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Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p00

Tue, 29 May 2007 14:59:58 PDT

all SM-CS pages/chapters can be downloaded as a batch here: Chapter 01-06 50mb

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 00

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oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, it's here!
Sailor Moon CS - Chapter2! Of course it's only the cover page for now^^

as you can tell the artwork improved A LOT if you compare this cover with the first one [link]

If you want to read the first chapter from page 1, please klick here: [link]

Or download it all together at rapidshare
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The Rapidshare version includes the whole first chapter, 2 artwork pictures, and a nice little disclaimer txt XP
BUT i corrected some mistakes, for example i added Luna's whiskers(stupid me, i forgot them almost everytime) and i changed their eyes in the first few pages to look like the eyes in the later pagers
So if you haven't already downloaded every page, but want to look at the comic everytime you want, download it now in one go

now all i can say is: Look at the pretty cover and wait for pages one and two^^

Sailor Mercurys design:
As you can tell i have changed her design a little bit compared to the old sailormercury-CS design, especially the boots. The old boots i designed for her were kinda a "for now" idea. These boots here suits her better than the old ones.

Random notes:
-Yes, that's her "Tiara action"(jp) "Mondstein"(german) she's using on the cover, you can probably guess what that means.(even though i won't call it "tiara action" because Sailormoon-CS doesn't wear a tiara XP)
-I Can't wait to draw Mercury attack, i love to draw ice after i learned how to do it!
-The art looks now more like american-comics, that was my idea the whole time, even though i didn't managed to do it in chapter1 (i suck!)
-The art in the actual chapter will look like mercury here, not like moon in the background. The Sailor moon in the bg is supposed to look sketchy on purpose

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p01-02

Fri, 08 Jun 2007 18:23:42 PDT

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 01-02

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Finally, the next two pages, the first real pages from chapter2
I like how they turned out, i was afraid that i couldn't manage to the the same art as in the cover. Well, i was right, i couldn't, that's why it took so long for these two pages^^" but i managed to do it today somehow(i worked over 10 hours straight on the coloring, it's 3am right now in germany...)

ANYWAY~ A lot of development here, you can see designs from other demons, you can see queen beryl, you can see Jadeite(kinda^^) and the base from the evil guys

Now for some side infos:
-I changed Queen Beryl that much because i never liked her design in the original series. I like my evil girls with straight hair. I also never liked her glass sphere. I gave her a extended dress because i think it looks cool...
-Jadeite is wearing a cloak for a reason. Have you ever noticed that all the demons in the background(just like here in my comic) were wearing cloaks(or something similar) all the time when they were in their base? I thought "hey, that is cool. The 4 guys should wear them too". And i think it looks cool. Bad guys need to wear something similar to hide their faces, it's...like a law in anime
-Most of the demons here a human size, if you haven't noticed already. There's a good reason for that, but i won't tell you.^^ Oh, and if you can tell, the first panel is actually a HUUUGE cave. The spots on the stairs are normal size demons. that means the thing in the background with the wings is around ~50 meters tall. That guy is HUGE! But i guess he will never be important to the story line XP Maybe

One last thing: I like photoshop effects *red glowing rulez*

hope you enjoy it!

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p03-04

Fri, 31 Aug 2007 20:12:03 PDT

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Yeah, after a painfull two months the next two pages are up!
Man, I'm just glad that's over it. I had many sketches and scripts for these two pages, yet none of them were good. But some days ago finally some inspiration came to me and i was able to finish the script and draw these pages XD

You can finally see Jadeite, pretty much the same as the original, except COOL

And finally some talking. You probably think "yeah, we already know this stuff they are talking about" BUT there is a lot of hidden context in there you won't get until we get to chapter 10 or something XP i'm evil T_T

hope you enjoy it!

p.s.: Jadeite still looks like a Jedi... Jedi Jadeite

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p05-06

Mon, 24 Sep 2007 23:28:36 PDT

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Finally this is finished, i worked on it this whole week
i like how it turned out, all the pretty colours~

anyway, i said back in chapter1 that in chapter2 a lot of unanswered questions would be...well, answered. But i guess i fooled you a little XP but it's more exciting this way(and i had to use two more pages of talking about stuff which would have been kinda boring imo)

anyway, i hope you like it, and look forward to the next two pages, because someone we all know appears in a completely new design! Or with the same design, i haven't decided yet...

anyway, look forward to it^^

p.s.: if you find mistakes in my english in the comic, please tell me so i can fix it^^

p.p.s.: Now you can see narus mom XP and as you can see, yes, the monster last chapter indeed ripped of her arm, ouch...

[edit] i corrected the mistakes, thx! [/edit]

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p07-08

Sun, 14 Oct 2007 08:46:10 PDT

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took some time, but i guess you are used to it by now^^"

so now you know how umino looks like in CS XD i like his new design, he actually looks...normal, even though he still does have his thick round geek glasses^^
And if you don't know who that other girl is, well, it's my fault, because i totally changed her design and she was a minor side character anyway. Maybe you can remember this one fat chick from usagis clique? Yeah, that's her. I drew her thin because...it takes me a lot of time to draw this comic, so i want to at least draw cute girls instead of overweight ones... and now she's a cute tomboy, it's better that way, right? XD

i took a lot of the talking from the original show, because most of this chapter is similar to the original episode.

The names from the result board are't made up. They are from the hikaru-no-go manga, i always steal names from this when i don't know any japanese names

p.s.: if you find mistakes in my english in the comic, please tell me so i can fix it^^

p.p.s.: My umino without glasses looks actually really good, i love his hair!

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p09-10

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 09:52:32 PDT

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Well, here is AMI! *TADA*

and i've corrected my mistakes with the eyes, sorry for the previous page^^"
i don't think you have noticed yet, but i changed usagis hairstyle once again, i like it now way better and it's easier to draw^^ but ami's hair is still a bugger, but i will get used to it, right?

oh, and i suck at perspective/backgrounds XP don't ask me how to improve that, i don't know. I tried and i failed

and and...wait, that's it...hope you enjoy that pic^^

p.s.: i don't think i will be able to fit the whole second chapter into 25 pages like i planned^^" maybe i should think about smaller panels?

p.p.s.: the next page will have original content again *jai*

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p11-12

Fri, 16 Nov 2007 10:44:38 PST

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 11-12

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Finally, sorry for the long wait, but i was sick and stuff. i'm still not at my normal schedule, but it is going well right now. Anyway, here is it. You probably expected something else to happen in the comic now, but well, you have to wait for another week XP

these pages this week are kinda special. Because all of them...well, mostly...are original characters. They won't play a big part in the comic, but they will appear now and then, so you should probably get used to the XP even though it will be another year before they appear again...

there is so much text here, everything written by me, so there are probably many mistakes here and there, so please notify me if something is wrong T_T i'm after all a german who learned english through mangas...no joke, i didn't learn a single english word in school, teachers can't teach my anything right...

anyway, next week will continue with the usuall story you all know from tv. but i still hope you like this page XD after all i spend hours drawing the first panel from the second page, i hate drawing perspective stuff

p.s.: it was fun trying to explain certain stuff from fictional animes XP

[edit] corrected some mistakes [/edit]

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p13-14

Thu, 28 Feb 2008 09:51:10 PST

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 13-14

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THE WAIT IS OVER! Here are the two next pages!

Just like i said in my journal(on dev.) i will upload the next 2 pages in two days(so you have time to comment on THIS one XD)

and i can tell you, this chapter will be AWESOME!(for my standards^^")

you all probably remember this scene from the anime, i just HAD TO put this one in. Actually, a lot of scenes from this chapter will be pretty similar to the original.

Anyway, hope you enjoy it^^

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p15-16

Sat, 01 Mar 2008 04:15:41 PST

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 15-16

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So, as promised, here are the next 2 pages

i was planing for a long time to do this scene too, i like these two pages a lot

and just wait a little, the next two pages will include a lot of awesome stuff! So look forward to it in two days!

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p17-18

Sun, 02 Mar 2008 19:44:35 PST

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 17-18

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So here it is, the introduction of Motoki and MAMORU!!
Yeah, that is mamoru, kinda different than from his original self, right? I kinda screwed his face up in the first panel too, because i didn't do a character-design-sketch before drawing him here. Well, he will look better, like his face in the third panel.

i really like these pages, especially the fourth panel of page 17(the first one, the right one)

and if you were wondering "why isn't it a sailor-v game?" well...i could say "you can find out later" but that isn't such a big secret. In my version, no one really knows how sailor-v looks like etc. and it's a bit more realistic than the original manga/anime, so no v game here. The game that IS played here is a game version from my original manga "demon-path"(kinda clichee name, right?). I just wanted to throw that in. Unlike the sailor-v game, this here is a mix of a fighting game and a beat-them-up game.

I wanted motoki to look like a modern bishie, but i kinda screwed his hair up, he looked better in the sketches i made...

i know the pace is really fast here, but i can't waste 6 pages for character introduction, sorry T_T

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p19-20

Wed, 05 Mar 2008 07:07:50 PST

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the next two pages, and the last ones until...don't know, next week maybe. These 8 pages were the only ones i were able to do in those three months.

at least the action will start after the next page XP

this page re-introduce human-luna, i was waiting to draw her again for some time now, but her cat appearence was neccesary.

and another explanation for the transformation. I told you that a lot of stuff will be explained this chapter.

and honestly, the last panel joke is stolen from "bleach", it just fitted perfectly for this scene...and it's funny...right?

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p21-22

Fri, 21 Mar 2008 01:39:57 PDT

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 21-22

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finally the action begins
and a new (little) transformation sequenz. Even though i've to admit that every transformation sequenz will be that short from now on(i can't waste every chapter 4-6 pages just for a transformation, sorry^^")

and i just have to apologize again, even if you may not notice it, but i'm sorry for the fast pace i'm going with right now. Actually the second page here was supposed to be 2 pages long, not just one, and that's like with every page from now on. But i can't have a chapter with 100 pages, i will never finish sailormoon-cs like that^^"

well, i still like it, and i hope you like it too

randomnote: the joke with the "did you have to add the beautiful part" was taken from the original anime, i just loved that joke so much, i had to copy it!

p.s.: i like usagis and lunas outfits here, usagi is very cute and luna just sexy!

spoiler: the next two pages will contain sailormoon, the demon in a half-awakened form and lunas weapon!(!!) even though i tell you better now than later: I can't draw weapons!! T_T

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p23-24

Sun, 30 Mar 2008 17:37:46 PDT

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sorry for the wait, but i had to redraw some panels of it because they looked really really bad. But now its better^^

Finally the demon shows its real form, or some of it. In the anime version the monster transformed in one second into their real form, but i wanted it to stretch a little.

Just like i said last time, i had to shorten it a little, in the real script the demon was talking about the difference between the demons, that some of them are strength/instinct based and others knowledge based, and that it why some of them can speak normal and others can't, well, yeah...now she just says "don't put me on the same level as him"...well, it still sounds cool, right? (i love this line in every action comic)

sailormoon finally appears in chapter2 (even though she doesn't look very much different than her real look XP)

and finally luna's weapon, the weapon she originally wanted to summon in chapter1 page 26
and i warned you, i can't draw weapons!! If you can't figure out what her weapon is, don't worry, it's a scythe

i tried a new way to "color" their eyes, and i must say, i. like. it.!

i also like those two pages, i think they turned out very well

and sorry for the pantyshot in the last panel, but i had to do it at least ONCE, right? You may realize now, that compared to chapter1 i have done a lot less pantyshots, that's because uti-chan() one of the most perverted sailormoon artist i know told me i had too many pantyshots, and that was already enough for me to know i had REALLY too many.

anyway, i talked too much, less talking more drawing, right?

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p25-26

Wed, 02 Apr 2008 11:07:44 PDT

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[minor edit]
corrected the symbol for "mercury"
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just like i promised, in order for you guys to forgive me for the horrible april fools joke, here the next two pages! Now i need to sleep...a lot....

the first thing i want to say is: I TOLD YOU I CAN'T DRAW WEAPONS! ¬.¬ so don't expect any good fights with luna and Mask, they aren't important for the main fight anyway. --.--
i like my magic explosions...

anyway
there is something i want from you guys
the first panel, the outlines from this panel were drawn with a different method than my usual method. Now, can you tell any difference, and if you can, does it look better or worse or the just the same?

now on to the main topic: JADEITE
he finally appears with no shadows or cloak to hide something. As you can tell, he (still) looks mostly the same as his anime counterpart. But that will change, don't worry XD i love changing the appearence of a character in a series.

And also NEXT PAGE SAILOR MERCURY!!! *woot* but don't expect any big transformation sequence T_T

hope you like it, i now sleep, kibate tired...

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p27-28

Sun, 06 Apr 2008 16:26:25 PDT

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so, here it is, SAILOR MERCURY! *applause*
like i said, not a big transformation scene, but a cool one non the less

i've waited since the cover of chapter2 for this page to happen, i wanted to draw the ice again, and i still liiike it!

my favourite panel would be panel1 of the second(the left one) page, and second favourite would be the second panel of the same page
the second panel of the second page, the one with jadeite going "sailor mercury? I have to kill them" was actually a last minute change. The original picture there was a reaaaly lame one, so i decided to redraw it, and THIS came out.

oh, and, mask appears XP but don't worry, unlike chapter1 he won't steal the spotlight this time.

as you can see, i had sailor mercury come out of ice, i had this idea of shiva from final fantasy8.

and now i need to sleep....well, i would have to, but i need to go to school in 4 hours. I spent the whole night drawing this *yawn*

anyway, hope you like it!

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p29-30

Thu, 10 Apr 2008 23:53:29 PDT

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 29-30

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another page, with a little action here and a little joke there.

my favourite panel would be the very first one, i love how i did mask here, wayyy better than in chapter1
and i know, i should have waited in drawing masks eye, but i just wanted to do it >.<

and you can finally see the monsters full finished appearence. It seems like only my brother was able to notice that she was transforming into a snake, no one else mentioned that. XP

i used the term "master" for the relationship between usagi and luna here, because it just seem to me like a student-master relationship in sailormoonCS

and the last two panels: I don't want to be in Usagis shoes here, that gotta hurt

p.s.: only four more updates(8 pages) to go!

spoiler: the next update will contain some action scenes! And jadeite will finally do something!

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p31-32

Sun, 13 Apr 2008 18:55:29 PDT

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 31-32

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i like a lot of those panels, especially the first two again
but the fog is kinda annoying, you can't see my awesome art like that! *just joking*

so you can see how her weapon looks like here. Yes, it's a bone sword(kimimaro anyone?). In the original she had a axe like weapon, but i thought it weird that the youma was able to create new mass of her body.

usagi seem to be ok ^_^ aside from a little bruise and some blood.

oh, and, you won't get to see jadeite fighting at all XP well, not in this chapter

the next two pages will be my favourite ones from this chapter, mainly because usagi will have a very cool moment then

like always, hope you enjoy it.

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p33-34

Thu, 17 Apr 2008 21:42:42 PDT

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ah, finally, the page i waiting to do this whole time^^

Moon finally does her real attack, in a very shonen way.
Because she doesn't have a tiara in my version and because her attack looks like a ki-attack anyway, i made it like that.

i also like the third panel in the first page

i have actually redrawn the flashback in panel2, because let's face it, compared to chapter2, the art in chapter1 was baaad~
the panel i'm talking about is on page44 here [link]

hope you like it^^

only two more updates(4 pages) to go! Then i can finally start on chapter3! *woot*

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p35-36

Mon, 21 Apr 2008 23:10:27 PDT

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 35-36

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only one more update to go to finish the second chapter, then i can finally start on working on the third chapter.

So, Sailormoons fight is over, the monster is dead. I will leave it to you to discuss why the monster looks like that in the fourth panel
(and if you can't tell, the kids in panel5 are falling down... i didn't know how to draw it without spending more than one panel...)

i had a really difficult time to decide how to draw the last panel in the first page(page 35, the right one) i hope it turned out ok...

the second page is finally some action with jadeite and mask, but its already the end of the fight... don't worry, you will get enough jadeite action in chapter3 and mask action in chapter 4 and especially chapter 5. (Im already talking about ch.5 even though i haven't even finished chapter2 yet...)

yes, those plant things are done by mask! A new ability for our nice anti-hero! But don't worry, he can throw roses too if he wants to

AND FINALLY the scar of jadeite! This will be the first time in this comic here where a character will change his appearence! I like stuff like that, because this makes it seem more interresting. Yes, i spoiled it for you, his scar will remain, but its just soo much fun XD

And yes, i just had to make that southpark reference! Even though i already wrote the script some time ago, i never seemed to find the right words for jadeite to say in that panel, but then after coloring i somehow knew that this would fit perfectly in!
Of course, anyone who never watched that specific southpark episode won't get the parody...(even though they will probably still laugh)

that's it from me.

p.s.: Don't know why, but i was inspired a little by onepiece for the facial expressions in those last few pages i did...maybe you noticed something was different?

p.p.s.: I would have finished those pages sooner, but i had to work overtime again.

Sailor Moon CS - ch2 p37-38

Thu, 24 Apr 2008 19:51:04 PDT

Sailor Moon CS - the Comic, Chapter 2 Page 37-38

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Finally, the end of chapter2!

Oh holy...it took me almost ONE YEAR to finish this chapter...at this rate i won't even be able to finish the first arc before i die >.< (well, at least i'm faster than megatokyo)

Well, a lot has happened. Especially regarding the art in this comic. It has improved a lot during these past two years. And it will improve even more! Chapter 3 will have a new look once again! Better, BETTER, EVEN BETTER! *uahahaha*
*cough*
anyway
hope you had fun until now
i will try to draw even more now, but i can't promise anything^^" having a real life suckz...

and i hope for the next year that my readers will increase! I've only got around 350 right now...There are so many sailormoon fans out there, where are they now? This is a full-colored, weekly, modern rewriting of a classic anime, not to mention FREE. ¬.¬
well, they will come when i'm popular and rich and then i will LAUGH IN THEIR FACE! ... or probably not, but you know what i mean

i hope you liked it so far(as i can tell by your nice comments^^) and hope you will continue reading it!

p.s.: give me some time to plan chapter3, ok?^^"

p.p.s.: The anime moon is talking about is DragonballZ

Short description of the name "Moonstone":
In the original japanese version sailormoons attack was called "tiara action"
But i there was no need to even think about putting that in here, because she doesn't even wear a tiara in my version.
In germany she called during her attack "mondstein, flieg und sieg!" rough translation: "Moonstone, fly and win!"
even though the "fly and win" part sounds really stupid, i liked the name "moonstone" as an attack. So i decided to use that alone.(without moon sreaming it out everytime she does that attack)