate my love of photography and drawing. The use of my hands holding the picture together is supposed to symbolize how many people like to keep everything in their lives together by themselves(including myself), and the sullen look on my face represents how trying to 'hold yourself together' can be emotionally straining. It's impossible to be perfect or to keep everything together on your own. That's sort of the general idea behind the portrait.<br /><br />Medium: graphite<br />Size: 14"X 20"<br />Tools: Staedtler Mars Lumograph graphite pencils (HB, 2B, 4B, 6B, 8B&lt;--I used an entire 8B doing the background <img src="http://e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/whew.gif" width="25" height="17" alt=":phew:" title="Phew!"/>), kneaded eraser, masking tape, tissue, blending stump<br />Time: I didn't really count, but I'd estimate...about 15-20 hours, the longest I've ever taken on a drawing<br /><div><img src="http://th03.deviantart.net/fs6/300W/i/2005/077/8/9/Hold_Yourself_Together_by_genni.jpg" alt="thumbnail" /></div> ]]></description>            </item>
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